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Scorpo Mavlo
sikmaster
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45 mins....lets do this
ay yo ive heard the ~sikmaster is awfull~/ his about to fall a ~bit faster than normal~//
-step- out of ya ~comfort zone~/ my -reps- a -threat- and its about ~to be known~//
you're outta place like the ~master in your name~/ go back home you're a ~disaster without rain~//
i rip through -rookies- like a ~knife through butter~/ crumble you like -cookies- on the mic you're ~likely to stutter~//
the scorpions here and im ~spaying the venom~/ these amatuers couldnt win if i was ~playin and let em~//
this is my -first verse- on this ~site~/ you can -curse- and -rehearse- and still won't be ~tight~//
this is just a -warm up-, but dont ~mistaking it~/ you be getting -torn up- and yes you ~hating it~//
this -battles on fire-, but you be ~fading it~/ i -shatter ya entirely- with no ~hesitating it~//
you say ya -sick-? well ya probably ~look it~/ suckin too much -dick- sore in the back where ya ~took it~//
well im -out- like the ~date of your rhymes~/ filling the -doubt- in the ~state of your mind~//
told mav the walkie talkies for emergencies quit screamin n em damn clown
u on ur knees suckin dick is no reason 2 be screamin man down
got dirty money im washingtons with the redskins shit this may hurt
ur a nobody like albert my hanesworth more than your names worth
u just mad cuz ya dick soft and ya bitch gettin fed up
she wasnt tryin 2 comfort u when she told u 2 keep ya head up
u better keep a tef or hollows i'll cease ya breath
cuz you dien 1st the only way sik gettin beat 2 death
scorpo thought he'd get his 1st win thought i was lame or sum kinda rookie
hes a bitch moms had a c section n he still came out a pussy
Alright lets start gettin some votes
another newb with a newb style
dont use quotation marks or little dashes or whatever makes ur verse look bad
it seems u didnt go by the traditional bar scheme...and rhymed every bar
ay yo ive heard the ~sikmaster is awfull~/ his about to fall a ~bit faster than normal~//
-step- out of ya ~comfort zone~/ my -reps- a -threat- and its about ~to be known~//
you're outta place like the ~master in your name~/ go back home you're a ~disaster without rain~//
i rip through -rookies- like a ~knife through butter~/ crumble you like -cookies- on the mic you're ~likely to stutter~//
the scorpions here and im ~spaying the venom~/ these amatuers couldnt win if i was ~playin and let em~//
this is my -first verse- on this ~site~/ you can -curse- and -rehearse- and still won't be ~tight~//
this is just a -warm up-, but dont ~mistaking it~/ you be getting -torn up- and yes you ~hating it~//
this -battles on fire-, but you be ~fading it~/ i -shatter ya entirely- with no ~hesitating it~//
you say ya -sick-? well ya probably ~look it~/ suckin too much -dick- sore in the back where ya ~took it~//
well im -out- like the ~date of your rhymes~/ filling the -doubt- in the ~state of your mind~//
ur bars r too short, try to use a different format or conform to the normal format all the vets use....and didnt really hit for me
told mav the walkie talkies for emergencies quit screamin n em damn clown
u on ur knees suckin dick is no reason 2 be screamin man down
ehhh decent
got dirty money im washingtons with the redskins shit this may hurt
ur a nobody like albert my hanesworth more than your names worth
could of been alot better....not bad
u just mad cuz ya dick soft and ya bitch gettin fed up
she wasnt tryin 2 comfort u when she told u 2 keep ya head up
nah
u better keep a tef or hollows i'll cease ya breath
cuz you dien 1st the only way sik gettin beat 2 death
played
scorpo thought he'd get his 1st win thought i was lame or sum kinda rookie
hes a bitch moms had a c section n he still came out a pussy
nah
sik took this easy......couple wordplay punches...but rest was decent at best
vote=sik
Got to agree with photix on this,Originally Posted by A. Karpis
Scorpo; u need to drop that style.. It's too confusing to read man.. Read some FL battles cause it's not working out..
Sik; your drop wasn't bad, but I wouldn't exactly call it great.. You had some decents here and there but nothing special, I liked the closer tho..
V/sikmaster.
Oops I mean karpis.. Lmao..
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love the last line you dropped there sik, clever shit. other than that, same old shit that every one else said, scorp, drop that lame writing style man its too confuising. vote goes to sik
nah
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u just mad cuz ya dick soft and ya bitch gettin fed up
she wasnt tryin 2 comfort u when she told u 2 keep ya head up
scorpo thought he'd get his 1st win thought i was lame or sum kinda rookie
hes a bitch moms had a c section n he still came out a pussy
Sik took this hands down. Some bars came off weak but i saw where you were going with the concepts though. Scorpo gotta lay off the dashes...too much seasoning...LOL!
but fa real, Sik had better punches overall and laid Mav out cold...
v/ sik
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u just mad cuz ya dick soft and ya bitch gettin fed up
she wasnt tryin 2 comfort u when she told u 2 keep ya head up
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Nothing
Scorpo's Structure Looked Horrible, And Plus He Didn't Incorporate Any Punches, He Just Rhymed As If He Was Just Freestyling..Not A Battle Verse To Me..Sik Had Some Bars That Was Meh But The One I Quoted Was Good Enough To Take This Battle - Too Simple & One-Sided Of A Battle, He Barely Put In Any Effort To Know He Was Taking This Win..Plus He Had Attempts For Punches And Better Execution Than Scorp..
v/ Sik
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RTF On My Battle
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