Horrorcore Battle
10 lines
House rules
No bullshit
Due 12 pm eastern
Deadproof
Camoflawge.
Horrorcore Battle
10 lines
House rules
No bullshit
Due 12 pm eastern
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..Distinct Advantage..
The future Gauntlet 4 champ is checking in.
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
Aye man sorry bout makin the deadline so late I didn't think I would have time but I'm dropping now..
Like I'm in a rock band I'll be walkin around with brass knuckles like they was diamond rings
So I'll smash this kid in the face with my guitar and choke him with the six strings
After football practice, he want to fight right here and not in the streets
So I'll hit him in the face with shoulder pads and stomp on his foot with spiked cleats.
If that wasn't enough he want to take it to school in the classroom the next day
So I'll smack him with a math book, and make him gargle a can of pepper spray
It's done right? He's in the hospital bed still wantin to start some trouble with me
So I put the paddles on max, "CLEAR!", and shock em with 2000 volts of electricity.
2 years later this kid still think he can beat me in a fight.. What a bitch!
So I'll slice him up, put em in a body bag and throw him in tha ditch..
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
I'll start by pullin every damn tooth n crown from this punk
It wont be depression when hes found down in the dumps
I'd rape ur sister prick... and when I'm done with the bitch
hang u both from a tree...
so u could finally say u hung with a chick
call it final destination cause this fag was destined to die
so my machete will spill his guts like he's confessin a lie
a few weapons to try.. battery acid on ur neck n ya eyes
the smell of burnin skin as it seperates flesh from ya spine
I'm glad u changed ur name cause I'm liking u better dead
no beef, I'll just bury the hatchet...next to ur severed head
10.
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..Distinct Advantage..
Ugh.. Rediculous....... Uppin for votes.. Come on yall.. Don't b lozers
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
pretty onesided battle on the reals. i mean most of deads stuff was kinda stretched and just dragged on. Must of it could have been cut shoters....Camo i could see you really didnt put all into this battle cause you had a couple played punches but still did better then dead
Vote. camo
lmao @ camo
your getting better man....your wording is alot more polished
here than verses like ur title match with barcotic was...dunno
how since u don't battle that much, but keep it up man
and stay doing whatever ur doing to keep elevating
proof...u need better concepts...u got everything else decent
but ur concepts, set ups and executions are just not that
hard hitting or humorous...and you need one of the two
to win matches...
vote - camo
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0-2 uppin
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
Vote - Camo...
Dead, you really didn't have anything, you kept giving locations and how you would kill him and what with by the location, that's not punching...Camo had some ok bars, most was played but it was enough to beat Dead...I like Camo's rhyme scheme as well, very nice use of multis and internals...
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Like I'm in a rock band I'll be walkin around with brass knuckles like they was diamond rings
So I'll smash this kid in the face with my guitar and choke him with the six strings
- meh
After football practice, he want to fight right here and not in the streets
So I'll hit him in the face with shoulder pads and stomp on his foot with spiked cleats.
-balh
If that wasn't enough he want to take it to school in the classroom the next day
So I'll smack him with a math book, and make him gargle a can of pepper spray
-not feeling
It's done right? He's in the hospital bed still wantin to start some trouble with me
So I put the paddles on max, "CLEAR!", and shock em with 2000 volts of electricity.
- decent
2 years later this kid still think he can beat me in a fight.. What a bitch!
So I'll slice him up, put em in a body bag and throw him in tha ditch..
-no
vs
I'll start by pullin every damn tooth n crown from this punk
It wont be depression when hes found down in the dumps
-okish
I'd rape ur sister prick... and when I'm done with the bitch
hang u both from a tree...
so u could finally say u hung with a chick
-lmao
call it final destination cause this fag was destined to die
so my machete will spill his guts like he's confessin a lie
-ok
a few weapons to try.. battery acid on ur neck n ya eyes
the smell of burnin skin as it seperates flesh from ya spine-
not really
I'm glad u changed ur name cause I'm liking u better dead
no beef, I'll just bury the hatchet...next to ur severed head
no
vote=camo
wasnt too pleased by the verses posted up in here... like tim, said...Camo didnt put all his effort into this yet somehow... it was enough to beat proof.
with that said, proof should work on not writing such stretched lines and make sure he fully thinks of his punches cuz some were just "Wtf" to me...
V/camo
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