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    $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    LLL Season 11: Week 3

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    sorry man all i had time for

    good luck..


    You shouldve signed up for this prick u lack the skills we usually require
    To bad this the only league u cant fake an injury as an excuse to retire
    No one listens to $criptures, I been on hiatus im back and teaching this goof
    Most agree, when you talk outta ure ass is the only time ure speaking the truth
    Your wordings off, concepts suck, im better, should I continue further dukes
    These are the reasons you’ll lose to go with the fact no one has heard of you
    Mods going out of his way for a dope league, make sure u say thanks to phly
    Then u drop that shitty verse last week, and that’s how you repay the guy
    You can tell my shits keyed I don’t give a fuck, I face this loser now
    Your reps shaky as earthquakes how it continues to keep losing ground
    Step up your game, its without merit, u improvement is wack in prime
    But then I read your verses and feel like im going back in time



    -W.Rite

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    12 lines?! ain't that against the rules?...well ok, i'll match u i guess.....

    You homeless fag, you use candy and toys to lure ya victims
    You had a jack in the box...till he decided he couldn't live under those poor conditions
    I heard Mr.W.Rite was back, so i'm amp'd up, punchin him toothless
    He knows it's over. S'why he's in his avy pic, chunkin the dueces
    I heard this fag's workin on audio, figures since he's such a lame at text
    Well hard thugs might bump ur shit.....if its in their way durin anal sex
    Ur bitch loves fly boys and lets me and Arch slam her while she sucks Hex
    and ur frequent flyer miles?...trying to figure out who she should fuck next
    Bitch take the plunge, i'm hittin u with everything, til u break at once
    Why bother hittin u with the kitchen sink when u couldn't even take the Sponge?
    Phly made a mistake indeed, now he looks for tips from me to make him leave
    Well look Phly, i need Rite...then threw a jab, makin him vacate the league

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    Nothing..

    Vs


    Bitch take the plunge, i'm hittin u with everything, til u break at once
    Why bother hittin u with the kitchen sink when u couldn't even take the Sponge?

    ^ROFL!! honestly, that was fuckin' halarious.. nice personal, cool concept.. maybe coula worded it a little better, but fuck it.. that made me laugh.. overall, Write slacked.. I'm not even gonna ask, cuz I know he did.. his verse was pretty gay and statement'ish.. it lacked that sting that I know he can bring.. iunno, but Script's verse, for the most part, was also pretty bad.. that one bar that I quoted tho, DEFINITLY won this for him in my opinion.. pretty weak battle, but.... \\//ote: $criptures

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    You can tell my shits keyed I don’t give a fuck, I face this loser now
    Your reps shaky as earthquakes how it continues to keep losing ground

    vs.

    I heard Mr.W.Rite was back, so i'm amp'd up, punchin him toothless
    He knows it's over. S'why he's in his avy pic, chunkin the dueces
    Bitch take the plunge, i'm hittin u with everything, til u break at once
    Why bother hittin u with the kitchen sink when u couldn't even take the Sponge?

    Mr. Write, I've seen some of ur stuff in the archives, u have some dope stuff, but this wasn't quite there. Ur opener was decent, but just not witty enough to quote. As a whole, I felt like u just lacked creativity or personals. $criptures, u came okay, the two lines I quoted were decent, especially the Sponge personal, that was really nicely done and worded well. Jack in the box thing u worded okay, but its played. Only thing I really didn't like in ur verse at all was the anal thing, that's kinda a no no cuz its newbish. Overall, Write mighta been slightly more consistent, but it wasn't by much, and I think $criptures Sponge line won it.

    Vote - $criptures

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    You shouldve signed up for this prick u lack the skills we usually require
    To bad this the only league u cant fake an injury as an excuse to retire

    vs.

    Bitch take the plunge, i'm hittin u with everything, til u break at once
    Why bother hittin u with the kitchen sink when u couldn't even take the Sponge?

    Vote - Scriptures - his personal attack was better than the retire bar from Rite..those bars i quoted were only decent though, nothing stood out in this battle.

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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    You can tell my shits keyed I don’t give a fuck, I face this loser now
    Your reps shaky as earthquakes how it continues to keep losing ground

    vs

    nothing


    yea write obviously keyed this on the fly. scrip just needs to tweak all aspects of his text alittle. nothing was overtly awful, well, maybe a line or 2, but nothing that cant be helped. even tho i think write had the only real qoutable, overall i was feelin scrips verse alittle more. jst for the effort and attempt at wit.

    v/scrip
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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    You shouldve signed up for this prick u lack the skills we usually require
    To bad this the only league u cant fake an injury as an excuse to retire

    ok, but I'm sure some one could pull it off.. Broken hand maybe?!

    No one listens to $criptures, I been on hiatus im back and teaching this goof
    Most agree, when you talk outta ure ass is the only time ure speaking the truth

    i don't know..

    Your wordings off, concepts suck, im better, should I continue further dukes
    These are the reasons you’ll lose to go with the fact no one has heard of you

    ok

    Mods going out of his way for a dope league, make sure u say thanks to phly
    Then u drop that shitty verse last week, and that’s how you repay the guy

    good

    You can tell my shits keyed I don’t give a fuck, I face this loser now
    Your reps shaky as earthquakes how it continues to keep losing ground

    no

    Step up your game, its without merit, u improvement is wack in prime
    But then I read your verses and feel like im going back in time
    ok

    Vs.

    You homeless fag, you use candy and toys to lure ya victims
    You had a jack in the box...till he decided he couldn't live under those poor conditions

    no

    I heard Mr.W.Rite was back, so i'm amp'd up, punchin him toothless
    He knows it's over. S'why he's in his avy pic, chunkin the dueces

    i guess.. "chuckin the dueces" i laughed at that for the wrong reason..

    I heard this fag's workin on audio, figures since he's such a lame at text
    Well hard thugs might bump ur shit.....if its in their way durin anal sex

    funny, good, funny

    Ur bitch loves fly boys and lets me and Arch slam her while she sucks Hex
    and ur frequent flyer miles?...trying to figure out who she should fuck next

    that was ugly

    Bitch take the plunge, i'm hittin u with everything, til u break at once
    Why bother hittin u with the kitchen sink when u couldn't even take the Sponge?


    god no

    Phly made a mistake indeed, now he looks for tips from me to make him leave
    Well look Phly, i need Rite...then threw a jab, makin him vacate the league

    fuck no

    Why is this close.. didn't right just drop a "I don't want to no show" verse? How can you see that, and not just take the battle scrip? I haven't read anything from you. I know rite will write a lot better then that in later weeks.. i just don't know. Scripts had the best bar... i only like 1 of rites lines.. but scripts had some corny shit.. very frustrating to decide....




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    Re: $criptures (0 - 1) vs. Mr W.Rite (0 - 1)

    $criptures wins (1 - 1)
    Mr W.Rite loses (0 - 2)

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