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damm son ya records 8-8 its stressin rite? u deserve a drink.
dude's trash...shit lyrically even ja rule would murder ink.
monsterink i never heard of him so far i dont really like da dude.
he was lettin a priest touch his 'dick' up in 'PRiVaTE' school.
ya sex life is real bad let me go into details then.
virgin!,u did DUET but dat was only a song with ya female friend.
he kind of tuff online but in real life this kid's a punk.
i told ink we car pooling dis dummy brought his swimmin trunks.
nigga im the god mc dont bother me goin against the kid is a sin.
this niggaz a snitch so why u think 'ink' neva been in the 'pen'.
no need to get sophisticated J is gay n evrybody know
queens is the coffee table in raps house and j's the orange glo
meaning that you polish wood get it, cuz you been gay
n by your name its clear to see there was something between M and MJ
is it cuz your shit gets slept on is why your amerikas nightmare
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*YAWN*excuse the nap
when it come to rap you bore me to sleep so how could we fight fair
lol your light wait! i could see your dark
M I the ace of spades yes and marvj's the queen of hearts
dumb niggas like marv jump up to get knockdown
my drops late but marvs the only one getting clocked out
damm son ya records 8-8 its stressin rite? u deserve a drink.
dude's trash...shit lyrically even ja rule would murder ink.
-ok
monsterink i never heard of him so far i dont really like da dude.
he was lettin a priest touch his 'dick' up in 'PRiVaTE' school.
-bad
ya sex life is real bad let me go into details then.
virgin!,u did DUET but dat was only a song with ya female friend.
-weak
he kind of tuff online but in real life this kid's a punk.
i told ink we car pooling dis dummy brought his swimmin trunks.
-.....really
nigga im the god mc dont bother me goin against the kid is a sin.
this niggaz a snitch so why u think 'ink' neva been in the 'pen'.
-you forgot to make a connection here with the wordplay, bad
vs.
no need to get sophisticated J is gay n evrybody know
queens is the coffee table in raps house and j's the orange glo
meaning that you polish wood get it, cuz you been gay
n by your name its clear to see there was something between M and MJ
-ehhh, the last line here broke what was actually pretty decent at least, if only those were multi, it would be good
is it cuz your shit gets slept on is why your amerikas nightmare
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*YAWN*excuse the nap
when it come to rap you bore me to sleep so how could we fight fair
-not so much, the first two were solid, especially the first, but the last line messed it up, if there was some wordplay or punch connection made off him boring you to sleep, that wouldve been clutch
lol your light wait! i could see your dark
M I the ace of spades yes and marvj's the queen of hearts
-weak word play attempt
dumb niggas like marv jump up to get knockdown
my drops late but marvs the only one getting clocked out
-ehhh, not really, streatched multi that ends up not rhyming really and streatched concept that doesnt really work out
v-ink, more consistent, better concepts
Nothing really tight to mention in this battle. both had okay concepts but allowed wording to kill the execution. MI had the better concepts though and punches had more sting. Marv had some nice attempts but couldnt produce the effect. Set up was way off for punch delivery...
v/ MI
vote in this battle please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...209/index.html
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upp upp in the butt i said up up in the butt
uppin
damm son ya records 8-8 its stressin rite? u deserve a drink.
dude's trash...shit lyrically even ja rule would murder ink.
ehhh ok
monsterink i never heard of him so far i dont really like da dude.
he was lettin a priest touch his 'dick' up in 'PRiVaTE' school.
nah
ya sex life is real bad let me go into details then.
virgin!,u did DUET but dat was only a song with ya female friend.
nah not connecting
he kind of tuff online but in real life this kid's a punk.
i told ink we car pooling dis dummy brought his swimmin trunks.
ehhhhhh
nigga im the god mc dont bother me goin against the kid is a sin.
this niggaz a snitch so why u think 'ink' neva been in the 'pen'
ok
no need to get sophisticated J is gay n evrybody know
queens is the coffee table in raps house and j's the orange glo
nah
meaning that you polish wood get it, cuz you been gay
n by your name its clear to see there was something between M and MJ
nah
is it cuz your shit gets slept on is why your amerikas nightmare
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*YAWN*excuse the nap
when it come to rap you bore me to sleep so how could we fight fair
nah
lol your light wait! i could see your dark
M I the ace of spades yes and marvj's the queen of hearts
ehhh
dumb niggas like marv jump up to get knockdown
my drops late but marvs the only one getting clocked out
ok
i expected a better battle here this was pretty weak marv was a lil more consistent imo inks last bar was ok but coulda been alot better marv a few more potential bars that didnt connect but didnt fail as bad as inks did v/mj
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damm son ya records 8-8 its stressin rite? u deserve a drink.
dude's trash...shit lyrically even ja rule would murder ink.
^..>>decent, wording cud have made this better
monsterink i never heard of him so far i dont really like da dude.
he was lettin a priest touch his 'dick' up in 'PRiVaTE' school.
^..>> weak..wasnt feelin this
ya sex life is real bad let me go into details then.
virgin!,u did DUET but dat was only a song with ya female friend.
^..>>iight
he kind of tuff online but in real life this kid's a punk.
i told ink we car pooling dis dummy brought his swimmin trunks.
^..>>funny but not hard hittin
nigga im the god mc dont bother me goin against the kid is a sin.
this niggaz a snitch so why u think 'ink' neva been in the 'pen'.
^..>> decent nameplay
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no need to get sophisticated J is gay n evrybody know
queens is the coffee table in raps house and j's the orange glo
^..>>nah
meaning that you polish wood get it, cuz you been gay
n by your name its clear to see there was something between M and MJ
^..>>whackummms
is it cuz your shit gets slept on is why your amerikas nightmare
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*YAWN*excuse the nap
when it come to rap you bore me to sleep so how could we fight fair
^..>>nothing
lol your light wait! i could see your dark
M I the ace of spades yes and marvj's the queen of hearts
^..>>maybe decent
dumb niggas like marv jump up to get knockdown
my drops late but marvs the only one getting clocked out
^..>>iight
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vote: marvj...better verse
rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...643/index.html vs complex
damm son ya records 8-8 its stressin rite? u deserve a drink.
dude's trash...shit lyrically even ja rule would murder ink.
basic
monsterink i never heard of him so far i dont really like da dude.
he was lettin a priest touch his 'dick' up in 'PRiVaTE' school.
nah
ya sex life is real bad let me go into details then.
virgin!,u did DUET but dat was only a song with ya female friend.
ehhh
he kind of tuff online but in real life this kid's a punk.
i told ink we car pooling dis dummy brought his swimmin trunks.
not really a hard punch....but creative
nigga im the god mc dont bother me goin against the kid is a sin.
this niggaz a snitch so why u think 'ink' neva been in the 'pen'.
decent
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no need to get sophisticated J is gay n evrybody know
queens is the coffee table in raps house and j's the orange glo
ehhh
meaning that you polish wood get it, cuz you been gay
n by your name its clear to see there was something between M and MJ
ehhh
is it cuz your shit gets slept on is why your amerikas nightmare
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*YAWN*excuse the nap
when it come to rap you bore me to sleep so how could we fight fair
forced....but i liked it lol
lol your light wait! i could see your dark
M I the ace of spades yes and marvj's the queen of hearts
ehhh
dumb niggas like marv jump up to get knockdown
my drops late but marvs the only one getting clocked out
ehhh
this battle was close as fuck...both came basic and weak....i expected more from Marv.....he usually has better lines that are more creative but this time he came weak
Monster didnt have nething special and both nameplays on each were not creative at all
I feel monster took this by a hair
barely
vote=MI
rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...332/index.html
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