King Ancel (1 - 1) vs. Mariah (0 - 0)

[phlymo]

LLL Season 11: Week 3

Standard Rules (found in LLL Office)

Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)

16 Lines Minimum

Vote on 5 Battles
MUST LEAVE LINKS in your check in, or lose 2 votes per missing link

Good Luck

[Rant]

check.



let's go 16-20

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7176011
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...532/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...91#post7174491
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...533/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7175475
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...523/index.html

[Mariah]

yes. 16 is good.

[Mariah]

idk who the hell you are but stop talking to my man you dumb bitch.

Anc what I say is fact, I got the messages to prove you’re a bitch, kid
You can’t battle me because we’d have to get your girlfriend’s permission
Man, you're in such a hurry, but no matter what you're a straight slob
So if you got some ants in your pants, then I guess pilates has paid off
Great job, it’s over…your career is up in flames when I’m smashing
So I was waiting for the smoke signal, but FINISH HIM kept flashing
Sit down and shut up, wait until the queen speaks, I render the fear
Damn, I may consider this kingdom founded…acting like a jester in here
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
Get dominated, no fantasy – it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly…they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with


There's 16. And pz.

[Rant]

Just so it's known...I did steal that line from Brandon and used it on FG thinking nobody would see it. Do what you will, but I didn't sign up, obviously for this reason. I'm not a biter, neither of us had used it although I shouldn't have done what I did. Don't take it out on him - it was me who "actually" deserves it. Thanks for reading.

anyways,


i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
so with that said, your in DOPE? they act like your one of the homies,
or is it that you ride your brother so hard they made you one of the roadies?
them bland punches don't work, it's obvious you've been pre-writing for weeks
shit your cram sessions for a verse could even give inspiration to geeks
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.



bitch...

[Born To Kill]

Sit down and shut up, wait until the queen speaks, I render the fear
Damn, I may consider this kingdom founded…acting like a jester in here
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
Get dominated, no fantasy – it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly…they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with

VS


i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.

Very tight battle...
I got it tied on quotables...but for me...just my opinion.
I think Ancel nailed this with more aggression.
He hit harder and I think wittier. That MJ punch had me like, "Woah!"...
Still, very close...even better than the last battle I voted on where I said could be battle of the week. This one tops that.

Vote: Ancel

[Manic.]

Anc what I say is fact, I got the messages to prove you’re a bitch, kid
You can’t battle me because we’d have to get your girlfriend’s permission
ehh...not too hard.
Man, you're in such a hurry, but no matter what you're a straight slob
So if you got some ants in your pants, then I guess pilates has paid off
decent.
Great job, it’s over…your career is up in flames when I’m smashing
So I was waiting for the smoke signal, but FINISH HIM kept flashing
nah.
Sit down and shut up, wait until the queen speaks, I render the fear
Damn, I may consider this kingdom founded…acting like a jester in here
alright..
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
lol cool..
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
straight forward, kinda harsh.
Get dominated, no fantasy – it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly…they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag
seen similar..just ok.
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with
nah.




i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
decent personal, wording is off.
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
lmao..cool.
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
decent, decent.
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
personal is there, good.
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
cool.
so with that said, your in DOPE? they act like your one of the homies,
or is it that you ride your brother so hard they made you one of the roadies?
ehhh.
them bland punches don't work, it's obvious you've been pre-writing for weeks
shit your cram sessions for a verse could even give inspiration to geeks
ehhh.
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.
pretty cool.



Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED

vs.

slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.


Vote//Ancel - Mariah had a couple nice ones, and she remained pretty consistent, but Ancel had a few dope ones that topped anything Mariah was able to present to us. Good battle.

[Axe.]

Fuck your crew and your lifestyle?an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You?re so full of shit, you?re constipated
You?re the first legendary member I know who?s yet to be NOMINATED
Get dominated, no fantasy ? it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly?they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag

vs

i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it

Ancel came pretty dope, nothin in his verse was bad pretty consistent , Mariah seemed like she worded somethings funny

V- Ancel

[The Commisioner]

Anc what I say is fact, I got the messages to prove you’re a bitch, kid
You can’t battle me because we’d have to get your girlfriend’s permission
assuming is it true it connects somewhat, i thought the wording could have been tighter, its aight
Man, you're in such a hurry, but no matter what you're a straight slob
So if you got some ants in your pants, then I guess pilates has paid off
hasn't everyone used an ants in your pants line on ancel already? kinda killed it for me
Great job, it’s over…your career is up in flames when I’m smashing
So I was waiting for the smoke signal, but FINISH HIM kept flashing
lol at the mortal kombat reference, thats old school, the punch itself is more clever than hard-hitting though
Sit down and shut up, wait until the queen speaks, I render the fear
Damn, I may consider this kingdom founded…acting like a jester in here
iv seen the kingdom wp before, and the setup was bad
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
lolz, hits decent
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
ok
Get dominated, no fantasy – it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly…they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag
ok flip
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with
creative, not bad

vs.

i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
that's a really strong quote, there's not really a good reason for bringing chrit into the punch if you ask me, you could have had a murderous opener if you did something different here, as is it can slide because of the strength of the quote
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
decent flip, aight
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
on point but weak rhyming sets it back
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
this was a much better use of the quote, aight
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
yea maybe.. you should really link us or something because it would be asking a lot for me to go look it up
so with that said, your in DOPE? they act like your one of the homies,
or is it that you ride your brother so hard they made you one of the roadies?
a little simple but ok
them bland punches don't work, it's obvious you've been pre-writing for weeks
shit your cram sessions for a verse could even give inspiration to geeks
nah...
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.
nah...

heavy-hitters

Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with

vs.

slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
so with that said, your in DOPE? they act like your one of the homies,
or is it that you ride your brother so hard they made you one of the roadies?

mariah finished her verse pretty hard i just feel like ancel started swinging a little sooner, still a relatively close battle

v/ ancel

[Rant]

can we get more votes?

[worden.]

dbl post

[worden.]

Anc what I say is fact, I got the messages to prove you’re a bitch, kid
You can’t battle me because we’d have to get your girlfriend’s permission
Great job, it’s over…your career is up in flames when I’m smashing
So I was waiting for the smoke signal, but FINISH HIM kept flashing
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED


vs.

i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead



i liked a lot of ancel's verse. mariah's too actually. both tried to attack each other on a personal level and not just use generic concepts. ancel had some nice lines.. i liked the brandon line the most. mariah's legend line was roflz. i just think ancel was slightly more consistent.

v/ancel

[Cody Nash]

Anc what I say is fact, I got the messages to prove you’re a bitch, kid
You can’t battle me because we’d have to get your girlfriend’s permission
aiight, could've done something so much doper tho
Man, you're in such a hurry, but no matter what you're a straight slob
So if you got some ants in your pants, then I guess pilates has paid off
aiight
Great job, it’s over…your career is up in flames when I’m smashing
So I was waiting for the smoke signal, but FINISH HIM kept flashing
coo I guess, bit corny
Sit down and shut up, wait until the queen speaks, I render the fear
Damn, I may consider this kingdom founded…acting like a jester in here
not diggin it
Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
fuck you bish! lol
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
lol, aiight
Get dominated, no fantasy – it takes one swing to have you break in half
The lines you drop are so ugly…they need a 10-foot pole and a paper bag
played idea
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with
ROFL.. that's what I'm talkin about

vs

i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
lmao.. aiight
slut, just shut up. your the ugliest, your words get you murdered, see
i just want you to keep your chin up, and yes bitch i'm talking about surgically
decent.. same joke as before tho
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
aiight, get off her looks tho.. 3 punches in a row about 'em aint exactly fresh
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
nice.. harsh
ya stranded, get handed, then i'll do the moon walk on ya back & ya head
i heard ya audios, that little boy voice could bring M.J back from the dead
lololol.. you'd have to hear her to agree.. good hit
so with that said, your in DOPE? they act like your one of the homies,
or is it that you ride your brother so hard they made you one of the roadies?
eh, aiight
them bland punches don't work, it's obvious you've been pre-writing for weeks
shit your cram sessions for a verse could even give inspiration to geeks
nah
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.
nice.. again


ancel's verse was WAY harsher.. mariah had the best punch for me..
good battle, ancel killed it..


vote Ancel

[The Archetype]

Fuck your crew and your lifestyle…an unhappy home can break fast
I mean, you live in a fucking halfway house that looks more like a gay frat
And what the fuck at your title? You’re so full of shit, you’re constipated
You’re the first legendary member I know who’s yet to be NOMINATED
Watch me leave you with a scarred face, avy is busting your teeth in
I’d only say hello to a “little friend” – if I was the slut that you sleep with

vs

i've seen your writtens, read your story, now we can take it you bit
feel happy, finally your looks aren't the only thing that make you like chrit
you look like a monster, so actin like you look good you just need to quit it
i could call you a dick- but with your looks, it'd probably cost you to get it
think you could fade me with a verse? what type of bullshit did you cram in?
there was a couple that i liked- and i expect another apology for brandon
and we've all KNOWN your a slut, so why aren't you admitting it now?
we dont turn a blind eye to your verses, we turn it into your mouth.

pretty good shit here... Mariah had a good verse... misses weren't terrible... Ancel came hard... like i could feel the aggression when i read this shit... lol... some of the bars were really funny and harsh

vote Ancel...

[phlymo]

Ancel wins (2 - 1)
Mariah loses (0 - 1)