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check ima try n drop fast cuz im finna head 2 the bball court
The only "master-i-see" is the one "fathered-by-me"
Cos the "sikness-u-breathe" comes from "my-own-family"\
Conceiving you was a revolution, one little alteration
Rebels dont eat dick for freedom, meaning-no-ejaculation\
*My "bars" are hard-as-bricks - their scars leave dentists-with-riches
You'r flows like-a-sapphic at a "bar" flirting with-straight-bitches\
You haven't "pay-the-piper" but i'm afraid you're lacking content
You're just like a "used-up-diaper" .. in a child care compartment\
You're just like your mom, i mean.. you've got-the-same-face
You both went down on me, thing is.. i aint kissing you after-rape\
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* bar can mean candy bar, or bar as in lines.
Sapphic is another word for homosexual, more used in terms of lesbians.
im not a fan of anime but i c you think dbz murkin em allOriginally Posted by CleverPunch
make sense cause like them u spend ur whole life searchin 4 balls
on my life i keep the knife bruh u dont wanna fight punk
i aint pourin liquor in the kool-aid when i say ima spike punch
this nigga stupid look in his face he aint even got a bright look
wouldnt know a cleverpunch if einstien hit him wit a right hook
just spittin dumb jokes claim he tough n bust 4's
like he gon gang up on sik but wouldnt even jump rope
,
nerd nap a take n trap ya shut rap even shouldnt u <---
backwards shit this wrote i bar 5th this need dont i so sure
My "bars" are hard-as-bricks - their scars leave dentists-with-riches
You'r flows like-a-sapphic at a "bar" flirting with-straight-bitches\
-vs-
ALL ( except jump rope line. closer was raw though)
CP, a few re-worded lines and you coulda had this battle
v/ sik
hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7161017
Vote DQ'ed.
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; July 23rd, 2009 at 11:23 PM
The only "master-i-see" is the one "fathered-by-me"
Cos the "sikness-u-breathe" comes from "my-own-family"\
No
Conceiving you was a revolution, one little alteration
Rebels dont eat dick for freedom, meaning-no-ejaculation\
No
*My "bars" are hard-as-bricks - their scars leave dentists-with-riches
You'r flows like-a-sapphic at a "bar" flirting with-straight-bitches\
No
You haven't "pay-the-piper" but i'm afraid you're lacking content
You're just like a "used-up-diaper" .. in a child care compartment\
No..
You're just like your mom, i mean.. you've got-the-same-face
You both went down on me, thing is.. i aint kissing you after-rape\
No
Clever: Wack drop. You need to work more, elevate and step it up. I didnt like any of your lines and none of them were really personals. Dont know much else to say then step it up
im not a fan of anime but i c you think dbz murkin em all
make sense cause like them u spend ur whole life searchin 4 balls
No
on my life i keep the knife bruh u dont wanna fight punk
i aint pourin liquor in the kool-aid when i say ima spike punch
No
this nigga stupid look in his face he aint even got a bright look
wouldnt know a cleverpunch if einstien hit him wit a right hook
Ehh
just spittin dumb jokes claim he tough n bust 4's
like he gon gang up on sik but wouldnt even jump rope
No, and doesnt rhyme
nerd nap a take n trap ya shut rap even shouldnt u <---
backwards shit this wrote i bar 5th this need dont i so sure
...
sik: Weak as well, just read what I wrote for Clever cause it relates to you as well.
Another very weak battle, but for a semi decent line, my vote goes to sikmaster
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vote sikmaster
clever and you seemed to have close to the same style goin on
but clevers was a lot simpler in concept and execution
sik at least had some okish concepts that where directed at clever
better punches overall goes to sik...work on concepts clever
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v/ Sikmaster
Only Cuz He Made Better Sense With His Verse, And I Wasn't As Confused Reading His Bars Like I Was Reading Clever's Verse..Clever You Got Some Work To Do If You Wanna Make A Good Verse, There Were No Punches At All Or Anything That Was Worth The Quote Against Your Opponent..It Was Quite Obvious He Took This Battle Even Though He Was Weak, Just Wasnt As Weak As Clever..He Threw Some Punches, They Didn't Hit As Hard But As Far As CP's Verse Goes, Sik Took This A Little Too Easily
RTF On My Battle
I agree with CAS.
A very weak battle but my vote goes to skimaster for coming with the best bar of the battle and the better overall drop, if you can call it that.
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..Distinct Advantage..
bump 1 more vote
The only "master-i-see" is the one "fathered-by-me"
Cos the "sikness-u-breathe" comes from "my-own-family"\
no
Conceiving you was a revolution, one little alteration
Rebels dont eat dick for freedom, meaning-no-ejaculation\
No
*My "bars" are hard-as-bricks - their scars leave dentists-with-riches
You'r flows like-a-sapphic at a "bar" flirting with-straight-bitches\
No
You haven't "pay-the-piper" but i'm afraid you're lacking content
You're just like a "used-up-diaper" .. in a child care compartment\
No..
You're just like your mom, i mean.. you've got-the-same-face
You both went down on me, thing is.. i aint kissing you after-rape\
No
Clever: Wack drop. You need to work more, elevate and step it up. I didnt like any of your lines and none of them were really personals. Dont know much else to say then step it up
im not a fan of anime but i c you think dbz murkin em all
make sense cause like them u spend ur whole life searchin 4 balls
No
on my life i keep the knife bruh u dont wanna fight punk
i aint pourin liquor in the kool-aid when i say ima spike punch
No
this nigga stupid look in his face he aint even got a bright look
wouldnt know a cleverpunch if einstien hit him wit a right hook
ok....ur best
just spittin dumb jokes claim he tough n bust 4's
like he gon gang up on sik but wouldnt even jump rope
no
nerd nap a take n trap ya shut rap even shouldnt u <---
backwards shit this wrote i bar 5th this need dont i so sure
hell no
overall sik took this w/ a better line...u both need to elevate.....
give ur verse more thought cuz their too basic....sik u came better in our battle then u did here....way better....i dont know man
Vote=Sik
RTF:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...479/index.html
i didnt mean to post the same clever:anaylsis that CAS wrote...i just wanted to copy & paste the two verses lol....
it shouldnt matter i just wanted to clarify
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