Worcester

[.Prime.]

Worcester

Goes to the beat of

Ay, I'm from Wortown thats the city where I be
The number of gangs here made the fuckin cops flee
Cause we a drug town and we got them trees
We got blood on our shirts and blood on our sleeves
But please, don't try to act like yall are hard
We'll smack you around all day till your a fuckin retard
I'm from the valley, the great old block in the sun
We go around shootin up white boys for fun
Cut a cop in two so he gets to see Pun (Big Pun)
Deal to your fuckin son, cause we know you miss him a ton
But hey thats the game, thats the way it'll be
We gang bang all day and go to sleep at three
So, I'm tellin this to all yall niggas tryin to be tough
You head over here man, shits gonna be rough
We aint that hospitable and we dont except bluffs
And no nigga on my block gets taken away in cuffs
From the boonies to the city, Wortowns for me
It's the place where I'm from and the place that I be
I got my homies to my left and my homies to my right
We aint picken fights man, we lookin through gun sights

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[sILLable]

well i know never to meet you killin white boys for fun..ouch..im irish does that count as white???lol....i liked how you rep,i thought it was simple in some places,as far as the content goes and what type of piece it was i think it tight,i dont dig on gangster rap shit but for that kind of piece it was ill,too tha point,brutal,no real depth or complexity just a solid message,id like to see you get deeper maybe more complex vocab and some multis and wordplay on a topical deep piece,but thats in the future...keep droppin and elevatin...no hate...hit up my piece..its in my sig..~1~

[.Prime.]

Thanks for the feedback, I'll be sure to hit up your open mic. Naw I dont really go shootin up white boys for fun. Worcester actually has a ton of irish and puertorican people so its pretty equal some racial fights but not tons.

[.Prime.]

uppin for feedback

[KINGofEVRYTHING]

lol PRIME u aint gotta up, up, up all tha time...rules say one UP a day...now imma give u some feed...

Ay, I'm from Wortown thats the city where I be
The number of gangs here made the fuckin cops flee
Cause we a drug town and we got them trees
We got blood on our shirts and blood on our sleeves

i liked this opening...rele talkin bout where ur from n what its like...good wroding n flow...2nd bar was good talkin bout drugs n slangin...but ur 3rd line fucked up tha imagery just a bit...u shuda said WE GOT BLOOD ON OUR CARS n BLOOD ON OUR SLEEVES...u dont have to say cars but it'll add a lil more imagery if u rele show us where else tha blood is...

But please, don't try to act like yall are hard
We'll smack you around all day till your a fuckin retard
I'm from the valley, the great old block in the sun
We go around shootin up white boys for fun
Cut a cop in two so he gets to see Pun (Big Pun)
Deal to your fuckin son, cause we know you miss him a ton

first bar was pretty good...some funny shit but probly cud have been worded a lil nicer...2nd bar offered a lil imagery but i was hoping for more...rele give us a mental picture of tha block...funny ine bout US white boys...3rd bar was good liked tha cop line but ur last line cuda been even more good if u said...SEND MONEY TO UR SON...makes it seem like ur holdin him hostage...or that ur stealing tha money n letters she sends to him...wording is everything...

But hey thats the game, thats the way it'll be
We gang bang all day and go to sleep at three
So, I'm tellin this to all yall niggas tryin to be tough
You head over here man, shits gonna be rough
We aint that hospitable and we dont except bluffs
And no nigga on my block gets taken away in cuffs

lol funny first bar bout how we operate...slang all day n bang all night...2nd bar was good talked bout fakers in tha hood...real shit...but u cuda worded it better...3rd bar started good...but WE DONT EXCEPT BLUFFS...that was kinda dumb...i mean u shud reword that...n ur last line didnt make sense...no one gets taken away in cuffs?...ok a few ways to look at this...either the get killed by cops...u kill em before they snitch...or IDK what other way wud explain that...if u get time tell me what u meant plz...

From the boonies to the city, Wortowns for me
It's the place where I'm from and the place that I be
I got my homies to my left and my homies to my right
We aint picken fights man, we lookin through gun sights

first bar was tight lettin em know once again where ur from n explains ur concept n ur title...ur second line was pointless...sry PONIT BLANK PERIOD...last bar as a great ending...diggin tha hoodness n ur wording was great...rele came out strong...liked how u repped ur city...shit wud be fire on audio...just get a beat n get too it...GOOD n FUN READ...KEEP ON WRITING THAT HOOD SHIT n STAY UP ON UR CRAFT BRUH!!!

yo RTF on any of my drops u like...

[teflon151]

haha good shit though...funny thing is ive been to worcester and have never heard it been called wor-town or seen gang-bangers, but its your city so ill give my respect. good shit though you came hard and represented

[.Prime.]

It actually is called Wortown by many inner city kids, and we have the 2nd greatest crime rate in massachusetts, after boston.

[KINGofEVRYTHING]

lol i live in DALLAS TEXAS n we have tha highest crime rate PERIOD...n highest HOMICIDE RATE!!! GO US!!!

[.Prime.]

found a nice beat to go to this, link in the first post.

[The Incredible Hulk]

Ay, I'm from Wortown thats the city where I be
The number of gangs here made the fuckin cops flee
^nice opener
I'm from the valley, the great old block in the sun
We go around shootin up white boys for fun
^ :-S thanks alot..lol
But hey thats the game, thats the way it'll be
We gang bang all day and go to sleep at three
So, I'm tellin this to all yall niggas tryin to be tough
You head over here man, shits gonna be rough
^nice flow
From the boonies to the city, Wortowns for me
It's the place where I'm from and the place that I be
^nice,should have said and the place that adores me though...
I got my homies to my left and my homies to my right
We aint picken fights man, we lookin through gun sights
^lol


i thought this piece had nice flow,better than most ive read from you...the piece went to the beat,would be good to hear you on it,good job at reppin' your block,but if i come through i hope you aint shootin' me up lol....keep writing man

[Kenny the G]

i from springfield, ma.

worcester aint that gully.

just playin, straight piece.

[.Prime.]

yo man I got tons of my fam in springfield man.
Ight guys I would love to make and audio version of this, and probably will in a few weeks. Just ordered a mic so imma be steppin up my game.

[C-Styles]

i thought this was pretty good with a simple pattern kinda like how ice cube does sometimes. The big pun line was really good, loved that punch, sometimes the lines seemed kinda simple but for the most part caught attention and straight to the point. Good job dawg, if you got a myspace, add me

www.myspace.com/cstyles01

[.Prime.]

Uppin for feedback