5 bars due asap.
5 bars due asap.
I'll try to drop before midnight...
I'd Like To See Him Flee From Me, Its Nearly A Risk
& He Tried A Hands On Approach For This Battle... & Left With Barely A Wrist
See I Called Him Out On A Dare Since He's My Favorite Bum
But Between Him, MI, & Complex... Lucky Me He's The Weakest One
He's Been Leading By Example & Trying To Pay His Dues
....At Last He's A Motivater
Coz He Called Out The Veterans & Got A Thread Full Of Noobs
See Its Hunting Season, & This Time Around I Usually Hunt Wack Cats
But I'll Let Him Put His Foot In The Right Direction...Next The Bear Trap
Last Bar Of The Battle... & Voters Are Already Saying Goodbye
Coz When I Torch Your Soul... It Wont Be Visible To The Naked Eye(Torture S3oul)
This bitch's so desperate for sex, he ought to panic and pay men
See, cats ain't talkin' '$CHANGE$' when they be askin other dudes if "you can break 10??"
You ain't unique, your just dumb .. your as weak as they come
So when this beating is done, you won't be pump but you'll be breathing thru one .. !!
You think ya text's dope? think of all the verses u’ve spat 10.
Then realize you've only left a mark ............. on every toilet you've sat in .. !!
His bars lack in many areas and it just proves his mission is dim ..
But even if you fixture verse a million times ... you still wouldn't be in position to win .....
You'll never be clowning me dude, although it's obvious that never is this fucker fair ...
& Ya mouth? Just seal it shut, until there's freshness ...... like the use of tubber-ware .. !!
upz
This bitch's so desperate for sex, he ought to panic and pay men
See, cats ain't talkin' '$CHANGE$' when they be askin other dudes if "you can break 10??"
-decent
You ain't unique, your just dumb .. your as weak as they come
So when this beating is done, you won't be pump but you'll be breathing thru one .. !!
-lame
You think ya text's dope? think of all the verses u’ve spat 10.
Then realize you've only left a mark on every toilet you've sat in .. !!
-lmao this was funny,
His bars lack in many areas and it just proves his mission is dim ..
But even if you fixture verse a million times ... you still wouldn't be in position to win .....
-ehh
You'll never be clowning me dude, although it's obvious that never is this fucker fair ...
& Ya mouth? Just seal it shut, until there's freshness ...... like the use of tubber-ware .. !!
-weak
10 (10=Mr.DJ??)
I'd Like To See Him Flee From Me, Its Nearly A Risk
& He Tried A Hands On Approach For This Battle... & Left With Barely A Wrist
-good
See I Called Him Out On A Dare Since He's My Favorite Bum
But Between Him, MI, & Complex... Lucky Me He's The Weakest One
-lol nice
He's Been Leading By Example & Trying To Pay His Dues
....At Last He's A Motivater
Coz He Called Out The Veterans & Got A Thread Full Of Noobs
-nah
See Its Hunting Season, & This Time Around I Usually Hunt Wack Cats
But I'll Let Him Put His Foot In The Right Direction...Next The Bear Trap
-nah
Last Bar Of The Battle... & Voters Are Already Saying Goodbye
Coz When I Torch Your Soul... It Wont Be Visible To The Naked Eye.
-i like this, worded bad..
Vote goes to 10.. Better punches.. Seoul had a couple funnies but nothing really better than 10's.. No hate to both..
Rtf my battle with scorpion please.
On second thought after reading over that.. I think Seoul edged u out 10.. V/Seoul
you guys on this site seem to focus more on dope punchlines which is good.. but imo i think yall focus just on that just a little to much and forget to keep ur shit relevant. specificaly in this battle, i can take both of those raps and use it against some1 else and no1 would know. its like its not directed at each other enough and that should b the purpose.. with the exception of 10's line: "Coz When I Torch Your Soul... It Wont Be Visible To The Naked Eye(Torture S3oul)" ..and S3oul's line: "See, cats ain't talkin' '$CHANGE$' when they be askin other dudes if "you can break 10??"".. S3oul seemed to be a bit more clever about his rap while 10 made it look like he only said certain things because it rhymed.. dont get me wrong you are both some pretty upscale lyricist, but i'm just pointing out your flaws in this battle.
S3oul would have my vote but i dont have 50 posts lol..
lol upppp
RTF: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...784/index.html
He's Been Leading By Example & Trying To Pay His Dues
....At Last He's A Motivater
Coz He Called Out The Veterans & Got A Thread Full Of Noobs
Last Bar Of The Battle... & Voters Are Already Saying Goodbye
Coz When I Torch Your Soul... It Wont Be Visible To The Naked Eye(Torture S3oul)
vs
His bars lack in many areas and it just proves his mission is dim ..
But even if you fixture verse a million times ... you still wouldn't be in position to win .....
You'll never be clowning me dude, although it's obvious that never is this fucker fair ...
& Ya mouth? Just seal it shut, until there's freshness ...... like the use of tubber-ware
real close one here. Both had some great concepts and both screwed up a couple punches with stretched wording. 10 had the better personal and closer was quite creative and s3 had the more creative opener than 10 which was nice also. 10 did have one filler in there that i thought was real weak so for consistantcy...
v/ s3 (real close one fellas...GOOD BATTLE!
Seoul.. Rtf on one of my battles please? Idc which one..
I'd Like To See Him Flee From Me, Its Nearly A Risk
& He Tried A Hands On Approach For This Battle... & Left With Barely A Wrist
See I Called Him Out On A Dare Since He's My Favorite Bum
But Between Him, MI, & Complex... Lucky Me He's The Weakest One
See Its Hunting Season, & This Time Around I Usually Hunt Wack Cats
But I'll Let Him Put His Foot In The Right Direction...Next The Bear Trap
vs
This bitch's so desperate for sex, he ought to panic and pay men
See, cats ain't talkin' '$CHANGE$' when they be askin other dudes if "you can break 10??"
You ain't unique, your just dumb .. your as weak as they come
So when this beating is done, you won't be pump but you'll be breathing thru one ..
10 came ok on this one. more personal and had a few decent concepts. seoul started off nice but fell off towards the end. didnt have the consistency 10 came with. decent battle
vote=10
rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...761/index.html
upppppppppppp
uppin...
I'd Like To See Him Flee From Me, Its Nearly A Risk
& He Tried A Hands On Approach For This Battle... & Left With Barely A Wrist
-lol nice
See I Called Him Out On A Dare Since He's My Favorite Bum
But Between Him, MI, & Complex... Lucky Me He's The Weakest One
-lmao
He's Been Leading By Example & Trying To Pay His Dues
....At Last He's A Motivater
Coz He Called Out The Veterans & Got A Thread Full Of Noobs
-lol o what
See Its Hunting Season, & This Time Around I Usually Hunt Wack Cats
But I'll Let Him Put His Foot In The Right Direction...Next The Bear Trap
-lol decent
Last Bar Of The Battle... & Voters Are Already Saying Goodbye
Coz When I Torch Your Soul... It Wont Be Visible To The Naked Eye
-lol nice
vs
This bitch's so desperate for sex, he ought to panic and pay men
See, cats ain't talkin' '$CHANGE$' when they be askin other dudes if "you can break 10??
- ok
You ain't unique, your just dumb .. your as weak as they come
So when this beating is done, you won't be pump but you'll be breathing thru one .. !!
-decent
You think ya text's dope? think of all the verses u’ve spat 10.
Then realize you've only left a mark ............. on every toilet you've sat in .. !!
-weak
His bars lack in many areas and it just proves his mission is dim ..
But even if you fixture verse a million times ... you still wouldn't be in position to win .....
-lol nice
You'll never be clowning me dude, although it's obvious that never is this fucker fair ...
& Ya mouth? Just seal it shut, until there's freshness ...... like the use of tubber-ware
-not feeling
vote=10
slightly better
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