TopDolla vs. Vagina Muffin

[TopDolla]

thanks for the votes so far guys

3-1

uppin

[Vagina Muffin]

uppin

[Camoflawge.]

This shit talking from his mouth goes and triggers beams
That will take off a muffin top like chicks in bigger jeans!
Your probibility in this battle....nevermind...let's end your chance
How can your name be vagina...and you ain't in any women's pants!?
Stepping to the king? It seems as if for days you puff that weed
A muffin ain't fresh, in fact he has got to be baked to fuck with me
You stayed on the safe side, so this rhyme will be the crusifix
Hate to tell you i fucked you, but your a vagina so your used to it!
Your a poor dude, there is no paper quanities going up in your head
Even if your a vagina muffin you couldn't get your 'cut' in the 'bread'!

1. Not bad, cool opener.
2. Setup was wack but aight, decent nameplay.
3. Nah, weak...
4. Another wack setup but I lol'd at this punch, not very hard but humorous.
5. Aight.

Vs.

1-2 hours? Against me your gunna need MORE TIME, but I'll make sure this WHORE DIES//
Cuz you wanna be me so bad, that when you die, my life flashes before YOUR EYES//
I'll make sure that I'm the one who kills you, and when the police question me i'll DENY IT TOO//
Ya brain powers lacking, cuz I can describe you with all the letters except for I AND Q//
Battlin me is like facin an army, and i'm curious to see how you DELT WITH THE TROOPS//
Work on ya verses, honestly nigga I've seen better lyrics in my ALPHABET SOUP//
I'll BREAK YA WRIST, so when I win this match you cant even MAKE A FIST//
Dude you FAKE AS SHIT, and the only time you're ''number 1'' is when i ''TAKE A PISS''*//
NIGGA IM BLESSED, and if you provoke me you'll end up with a SHIV IN YA CHEST//
You no good a battlin', so why dont you just ''make like a cop'' and ''GIVE IT ARREST''// (a rest)

*People often refer to taking a piss as ''number 1''.

1. Seen this punch before almost word for word, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and just write it off as played...
2. Another played concept but I thought it was aight, nice flow.
3. Nah, wack and played.
4. Played.... Noooo.
5. Played, again.. lol....


I haven't seen this many played concepts in one verse in a hot minute... I gotta give this one to top dolla for comin harder, more creative overall...

V/ TopD

[TopDolla]

thanks man

4-1

uppin

[Vagina Muffin]

uppin

[Vagina Muffin]

Upppinnnnnnnnn

[Vagina Muffin]

uppin....................

[TopDolla]

lol damn like for reals huh?

Uppin like a MA

[s3oul]

vote-topdolla. he had the harder punches and vagina's shit was too stretched and weak ...

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