PrOmIsE.:. Vs Mickey Spotz
5Bars - 10Lines
10Minute Checkin
45Minute Drop
No Crew Votes
No Biting
House Rules Apply--
GoodLuck Bitch Ass Faggot.
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My CHECK IN.
PrOmIsE.:. Vs Mickey Spotz
5Bars - 10Lines
10Minute Checkin
45Minute Drop
No Crew Votes
No Biting
House Rules Apply--
GoodLuck Bitch Ass Faggot.
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My CHECK IN.
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See if you'll all is screamish cover your ears this is gonna' be quite gory
i don't know you mickey but i bet i can sum up your life story
Your the guy who walks up and down the block trynna start fake beeth
Tell the truth nigger! your the only fruit on grape street.//
See mickey you don't know what the fuck your getting yourself InTo
...Im ProMisE Bitch
And you'll be known as spotz after i've took the mickey out of You//
See you've not got swagger no rhymes no lyrics hes not snapping
No structure no flow so he's basically not rapping.//
Your whole stylin career is like your avater just animated
and trying to copy some real artists i geuss your a cop cuz our style got conviscated.//
See if you'll all is screamish cover your ears this is gonna' be quite gory
i don't know you mickey but i bet i can sum up your life story
Your the guy who walks up and down the block trynna start fake beeth
Tell the truth nigger! your the only fruit on grape street.//
See you've not got swagger no rhymes no lyrics hes not snapping
No structure no flow so he's basically not rapping.//
Your whole stylin career is like your avater just animated
and trying to copy some real artists i geuss your a cop cuz our style got conviscated.//
See mickey you don't know what the fuck your getting yourself InTo
...Im ProMisE Bitch
And you'll be known as spotz after i've took the mickey out of You//
So stop battlin cuz theres no telling what PrOmIse Might do
...How could i ever be served by YOU!
My rhymes SHIT ON YOURS ON A BIRDS EYE VIEW!.
Easy Nigger!
2nd Verse is the correct verse
you set the battle so i gots to set the stage and demolish
i seen your challenge like this bitch aint a 'threat'...just a 'promise'
so lyrically i'll break you like your awkward namesake
you couldnt 'stop traffic wit your flow' if you spit 'water main breaks'
and you never bag hoes 'cause who's attracted to pervs?
as far as sex goes you can only 'describe the action' like 'verbs'
you fuck them broads for '60 seconds' while they hope that you'd finish
and then 'roll over', you're the yapping, rapping 'rollover minute'
you dont really want 'war' 'cause you aint down to 'rambo' it
so hold your 'weight' and 'fly' away with your two hands folded.
Up'n
upz
up'n
where the fuck are the votes????
Promise
See if you'll all is screamish cover your ears this is gonna' be quite gory
i don't know you mickey but i bet i can sum up your life story
Nope
Your the guy who walks up and down the block trynna start fake beeth
Tell the truth nigger! your the only fruit on grape street.//
Needs work
See you've not got swagger no rhymes no lyrics hes not snapping
No structure no flow so he's basically not rapping.//
Nope
Your whole stylin career is like your avater just animated
and trying to copy some real artists i geuss your a cop cuz our style got conviscated.//
Nah
See mickey you don't know what the fuck your getting yourself InTo
...Im ProMisE Bitch
And you'll be known as spotz after i've took the mickey out of You//
Nice Nameplay!
So stop battlin cuz theres no telling what PrOmIse Might do
...How could i ever be served by YOU!
My rhymes SHIT ON YOURS ON A BIRDS EYE VIEW!.
Ok
Mickey Spotz
you set the battle so i gots to set the stage and demolish
i seen your challenge like this bitch aint a 'threat'...just a 'promise'
Nah
so lyrically i'll break you like your awkward namesake
you couldnt 'stop traffic wit your flow' if you spit 'water main breaks'
Ok
and you never bag hoes 'cause who's attracted to pervs?
as far as sex goes you can only 'describe the action' like 'verbs'
Good
you fuck them broads for '60 seconds' while they hope that you'd finish
and then 'roll over', you're the yapping, rapping 'rollover minute'
Nah
you dont really want 'war' 'cause you aint down to 'rambo' it
so hold your 'weight' and 'fly' away with your two hands folded.
Nah
Pretty hard, shit I liked was pretty equal.
I think Promises Nameplay was the killa in this battle tho so..
V-Promise
Plottin your demise.
both of yall had some nice flows
Mickey, that bar about the roll over was RAW!!!!
Promise, Like DP said, the name-play game was tight
only thing that was buggin me was "nigger" and the story line
in a 5 bar battle
no hatin, just votin
v/ Mick
vote promise
the nameplay and the line about him being the only one
on grapestreet took it too me....mickey had some creative
concepts but they werent too good when oriented ass diss
lines because they werent hard hitting even if they were
witty....
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