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so sick, so gross, so nasty, so grimey,
im talkin about asia's pussy, it holds 90,
90 what, fingers, feet, inches, or dicks,
depends if shes fuckin men, or little asian pricks,
ugh...thats raw, uncalled for, Tet Offensive,
all those abortions must get pretty expensive,
thats enough TEF! its ok shes a little cocky,
shes fucked more men then killed in Nagasaki,
one more question before i have to go,
Ur in limbo and heaven, who did you have to blow?
this...
shit is Ludacris! u 2 quiet to disturb peace in your hood mice cause louder sound (s),
ill catch tef in his hood slippin catch him like the 10th letter Jumped in his home town,
Hmm....okay i see your point you was always fucked over as a child an jumped on,
so why act hard, you can barley take a bullet you no ware near tough as teflon,
lmao... chuckin out nasty candy is the closest this kid ever came to spittin a bar,
dont think too hard Teft you might blow ya mind Jus check his face in the avytar,
funny lil toon ill Knock you senseless leave Angles on top of ya dome call him bart,
plus ill have this nigga scared to face me BOO! watch him jump Like he did a false start,
Get with the program...asias sick you can bearley walk straight its obvious on who's betta,
wit no joint ill get him smoked out his fitted cap Blast his mind into an new era..
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thats enough TEF! its ok shes a little cocky,
shes fucked more men then killed in Nagasaki,
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lmao... chuckin out nasty candy is the closest this kid ever came to spittin a bar,
dont think too hard Teft you might blow ya mind Jus check his face in the avytar,
Get with the program...asias sick you can bearley walk straight its obvious on who's betta,
wit no joint ill get him smoked out his fitted cap Blast his mind into an new era..
Tef had the storyline flow but vocab was weak and there was no creative punches or concepts. nothin really jumped out but the Nagasaki concept and that was worded wierd. Asia had some stretched punches but they were punches the new era bar is played but flipped okay and plays on avatars are played but you flipped it nice...
v/ Asia
rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...682/index.htmlOriginally Posted by KnowP
Hmm....okay i see your point you was always fucked over as a child an jumped on,
so why act hard, you can barley take a bullet you no ware near tough as teflon,
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that alone won it jus elevate shorten an word yo shit better ya digg asia get it
Im Iris Bitch..
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funny lil toon ill Knock you senseless leave Angles on top of ya dome call him bart,
plus ill have this nigga scared to face me BOO! watch him jump Like he did a false start,
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IMO, i think this was a fairly bad battle.
i thought teflon lacked in punches and tried to hard to force his concept executions..
and i think asia let her concepts down by how stretched her bars were.
I think asia had some decent concepts some a lil' played but thats ok..
Teflon just tried too hard IMO i think you lacked because of your wording to set ups,
for those explanations im gonna vote asia...
V/Asia
^^^arent u n asia im da same crew
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