...Art Vs. TJC

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bump 3

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up 4...c'mon fuckers

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Can i get some votes, please

[worden.]

yah. art got it easy.. tj you have too many commas and shit. ur tryna say too many things in ur punches. have ONE idea per punch.. and then just form ur whole bar around it. make both lines tie into the same thing. try use a simile or a phrase to start off with. then try some wordplay. art u were alright. u done enough to win. the cop line was coo.

v/art

rtf on some of my battles.. i've soo many open. ugh.

[Camoflawge.]

You should've probably just ducked me...I might even let you try to sway...
we already know the outcome...
...Just like your dates, you getting fucked.....just in the wrong way...
Meh...
Dude could trade liquor for L's...he'd be drunk as fuck, brain'll be rattled...
Then when he got pulled over...
...He'd have a legit excuse for cop'ing out on our battle...
Ok...
you're 0-4, that's ridiculous...your verses couldn't get any cruder...
hind sight's 20/20............I still can't see a Victory in your future...
needed to be worded better
even your life's whack...you should probably find another hobby...
like model airplanes...s'the only way you'd be fly on the internet, doggy...
meh...
this is really a waste of time...cause you were hopeless from the start...
he has no confidence...
...Hell, even his post'll end Vote=...Art...
I liked this

VS

uck my losses, fuck this shit, you know, I'm tired, fucking your mom five time
and your so ugly, she showed me you, never knew you sucked dick, when u were nine
No
I'm sorry to disapoint you, an easy win?, but your mom sell's herself on the street
but with a pre-mature birth
I wounder if you know your true dad, I herd he ejaculated asleep
No
you think your all that.... and I'm a newb, but you need to write a better sentence
did I mention you swayed
cause I checked your battles, and you lost agaisnt Divine Intervention
no
go ahead quote me bitch, yeah I know, you cant help it, without a quote it aint art
but art shouldnt be that hard to find
under a shoe maybe, when ur brains suffer a broken spark
Needs to be worded better...
I go hard, and you, kinda like what your mom did to my dick, made it all numb and solf
but fuck the beef talk.... I'd rather do some music, then to see you ontop, when you fall off
No

TJC you need to elevate, Art you have alot of potential, some lines could be worded better but if you keep elevating you could be really good

Vote=Art

I agree with Sanity's breakdown... I got Art taking this one with harderd punches and just more consistency overall. TJC some of your bars are stretched, work on that... Try to come up with some better concepts and shit.

V/ Art