lx-Pikachu-xl vs MaRVJ

[KnowP]

been back 4 nights...now u talkin like you nice.....where????
ya rap career like 'toy story' u wont have a 'buzz' 4 a few 'light years'.
ya moms is what i call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose 2 so if they say 'your-up" they talkin bout a "foreign country".

vs

lack of respect

Pik copy and pasted which shoes there was lack of creativity and originality.
Marv had some old concepts but flipped them okay. too much filler but good structure and okay punches

v/ marv

RTF:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=404328

[MaRVJ]

damm dudes still bitin in the 09 smh

[Coexist]

Lol, This is "Biter Fest" - Pika Bit from GM, The two dudes on GM bit from LB.. and the story goes on..

[Camoflawge.]

all my bars is betta than ur ryhmes..so look j's destine 4 more shyne.
n you mad cuz ya 'aol' rappin ass only gon see 'america-online'.
Lol, this concept is played the fuck out b... N you didn't even really flip it, bad opener.
ima beast son i'll break ya mother's kneck pull a lung out ya spouse.
........u picked a good name cuzz
just like the real pikachu we dont understand shit dat come out ya mouth.
Setup was weak and the punch was worded badly, the concept was all that great but it could have been executed better.
i been back 4 nights...now u talkin like you nice.....where????
ya rap career like 'toy story' u wont have a 'buzz' 4 a few 'light years'.
Another played concept... I've seen this shit flipped many times.
ya moms is what i call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose 2 so if they say 'your-up" they talkin bout a "foreign country".
Setup was weak again but the punch flowe well n I thought it was aight.
dis fagget lie's!...talkin bout in da he shoot his gun & be stabin guy's.
put jay in ya PaRa-graph PaRa-medics gon tell ya moms her boy's PaRa-lized.
Mehh, not really feeling this bar... I see all the para's but it was pretty simple, no wit to it.

Vs.

Since you STEPPED IN FOR THE LAST QUEER I'll be teachin LESSONS WITH THE RAPS HERE when I put the *Steel to this Pussy* like he's "CHECKED IN FOR A PAP SMEAR"!!~
Nah, setup was weak and the punch was pretty wack too.
...Now "Kneel to the King", I'm *BREAKING-KNEES*-with-this-diction, "Facing-Me's-a-Conviction" like "NUNS THAT DATE A PREACHER" I'll "Rip your `LUNGS" TO "TAKE A BREATHER"...You better RUN OR FACE THE REAPER cuz my PUNCHES SWAY YOUR FEATURES and "Collapse your fuckin (Sole)" till you have to use your "TONGUE TO *LACE YOUR SNEAKERS*"!!~
Bars are fuckin stretched as hell b... No real setup... Punch was aight, pretty played but decent flip.
...I've Come-to-slay-this-creature: you'll get FAME WHEN YOUR DEALT as I'm MAIMIN YOUR HEALTH I'll even *Fold ya Spine Forward* till you're "Givin BRAIN TO YOURSELF"!!~
Nah, played concept, flip wasn't all that creative.
...You'll FACE YOUR FEAR OF THE DARK when I'm AIMIN NEAR TO THE MARK cuz I don't mean *Showin Love for Britney* when I'm "PLACIN *SPEARS IN YOUR HEART*"!!~
Played... Work on setting up your punches.
...You're HARMLESS THEN YOU ROCK A MIC? This SPARTAN ENDS YOUR TALK FOR LIFE cuz you've got *Less Punches in this Bout* then "ARMLESS MEN IN BOXING FIGHTS"!!~
Nahhhh dude, what is this like an '03 replay? Lol.. Sorry but I seen it before.

- Both came with some played ass concepts, but I gotta give this one to Marv for coming a bit less played. Pikachu was consistent in that category, I'll give him that.

V/ Marv

[MaRVJ]

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[worden.]

you won. contact a mod.

[MaRVJ]

y isnt dis closed yet????

[MaRVJ]

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[MaRVJ]

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[MaRVJ]

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[Vallus]

vote marv



better punches...pika had a few decent ones but his ish was mostly
just mutli's with no directions about he does this and he does that
on some statement type shit....needs more punch direction to
win a match than he brought....