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Thread: Hour Glass (Verses)

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    Hour Glass

    1st Verse - Soule'
    2nd Verse - Mesiah
    3rd Verse - Official.
    4th Verse - Bstill


    He climbed into bed, tied to the dread of a long day,
    walked the wrong way in a place that he saw in gray.
    Jesus walks along his trail, though his wishes are frail,
    he wants to die, just to hide from Davy Jones' dark sail.
    An owl flew around outside the glass of his window,
    reminding him how earlier, he had to let a friend go.
    Like a shooting star, a tear scars the side of his face,
    and he then realises how lifeless he is and out of place.

    His brain shows strain, as each grain it pains; his vains
    pulsate at an alarming rate, taking the bait; that irates
    his eyes and strives his inability to calm, as he rives in-
    torment; the hours spent toss and turning to the extent-
    he crumbles; mind fumbles and his lip quivers and mumbles
    nothingness - the mess his life has distressed, but bless
    his dreams, seem like screams now as his eyes gleam holes-
    through the blinds that keeps him behinds; makinds; grinds.

    His nose intoxicated, by the fumes of powdered cocaine.
    Life on his last grain, as his salted tears covered pain -
    His life was lifeless,his soul gone, his mind thinking bland
    Riding obvious depression of time till his last grain of sand
    Eyes roaring red veins; caught transition in a quick stare.
    Trapped in locked cages of rage, walking routes of despair.
    His memories through breeze, his life flying with no wings,
    His past soul taken and his meanings gone with the wind.

    Taken by force living a regretful life without Addiction,
    The hour glass final Source, caused with minor conviction.
    As the sand falls life stands still, every aspect fades clear,
    Within Time all suffering ended until, the last Grain was near.
    All pain reappears as tears arise, destroyin his filtered mind,
    A thousand cries, countered failed attempts but not this time.
    The last grain had to be dropped, the glass fails to continue again,
    All of his hope stopped, life dimming as the grain falls to an end.

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    Now, Messiah needs to post it.

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    that looks good!

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    First Topical in 5 months xD

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    Bstill read my pm mate.

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    Re: Hour Glass (Verses)

    It was good aswell Still... It was my first one for a year lol.
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