Reaching Higher

[.Prime.]

Reaching Higher

Goes to the beat of

Imma fresh to death and yall don't even got to test me
See cause I got this gift, God has gone and fuckin blessed me
But you cant see me shinin cause you got them shades on
Take them off nigga, but you gotta remain calm
I'm an inner glow that will make ya smile
May take a while but trust me, I got flow like the Nile
I'm hooked cause I got this flow pourin out of my words
Comin at you fast, man dont be a fuckin perv
Swerve on the road man cause my skills be untouchable
You can say rap beats make me fuckin combustible
And yall know that I deliever, I'm trust-able
Girls love me man cause I am so damn lovable
I say push it, push it good I cause I be on top
Taken your spot, cause God gave me what I got
I ride on my words, and I will die with my rhymes
I havent done time man but you can still call me Prime
They say rap has died, but I say that isn't true
Have you listened to weezy and Immortal tech too?
But man I am inspired, reaching higher and higher
Waitin to be signed man cause I spit nothing but fire
And trust me I will never retire
Cause hip hops all I got and all that I respire

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[King Jhauze 24]

God Damn! This flowed really well to that beat. Another solid drop. I know i may feed like a bum but i dont have the time to be writin' those ones where they crit each and every bar. So, it's pretty cool that u thank god for ur skills, as do i. I like cool tracks that speak of true hip-hop and other real shit. so this was right up my alley. Keep em comin!

[.Prime.]

Aight thanks for the feedback man. Tried my best to go with the beat. Peace.

[.Prime.]

Uppin come on people gimme some feedback.

[K.B.]

Aiight man this shit was pretty decent, but the rhyme scheme was quite simplistic, as were the metaphors. Such as, "I got flow like the Nile"... i mean audio this might have sounded hotter than how I'm reading, so it's not awful, just try taking your time with ur verses a lil more and think about the structure of how your gonna make the words rhyme n what not. Overall it's not bad, 6-6.5/10, just keep doing your thing, def potential.

KB

[.Prime.]

Ight man thanks for the feedback. Yeah almost all my rhymes are made for audio. Which is why I post them with beats.

[Bstill]

if i was you i would make the way you write alil better as in the words you choose an how u link them together although i can tell this piece wasnt put together in once session due to the point that you kinda loose control of stayin on topic but other then that if you work on your minor flaws then you'll be a great writer mann just read the work of people who kno what there doin

RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...29#post7237329

[Genocide]

pretty nice for a ketsteezo man.. went well with the beat -nothing fuccin fantabulous content wise.. but definitely got your point accross, ill be peepin more from you

[XM]

Ok you really do have some potential but your grouping yourself with the wrong type of writers not saying your collabing with them but your frame of mind is simple although you are above the average out of them you can do alot better, vocabulary is lacking and so is the true emotions and imagry nice structure its ok other then that an okish piece close to real decent. props and thanx for the read