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    HW Champ Match: Truc (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 - 0)

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    hey, 20

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    I'm sticking to 16 until the playoffs..

    Good luck Truc....

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic Vs. Cry
    He should apologize for his wackness and all that he's done in the past,
    ..cuz he's pretty good at making amends..size 12 boot end up in his ass..
    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that


    Good Luck.
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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic
    Hmm.. pretty close battle.. Truc started out with a few real nice bars.. then, not so much towards the end.. Arch's verse was filled with some cool concepts, and he used a couple of them decent.. but most of them were used wrong and/or worded wrong.. I got the quotables tied, but I gotta go with Truc here, because his best shit was a bit better than Arch's.. cool read.. \\//ote: Truculent by a cunt hair....
    Fuck Truc..........

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it..
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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible

    vs

    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..

    Man, this battle was disappointing. Those were the only lines I was feeling tbh. I've sat here writing stuff out but it's kind of odd to call. Bar had the smoother wording, but he was flipping punches in really weak ways. Just seemed like he was really reaching to make a punch out of stuff. They just didn't make an impact to me.

    But Truc fucked up a lot of his concepts in weird ways. The two I quoted were solid but fairly straightforward. Bar had the better quote (that line was pretty good) but Truc had two which were better than anything in the rest of Bar's verse. I read Bar's verse first and thought damn Truc must have got this, but.. i dunno. I can't call it and I can't be assed to delete all this and rewrite it later, so...

    I'll return I guess.


    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    ^solid hit, not too creative
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    ^blah, a weak concept
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    ^'you we are a champ at the bit'? lol. anyway, are you trying to flip champing at the bit? it doesn't really work anyway
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    ^weak punch, violence needs to be more creative or it's blah
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    ^almost ok, but a weak punch
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    ^not fresh feeling, but a solid, well executed line. I liked it.
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    ^felt really forced to me, a reach
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
    ^What? no

    vs

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    ^really really bad imo. you're using two words from your own quote from last week to flip into a punch?
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    ^the wordplay is fine, but the punch is so weak
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    ^another reach to me. it's like you're setting up something then connecting it some other thing that relates to it in a really loose way
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    ^a bit better
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    ^there is cleverness to this even if similar homeless flips have been done to death. i appreciated the wittiness and it tied in well. best bar of the battle.
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    ^this was the worst line in your verse, ridiculously simple. this newb stuff man
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    ^again the flip is just kinda dull. the wordplay just about works, but punch isn't hard.
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
    ^concept was weak again. really really simple, random violent punch

    WTF HAPPENED? This battle was really awful. Sorry but it was.

    Barcotic gets it by the tinyest of margins basically for having smoother wording of really weak concepts. Maybe i'm being overly harsh, but this was a HW Match. Ehh, well, constructive criticism. I've seen better from both of you, obviously.

    V/Barcotic
    Last edited by phlymo; August 5th, 2009 at 04:25 PM

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    good
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    decent at best
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    haha nice
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    nope.
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    meh..
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    cool.
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    ok..
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
    ehhh.




    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    ehhh..
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    lol cool.
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    decent.
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    played wp. ok punch.
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    cool.
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    ehhh..
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    alright good..
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
    nah.


    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible

    vs.

    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..


    Arlight, decent battle..i thought it would be a little better but there was still a few nice bars from each. Based on who had the harder hitting stuff, and more creative stuff in my eyes, i gotta give it to Truculent.

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    phlymo gets to decide whether my vote counts or not, not you

    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    its aight, not great
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    played, corny
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    ehhh, wording was really awkward, even things like were had an unneeded apostrophe
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    nerve stuff has been done and this one is reaching a little, i mean its one thing to rips nerves out or something but putting his on a shelf, its iffy, average
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    i get the wp but the way you worded it is very indirect, needs harsher wording
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    aight flip
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    i liked this a lot except for the setup, i would have said something about playoffs instead of guns and maybe changed the first line a bit too, drop a tight single, etc..
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
    average, playedish misdirection

    vs.

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    meh, this was average at best, lackluster opener
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    this was cool, setup could have been better but otherwise hot
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    i get the craft beads reference but this is still meh, not a strong enough concept to construct a punch around, gay!
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    i've seen the wp before, its average the way you did it i guess
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    flow/rhyme was off, which you really need for this kind of flip
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    dude- this kind of line is completely not worthy of a champ match- its played and its corny
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    this wp has been done many many times, this is near-bite status no lie
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
    good close

    v/ bar

    truc didn't really have any haymakers to me and his wording struggled in spots, bars limewire and closer were both pretty solid, rest of his shit struggled, both of you seriously slacked for a champ match,

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©

    .....VS
    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....

    GOOD BATTLE I enjoyed reading this both came good truc u had some decent shit decent creativity..your wordplay was on point it u didn't have any strecthed bars ya punches were hitting...bar u had a good verse as usual couple creative bars good wording and structure I really liked ya opener it was creative and good personal.....this was a close battle but I give it to bar 4 his opnere even though I was gonna vote for truc 4 his copy line no hate overall good battle keep this shit up
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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    so does commissioners vote count? cuz u said u dont want him voting...

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    lol, good
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    played
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    no, plus it's sloppy
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    ok flip
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    it's alright
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    played
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    it's ok
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
    ok

    vs.

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    lol
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    dope
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    connection lacked imo, was alright tho
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    coo
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    played
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    nooooooo
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    played
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
    coo

    so yea.. mad close. it wasn't the best battle but it was alright. both had some hard shit & then some wtf/no/played stuff. i think bar edged it though.. barely. limewire was lotb.

    v/bar.. by a fleas penis

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post

    ....Fuck Truc..

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    ok
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    nah
    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
    nah
    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
    coo
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    ok
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    nah
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    weak
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
    cool



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    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
    mehh
    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
    ok
    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
    true, but bad wording
    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
    mehh
    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
    nah
    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
    ok
    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
    mehh, no
    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
    mehh



    damn, after reading bars i thought truc would've had this because of how weak it was, but honestly truc's wasnt any better....im really having a hard time picking a winner. but....i think that a couple of bars lines were decent, so he can get this.

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    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay

    Cool opener, kinda funny

    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade

    Eh not feeling it

    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying

    more of a statement than a punchline

    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards

    okay

    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope

    whatever else/ails is a stretch in itself

    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible

    this is kinda dope but its really the same concept as your first bar

    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©

    eh....

    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that

    okay closer


    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..

    Eh kinda corny

    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..

    Not feeling

    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..

    okay..

    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..

    This is cool

    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..

    It's creative

    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..

    this is kinda corny but it's alright

    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..

    I've seen the concept used before but it's a new flip

    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....

    Strong closer


    I kinda expect a heavyweight match to be some dope shit...really both were disappointing and using some REALLY basic concepts. Truc I could've sworn I saw a freeflow you posted on another site that had some good lines, a going down in history line that was dope and I would've expected something better.


    After reading the battle over again I think Bar had maybe 1 or 2 solid bars that barely gave him enough for the win.

    Overall Vote - Barcotic

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible


    vs.

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
    LMFAOOOOA WIofjaOWFIOA
    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....


    vote; barcotic..wow i actually thought bar took this pretty easily imo. truc had alot of stuff that wasnt worded right, and more misses than hits actually 1 hit as quoted, i wasnt feeling the rest. bar had some nice bars, and those one i quoted made me laugh..lmfao at the starstruck line that was the LOTB imo...

    anyways decent battle, but no upset i guess.

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    Re: HW Match: Truculent (4 - 0) vs. Barcotic (4 -

    Truc:

    See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
    So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay

    u shouldntve used this....his amends line was better than yours, you called his shit some forced and wack wordplay and thats how your amends line came off...

    Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
    If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade

    lol...this is coo right here...kinda funny...decent diss

    Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
    Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying

    ur wording is slackin so far...kinda played anyways

    Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
    This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards


    lol...this was decent here...decent wordplay

    This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
    Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope

    lmao...this was pretty tight...

    Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
    Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible

    played, lame, etc

    Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
    So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©

    u fukd up the wording here...coulda been tight

    I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
    Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that


    uh-uh


    Bar

    Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
    he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..

    decent start here, concept is played of course

    He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
    we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..

    nice shit here...cool wordplay and some lightweight imagery here too

    Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
    but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..

    lol...disgusting dude

    Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
    but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..

    cool wordplay

    I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
    and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..

    lol...decent shit here...no pun intended

    He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
    and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..

    played as fuck!

    I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
    and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..

    decent...wrote it before, seen it before (concept)

    He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
    he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....


    decent closer

    overall: i think bar got this pretty easy...pretty one sided. truc you had some decdent ideas and concepts but ur wording aint really help u pull them off while bar was just lettin the zingers fly....

    v/Bar...by an elephant schlong

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