LLL Season 11: Week 6
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LLL Season 11: Week 6
Standard Rules (found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
MUST LEAVE LINKS in your check in, or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
Last edited by phlymo; August 10th, 2009 at 11:04 AM
Last edited by Barcotic; August 16th, 2009 at 11:42 PM
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
.
.
.
I almost feel bad for dissing this old man..........
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
decent wordplay.
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
haha this is dope.
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
ehh
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
cool wordplay again.
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
not feelin.
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
haha this made me lol.
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
not sure what cyanide is?? maybe im just pronouncing it wrong. seems like some sort of toxic chemical maybe cus of the refrence to waste above??
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
ehh
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
decent
VS
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
not really feeling.
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
haha this was pretty cool.
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
okay
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
no seen wayy to many raw concepts.
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
this was a cool ass concept but bought him/bottom doesnt rhyme for me.
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
meh another slip up... shit/read it doesnt rhyme for me much etheir... unless i really but n emphasis on IT.
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
pretty cool concept.
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
nahh
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
seen a tumour wordplay recentley... not sure who used it. but i liked the personal aspect of it otherwise as far as the old diss goes.. but a pyramid in someones memory seems pretty cool. so it is what it is...
Overall - def ups n downs on both sides. the highlights for me were:
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
VS
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
tied on quotables.. i think born had the line of the battle with the showtime bitches bar n his misses werent as off as bars. cool battle overall but...
vote - born.
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
cool concept/wp
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
alright..
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
poor execution hurt you here.
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
nice
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
cool
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
nope.
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
ok..
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
nope.
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
decent closer.
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
alright..
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
decent, coulda done this better.
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
cool
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
nah.
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
ok..
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
decent, punch wasn't great.
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
nice
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
decent lol
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
not feelin this.
Yet another close battle this week, both came with nice concepts and some cool punches but due to slightly better consistency and 1 better punch by my count Born got this.
Vote - BTK
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He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
lol I liked this, obviously haven't seen the nameplay before but the execution was perfect
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
wording was off, it was ok though, punch could of been harder
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
ehh, doesn't work for me
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
see above...
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
don't get this, haha
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
nicely worded, decent
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
[b]Haha, this was good/b]
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
funny
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
Good closer
Vs.
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
played wp, punch wasn't really special
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
Good, fresh & hits hard
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
Concept wasn't too good, not bad though
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
seen alot of bi/buy plays, decent
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
wording was bad, concept was ok
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
Nien
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
Nien
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
seems familiar with a few different concepts, eh ok
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
not bad, bar plays are done to death but ok closer
Bar started off strong then had a few poor bars but picked up at the end, Born had alot of hit & miss shit throughout, probably bar of the battle with that bitch fight line, but Bar had around 4 bars i'd quote to Born's 2 or 3, Bar gets this on having an overall better verse.
v/ Barcotic
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
seen the wp before, if i hadn't it would seem a lot nicer, as is its average
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
not bad
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
i liked the concept, i think it would have been nicer if you finished with something like defines where you're going, it was a tough concept to set up properly but you did it neatly
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
i didn't like the concept that much, so many bi/buy plays been done and not everything worked together well/logically to me
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
not bad, wording could have been tighter but concept was ok, maybe you overdid it with whole surviving the elements setup
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
meh
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
you mean like lemonade... thats a real stretch, idk this punch had issue and was super simple to boot
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
this hit ok actually
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
aight/not bad
vs.
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
i thought this 80% worked but had a couple of technical snafus held it back from connecting as cleanly as i would like, its aight
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
it should be at the blink of an eye, not with, this needed a better setup IMO, not enough of an explanation for where you took it
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
ok
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
aight, somewhat simple/played
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
this punch is pretty gay, i appreciate the effort you put into making it at but at the same time something i don't really appreciate
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
ehhh, i don't like how you did the wp, forborn is one of those words that has grown somewhat obselete and the way you used it was not in line with its modern meaning IMO, i had issues with it basically
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
i've seen this cliche before and done better, its average
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
meh
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
not bad
damn, another really hard battle to decide for this week, ill need to reread it again later before voting, much better than last weeks champ match
like i said, tough decision, practically a coin flip in my eyes, i was digging the swag and wording on borns quotables just a little more though so ill give him the nod
Last edited by The Commisioner; August 16th, 2009 at 02:57 PM
BTK,
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
Decent wordplay..
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
Could've been worded better since bitch fights generally include two bitches..
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
Good concept, I think it definitely could have been worded better though
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
Pretty clever here, decent but not super heavy hitting..
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
I don't really get the punch to be honest, what does the periodic table have to do with how often he eats?
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
HAHA, that one was funny
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
Decent line, filler..
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
Basically some more fill here, not bad though..
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
Wording could use some improvement again..
BTK, nice to see you writing and dropping nicely after all these years. I thought your verse was dope, it was pretty consistent to your style and there were a couple clever punches. The thing that kind of suffered was your wording in certain areas, you had good concepts to set up punches but some of them just didn't tie together. Good job nonetheless...
Barcotic,
I almost feel bad for dissing this old man..........
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
That was fresh, haha
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
Haha, pretty simple but still funny
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
That line was dope again, this is my favorite one so far..
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
Another solid punch, funny because BTK probably likes wrestling
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
decent, less strong than the first three though most definitely.
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
i'm not feeling this wordplay so much..
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
that was ill...
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
very basic, still funny tho..
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
pretty average closer in comparison with the rest of your verse..
I don't know if you've got an alias or not or if I know you from before but your style is definitely dope. You had several strong punches and your entire verse was solid throughout. The parasite line was probably my favorite, it was original, clever, and on top of all that, it was a heavy insult. Good verse, it's nice to read some quality battling here on rb. This battle was good all the way around.
My vote is going to have to go to Barcotic mainly for consistency. Born, your verse was fresh don't get me wrong, but Bar just had more lines that "wowed" me. This was a dope battle without any question. And depending on style preference this battle could probably go either way. My vote goes to Bar though, good battle people, I look forward to seeing both of you matched up against my name..
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vs.Originally Posted by Born To Kill
born - good verse.. mostly good wording and some fresh concepts. A few times you used some old/ iffy wordplays.. but the punches stayed consistent and hard which made up IMO. i missed out on 1 of ur bars.. maybe u could fill me in
puncher - you started off with some.. mello/simple flips, that were good/ok.. but then you picked it up with the age references and some funny ass lines.. i thought that "mind wonder" line was just perfectly worded..
good battle, just as good as i thought it would be.. would have liked to see more bars from each of you.. but i guess this was ok.
MVGT - Barcotic. - there's not one thing i can pick out and say "this is why".. but just going on gut and enjoyment, i think bar takes it. but who knows if y'all would have gone for more lines..
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Damn nice battle fellas
BTK:
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
decent wordplay to start but ive seen it used like that alot
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
lolz
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
im sure periodic table wp is definitely is one of the more played one but damn you used it hella fresh and funny here
Bar:
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in
lol...nice start..
battles..All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
decent
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
lmmfao!
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
nice closer
pretty cool shit from both i aint copy/past:
-borns whale wars line was hella funny
- bars forborne shit was cool and ur parasites line was tight...but kinda predictable since borns an admin..
man this shit was hard to vote on... both verses was on that disrespectful shit i like so it makes this even harder to vote on...considering how close it is, ima have to give my vote to bar...his closer definitely stood out where as BTK's closer was straight, but just aint have the sting that alot of his punches had...
v/bar
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
ok
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
meh
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
lol
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
ehh
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
ok
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
i liked the idea although i feel its overworded
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
blah
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
meh
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
ok
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
lol
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
lol
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
cool
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
kinda obvious
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom
ehh
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
clever wp/np
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
ok flip on an old idea
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
lol
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
ehh. wp's cool but the punch didnt hit hard
yea a close one. but overall i got more chuckles outta barcotics verse. both came consistent enough but bars haymakers stuck better imo.
v/barcotic
blackeloheimannunakirap
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
vs
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
v/ barcotic. more witty & harsh.. good showing from him. i was very generous w/ the quotes on both sides tho. born you did good too just ur wording let ya down at times.
I guess I'll do this bar by bar since it's the champ match...
You’ll never come close to the belt, in LLL you shouldn’t have hung out...
Now you won’t be aloud near the title since I cut your fuckin tongue out.
ehh, the concept was iffy to start and the execution of it wasn't that great
Bar’s such a pussy with punches, Showtime’s gonna get surly...
Cuz fuck Saturday night, we get to see a bitch fight one day early.
cool, pretty solid
The raps you write ain’t worth the paper they’re on, such a fuckin herb...
You’ll never advance cuz ya stationary, <--- defines the fuckin word.
stationary lines are played... wasn't feelin' it
Bar swings both ways, blatant with the gay, no matter what the cost is...
Ya so much of a Direct Bi, the wholesale shop is showing record losses.
lol, this was pretty creative, dope shit
Bar won’t survive the elements; you ain’t able to keep on the heat...
S’why ya periodic table just reps how often your poor ass gets to eat.
lol again, this was corny as hell, but i like these kinda lines, good stuff
Ya score scores of ugly whores, Animal Planet footage; they’d get stocks of it...
From ya own version of Whale Wars when you only buy one box of chocolates.
okay, but the wording of it just seemed a bit off
I just disgraced this waste, so I’ll help and refresh ya pride...
Be happy to assist in your ade...by stirring in some cyanide.
just felt the concept was just too simple n' not really effective
Don’t think this verse generic, I’m trying to relate to this bore...
But the lines about lonely losers have all been done before.
same as above, just felt too simple to me
Pick you up and toss you, you ain’t a man who’ll make me kick the bucket...
Shiiiit...we all know Bar pussy...ain’t thought twice about after you fuck it.
the wording on this just seemed off
vs.
He fell on his head as a baby, it clearly left him cracked and rattled
and while his mom was dropping newborns.. wishing he could do that in battles..
wording was slightly awkward but cool idea
He's had ups and downs over the years but he's still willing to fight
he could explode with the blink of an eye, but girls've never winked at him in his life..
nah, just the concept wasn't there on this one
This faggot almost got demodded, he's a disease to RB and more
you could look at any parasites.. and still not find an admin as weak as Born..
parasites is played... otherwise this would be pretty nice
All he does is post about old news and gay sports, shit's depressing
and if he ever drops raw, it just means that he finally decided to give up wrestling..
lol, yea he does seem to post a lot of lines like that, good personal
He likes the men in tights, watching old tapes his mom bought him
and he even imitates his favorites, no wonder his skill is hitting a rock bottom..
nah, it was too simple of a line
We all battle for different reasons, I'm always rapping for me, shit
anything he writes should be forborne, it's better concealed than having to read it..
dunno if this has been done on him, but i thought it was a nice nameplay
He didn't focus on his verse, he was worried about his kids instead
but he shouldn't have let his mind wander, it's small enough to get lost IN his head..
i'm surprised how many dudes gave u props for this line, its a verrrryyyy old idea
He's weak, I'm leaving this 40 year old geek some scars in bunches
he tried hitting on my grandmother, too bad she had the harder punches..
wording was good but the idea is pretty simple
This ancient fucker is prone to diseases, he's a walking dead emcee
and I wouldn't be surprised if he got a tumour.. a pyramid made in his memory..
nice closer, surprised i ain't seen this before
This match was alright, there were some dope lines in it, but it wasn't champ match worthy. Born had the direct bi which was my fave line of the battle, and his bitch and periodic table ideas were good, but there were some simple n' played ideas in there. Bar had the raw, forborne, and tumor lines that i was feelin, so it was pretty much 3 quotables a piece for each. Really close battle, but I liked Bar's quotables slightly more so I'll give it to him.
Vote - Bar
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