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GillieDaKid
Mr. DJ
Quik 10 Lines/5 Bars
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This Battle Shouldn't Be No Longer Than 3 Days Man
So Just Post Up Asap
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eZ Lets Go
Here's My Check
check, my bad barely saw it.
Its Cool, I'm Bout To Post Up My Verse Now Aiight
& I See You On So I'm Sure You Can Post Tonite As Well
DJ's A Disease, My Effect Is Susceptible With Bad Cells Floating Within
I'll Hit You So Hard With My Sickness Til I Start To Grow On Ya Skin
This Is My Spot & Here Its My Rules, You'll Obey Or I'll Blow A Fuse
& Yea Da Kid Is In The House....But Thats Cuz His Mom Told 'em To
DJ Got Fans, They Love To Watch Me Drop A Key, Then Your Done
& Nobody Gives This Child Support, Even Their Mistreating You Son
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
Loser..HA! I'm Sick & My Punches Will Always Be Threatening Ya Life
So Everytime You Write, This Bar Rock Ya World Like The Presidents Wife
10.
your style is shitty and saying that your good would be sinning
it's fitting your structure is slim,Kinda like your chances of winning
you came off the street's and now your tryna step to a big dude?
you'll never make it far in this organization as if you were kimbo
you can't put up a fight either, one hit and your down jew
last time he withstood a kick, was getting booted from his crew
creativity just isnt for u, so it's easy to see you'll get wrecked bitch
cuz dog your lines are so forced, your verse'll get archived as fetish
this last line'll drop you, you think your good but im the best though
watch as i come nasty of the top and kill this bitch like asbestos
DJ's A Disease, My Effect Is Susceptible With Bad Cells Floating Within
I'll Hit You So Hard With My Sickness Til I Start To Grow On Ya Skin
ehhh statementish
This Is My Spot & Here Its My Rules, You'll Obey Or I'll Blow A Fuse
& Yea Da Kid Is In The House....But Thats Cuz His Mom Told 'em To
haha
DJ Got Fans, They Love To Watch Me Drop A Key, Then Your Done
& Nobody Gives This Child Support, Even Their Mistreating You Son
ok
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
nice
Loser..HA! I'm Sick & My Punches Will Always Be Threatening Ya Life
So Everytime You Write, This Bar Rock Ya World Like The Presidents Wife
coulda been better the wording messed it up
your style is shitty and saying that your good would be sinning
it's fitting your structure is slim,Kinda like your chances of winning
nice personal
you came off the street's and now your tryna step to a big dude?
you'll never make it far in this organization as if you were kimbo
nah and doesnt rhyme
you can't put up a fight either, one hit and your down jew
last time he withstood a kick, was getting booted from his crew
nah
creativity just isnt for u, so it's easy to see you'll get wrecked bitch
cuz dog your lines are so forced, your verse'll get archived as fetish
wtf? nah
this last line'll drop you, you think your good but im the best though
watch as i come nasty of the top and kill this bitch like asbestos
nah
v/dj easy win imo dropped a decent verse and consistent 4 the most part gdk's first bar was ok then went downhill from there
you say to to a line because of the rhyme? lol ok more votes
DJ's A Disease, My Effect Is Susceptible With Bad Cells Floating Within
I'll Hit You So Hard With My Sickness Til I Start To Grow On Ya Skin
meh ..
This Is My Spot & Here Its My Rules, You'll Obey Or I'll Blow A Fuse
& Yea Da Kid Is In The House....But Thats Cuz His Mom Told 'em To
nah
DJ Got Fans, They Love To Watch Me Drop A Key, Then Your Done
& Nobody Gives This Child Support, Even Their Mistreating You Son
okay
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
lol ok
Loser..HA! I'm Sick & My Punches Will Always Be Threatening Ya Life
So Everytime You Write, This Bar Rock Ya World Like The Presidents Wife
not feelin' the closer
your style is shitty and saying that your good would be sinning
it's fitting your structure is slim,Kinda like your chances of winning
kinda played but ok
you came off the street's and now your tryna step to a big dude?
you'll never make it far in this organization as if you were kimbo
no
you can't put up a fight either, one hit and your down jew
last time he withstood a kick, was getting booted from his crew
ehh nah
creativity just isnt for u, so it's easy to see you'll get wrecked bitch
cuz dog your lines are so forced, your verse'll get archived as fetish
nah
this last line'll drop you, you think your good but im the best though
watch as i come nasty of the top and kill this bitch like asbestos
no
vote-mrdj. he had the better verse overall with consistency, punches, etc ....
This Is My Spot & Here Its My Rules, You'll Obey Or I'll Blow A Fuse
& Yea Da Kid Is In The House....But Thats Cuz His Mom Told 'em To
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
best lines from dj
gillie used the same concept in his opener which i didnt like
nothing worth quoting he had some decent punches....you need to elevate and work on ya concepts...
vote=dj
rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...907/index.html
DJ's A Disease, My Effect Is Susceptible With Bad Cells Floating Within
I'll Hit You So Hard With My Sickness Til I Start To Grow On Ya Skin
This Is My Spot & Here Its My Rules, You'll Obey Or I'll Blow A Fuse
& Yea Da Kid Is In The House....But Thats Cuz His Mom Told 'em To
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
vs
creativity just isnt for u, so it's easy to see you'll get wrecked bitch
cuz dog your lines are so forced, your verse'll get archived as fetish
this last line'll drop you, you think your good but im the best though
watch as i come nasty of the top and kill this bitch like asbestos
Both had some sick word play and some forced bars as well. Gillie had the better closer but Dj had the better opener. And overall, DJ had the better punches and executed a lil better than Gillie
Both had okay concepts but DJ flipped em nicer IMO...
v/ DJ
rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...682/index.html
DJ Got Fans, They Love To Watch Me Drop A Key, Then Your Done
& Nobody Gives This Child Support, Even Their Mistreating You Son
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
vs
your style is shitty and saying that your good would be sinning
it's fitting your structure is slim,Kinda like your chances of winning
overall vote-Mr dj close battle ya'll
Poor Kid Mad Cuz I'm King Of The Crop, I'm Harvesting The Best Shit
Your Chances Of Winning Is So Slim, Kate Moss Starting To Get Jealous
vs
nuttin
Gillie you came decent in this battle but i think DJ got the best of you in that line good battle thoe you jus got to keep hittin hard an get better concepts
v/mr dj
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