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Asia
MaRVJ
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Check ... Good luck to you to lol I kno imma need it
The Greatest
sorry i late
come witness a bold Lie MarvFake aint what he claim to be on the street,
fuck a hand he a snitch wave a burner across his face is how he'll be greet ,
......This cant be the best NY has to offer you no ware near throrogh,
ill take yo bread an butter an leave ya spread over the new york Borogh(s),
America's night mare? please stick to reality son dreamin is for the Foo,
target ya home an wesly snipe ya family plus Marv would get the Blade to(2),
an how ya claim hungar wit gums for teeth this MC wont win even if he bit,
....Coogi is the best way to describe marv why? jus look at the colors in it,
na you aint going no ware he think bein in his confert zone he will be safer,
not knowin ma Knife american made leavin Stripes across his frame like note paper...
The Greatest
pardon the wait...
me n asia go out on dates..i be spendin that whores bread.
her aka is "front of your dome" her pussy wack i only use her 4-head.
you aint been a virgin in years...please stop lyin to ya man.
alot of been done been in asia...ask men from china & japan.
none of ya ryhmes be sick...so i really think u wanna try me bitch.
neva was nice asia been washed up....waaaaay before the tsunami hit.
i could just pimp slap u n break bones i aint gota blast off the shotti.
trust me it wont be a weather man puttin four-cast on ya body.
u gota sick flow? bitch no! this fake ass lil kim hoe's a peseant.
i'll come 2 your location & kill u have wit god doin the limbo in heaven.
lol Upp# 1
The Greatest
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none of ya ryhmes be sick...so i really think u wanna try me bitch.
neva was nice asia been washed up....waaaaay before the tsunami hit.
i could just pimp slap u n break bones i aint gota blast off the shotti.
trust me it wont be a weather man puttin four-cast on ya body.
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V/MJ
Those quotables were meh, not great but atleast attempts, never heard teh 4 cast punch before, the tsanami was basic but atleast was a personal attempt.
rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=406543
I completely agree wit this analysis. MJ had better concepts and personals and name play. The tsunami bar was nice. Asia had a nice flow for audio but not for text. Her verse would have been alot better if she would have thought of a better way to be creative wit those concepts...Originally Posted by )(
v/ MJ
rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...745/index.html
none of ya ryhmes be sick...so i really think u wanna try me bitch.
neva was nice asia been washed up....waaaaay before the tsunami hit.
rest of ur punches were not hitting...i've seen the forecast, broadcast line too many time...but overall you had enough to win
Asia, your lines r all audio....or something you would spit at in a crowd...i can't front not bad ...but just didnt have the concepts
vote=marv
Good battle marv! upp#3
The Greatest
you aint been a virgin in years...please stop lyin to ya man.
alot of been done been in asia...ask men from china & japan.
none of ya ryhmes be sick...so i really think u wanna try me bitch.
neva was nice asia been washed up....waaaaay before the tsunami hit.
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nothing not sayin it was wack you just need to ajust to text because to us it looks statementish ok not bad tho
Ya wording u missin bits of words and I didn't quote four cast it seem only ehh to me a tad bit forced but great a attempt
Vote/Marvj
v/ MaRVJ. Fairly Easy.
Asia, your lines are wayyyy to stretched. It takes you too many words to set up a punch. you attempted personals, but the lack of a punch didn't make it stick.
MarvJ, your shit was nice. good punches and personals every line.
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