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    $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    okay

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    Last edited by $in City; July 31st, 2009 at 11:10 PM

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    shit, same as last week. accept if you want

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    Last edited by Meters; August 1st, 2009 at 06:16 PM

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    pretty nice
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    okish, stretched fucked the flow up
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    lol
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    ok but enough miles wp's
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    mehh
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    mehh
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    nah
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    decent



    vs



    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    decent
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    ok
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    nice
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    coo
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    nah
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    ehh
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    lol
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    okish




    overall- decent battle here, both had cool verses. sin kinda stayed on the nameplkay thing for too long, and they were coo but after that his verse really fell off. miles shit wasnt all that great either, but it was coo and he was far more consistent. and in my opinion he took this one.



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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    pretty nice
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    okish, stretched fucked the flow up
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    lol
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    ok but enough miles wp's
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    mehh
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    mehh
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    nah
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    decent



    vs



    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    decent
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    ok
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    nice
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    coo
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    nah
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    ehh
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    lol
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    okish




    overall- decent battle here, both had cool verses. sin kinda stayed on the nameplkay thing for too long, and they were coo but after that his verse really fell off. miles shit wasnt all that great either, but it was coo and he was far more consistent. and in my opinion he took this one.



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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    feelin the wordplay here
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    feelin this
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    nah
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    meh, coulda been better
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    nah. stretched
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    not feelin this
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    meh
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    kinda feelin the win dough/window wordplay but the punch kinda lacked becuz of the wordin in the rest of the bar

    Vs.

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    decent but kinda stretched
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    nice
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    another stretched bar but the punch was there

    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    lol. nice
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    nice
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    nah
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    meh..coulda been better.
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    nah

    decent battle here. Miles just had the better punches in my opinion tho. more witty and consistent.

    Vote-Miles

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex

    vs

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes


    i think miles took this pretty handidly. sin needs to clean up his wording, maybe shorten some lines, and work on concepts. had a few decent ones but not enough. miles came solid enough with some cool concepts. wording was off to me at times but he still gets my vote.


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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss
    for granite

    I've lost all enjoyment for milestones lines.

    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work

    I don't like this

    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex

    ok..

    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones

    I like...

    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland

    It's forced.

    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage

    post'll... I guess so... where's the diss tho?

    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast

    ok

    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up

    out of one what? a building? a shoe? a mouse? a broom? Re-read your lines to make sure it's fluent..

    vs.

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates

    that was cool..

    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels

    I don't know if i like..

    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades

    Almost every card line is old. you can try to stick all the flips in 1 lines.. but it doesn't make it any less played in my eyes.. but it does need to have good wording to work, and you definitely connected it just right.

    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino

    kinda funny..

    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A

    a bit to simple.. "bank of america".. maybe you should make that a bit more clear for our not so local RB members.

    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes

    dope.. wording made have to re-read it tho..

    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson

    i don't know about this..


    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place

    nice wp.. really good. never hurd "front tier".. more like "top tier" but it is what it is.

    overall: sin relied heavily on the measurement concepts.. which are just to fucking old to give any real consideration to, coupled with the lines that i just thought completely missed.. i'd say this was all one big miss in my eyes. meters had fresh concepts and wordplay.. and sin really needed to come with some fresh materiel as well, but he didn't in my eyes.

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex



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    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes

    v/ miles. mainly cuz of the wind chimes line. i didn't really like this battle.. sin's opener was dope as hell tho. close battle but miles edges it. sin u used too many nameplays imo.

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    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland

    vs.

    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes

    I think this was actually pretty close. Sin, u had some nice punches in there and some good concepts, but I think u had 1 too many Miles nameplays and though ur quotables were indeed pretty dope, the rest of ur stuff wasn't that consistent. Miles, ur verse looked rush, but u still managed to take some average concepts like the bell rung thing and bottled aggression and turned them into some dope lines with ur good wording. U had some filler in there like ur closer, but I thought u were more consistent and got this.

    Vote - Miles

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    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones

    vs.

    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    his kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes

    Vote//Sin City - imo miles didn't come to strong, his nps weren't as good as Sin's and his other concepts just didn't appeal to me too much. Sin did use a lot of np but i found the beginning of his verse to be pretty funny and nice..he got this, close though.

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    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    you could have flipped this so much harder, you made it kindof corny, average i guess
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    this is played, wording was fine but its very played
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    too simple, distance plays are played/predictable on him all ready
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    meh
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    this wp doesn't quite work technically, ok try, more on the swag tip anyways
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    this punch lacked the appropiate setup, the whole postal to site rage part was fine
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    meh, too much a simple swagger punch to me
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    this has got to be played, i guess its average

    vs.

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    i can see the creativity to this concept but it has a couple of problem areas to it, ill say its average
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    ehhh, i guess i don't quite get this
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    no, this didn't work well
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    cool, this was nice
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    bailout concepts are played and the wording on this wasn't great, average at best
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    concept struggles to me, its a creative meta but yea..
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    average i guess
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    ok

    really this battle could go either way, city had consistency where miles had the haymakers, there are also a couple of punches from miles that are creative so you don't want to throw them out but worded so badly that you don't think you can let them stay

    im gonna call it a tie and just leave my feedback

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    Re: $in City (2 - 1) vs. Miles (1 - 0)

    I don’t fight fair, I’ll use a rock, stick, or even a brick to cause u damage
    so when I give milestones it aint a reward, its just so he wont take this loss for granite
    ehh.. the idea is played to death, but the nameplay used with it is pretty fresh
    as for the rap biz, you gon stay unemployed, but my rhymes stay abusing jerks
    when cats say ya verse was broke n poor,
    they aint hatin, its just that ya skills could use some work
    kinda corny, wording's off.
    we know about the truth n how it hurts, so now yall thinkin “whats next”
    while im laughin at miles, cuz that’s as close as he can get to the opposite sex
    liked this.. decent
    I feel real bad for the guy cuz its obvious why he’s shy and alone
    He gives the girls his best inch,
    and they always end up takin miles……number outta their phones
    two miles nameplays in a row.. not so good.
    my knuckle game’s on kimbo status, so after this you might wanna get a brain scan
    I doubt we’ll ever rematch,
    cuz he’ll be so scared to see samoa my punches, he’ll flee there from the mainland
    not feelin it
    you gotta bunch of no-shows in ya past, plus ya wack style is strange
    so hopefully history repeats itself, cuz his postal send the whole site into a violent rage
    played wp.. seen it many a time before
    u better never lemme think u a bigot, cuz I’ll stick a ignorant fool fast
    turn the knife on u and have you leakin like a spigot, when the shits on full blast
    simple, but okay
    im $in City bitch! and u wont have a fresh punch for me cuz u sorely suck
    it can be hard to win dough in vegas,
    but I can easily have you thrown outta one from twenty stories up
    actually like this

    vs

    most cats can't see me, but Sin? he shifts through sites, rep ghost w/ accolades
    from bantam weight at B-boys, to phantom weight at PR, 'n here he just evaporates
    dunno if I liked the wording on it, but the concept's coo
    kid's tryna bank on a latter-day prayin', but the saints want Sin all mangled
    bitch got his bell rung so many times, he's now supplyin' wings for angels
    lol, liked this..
    hailin' from the city of cards, he dealt with like Poker when i'm stakin' claims
    says he's one of a kind, til I call his bluff 'n lay him face down like the ace of spades
    aiight-ish.. I've seen a lot of card punches in my days here though
    layin' waste to his whole style, I show him that everything he's seen is feeble
    after this beating, Sin City is gonna look more like an Indian Casino
    lmao.. aiight
    this kid can't take no backlash, mention battle 'n he gonna flee away
    paybacks a bitch, 'n this kid bailout quicker than Obama did B of A
    good..
    this kid is 100 percent pussy, got no grit 'n just flinch when I kill rhymes
    like Sin bottled his aggression... 'n the hollow shits got used as wind chimes
    love this, coulda been smoother but you still hit it well
    it's true I could snooze through this merking 'n beat you in idle fashion
    homie, you barely won when Nick was on more Xanax than Michael Jackson
    okay
    this cat will always be back in the ranks, never anything but the worst case
    man, you can't be a front-tier battler without any talent to explore in the first place
    nah, not feelin it



    $in had more misses than hits, but still had a couple decent concepts..
    his wording's still a bit off but he'll get better. meters had a lot of good
    concepts and a couple misses, in the end he seemed to calm down a
    bit and lose track but he still came out on top imo..


    vote Miles

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