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Thread: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

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    Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    10 lines
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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    check

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    uppin so i can find it later. Will drop today

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Divine Intervention bitch your really gona need it,
    shit this aint no bible basher convention you gota admit,
    lickin you mothers clit it tastes like gonorrhoea,
    you rhymes are so shit they runnin on and on like diarrhoea,
    am the catalyst of your losses are you fuck faggot,
    the onli thing you can start is a rampant rabbit,
    your sex gadget,cant even get men to fuck you so u use a toy,
    it cums to sumthin wen you cant even get ur own sex to deploy,
    you need some divine intervention to kick in quickly,
    ive got the distinct advantage boy this is over strictly

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Stylins not skilled, win this battle? he never could
    He's popular on rb...cuz he makes the other noobs look good
    From liverpool, bitch your making the the brits look bad cunt
    You ain't no phlymo! but if u phly n go i won't go on a hunt
    I'll be glad your gone dude, RB don't need no body new,
    So like your gay boyfriend... I'll be glad to see the back of you
    My 15th and now my 18th win be honoured you got a rematch you lil gay
    Your mom don't learn from mistakes either... How many brothers you got anyway?
    Just like last time the closer is un-needed but i'll punch you out for fun
    Only time stylin will ever drop hit is if he skydives from the sun

    Done.

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    uppp votess

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Votes

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Divine Intervention bitch your really gona need it,
    shit this aint no bible basher convention you gota admit,
    huh? and doesnt rhyme
    lickin you mothers clit it tastes like gonorrhoea,
    you rhymes are so shit they runnin on and on like diarrhoea,
    1st line wtf??????and 2nd line played
    am the catalyst of your losses are you fuck faggot,
    the onli thing you can start is a rampant rabbit
    huh???,
    your sex gadget,cant even get men to fuck you so u use a toy,
    it cums to sumthin wen you cant even get ur own sex to deploy,
    nah man
    you need some divine intervention to kick in quickly,
    ive got the distinct advantage boy this is over strictly
    no



    Stylins not skilled, win this battle? he never could
    He's popular on rb...cuz he makes the other noobs look good
    ehhh
    From liverpool, bitch your making the the brits look bad cunt
    You ain't no phlymo! but if u phly n go i won't go on a hunt
    ok
    I'll be glad your gone dude, RB don't need no body new,
    So like your gay boyfriend... I'll be glad to see the back of you
    lol
    My 15th and now my 18th win be honoured you got a rematch you lil gay
    Your mom don't learn from mistakes either... How many brothers you got anyway?
    hhahaha
    Just like last time the closer is un-needed but i'll punch you out for fun
    Only time stylin will ever drop hit is if he skydives from the sun
    ehhhh


    pretty one sided battle, stylin ur bars dont really make anysense it looks like you just throw a word at the end of the bar to rhyme but it dont make no sense

    ive got the distinct advantage boy this is over strictly like that u just said strictly to rhyme wit quickly lol it dont even sound right but v/di

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Nothing

    Vs.

    My 15th and now my 18th win be honoured you got a rematch you lil gay
    Your mom don't learn from mistakes either... How many brothers you got anyway?

    Both verses were pretty painful to read through...nothing really stood out other than that bar I quoted, whatever your name is first dude you didn't any good punches at all...did you really just use a diarrhea line...wow...and DI came with meh'ish filler shit to get the easy win...

    Vote = DI easily
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Votes

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    V/ Divine


    just cuz the other dude had no punches, Divine was more witty and had more clever lines, and set ups and shit, the other dude was basic, played noob keystyle cypher verse crap.

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    rtf

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    Re: Divine Intervention Vs stylin

    Stylin

    Nothing, sorry this verse was wack.. You had one decent attempt, the diarrhea line and the shit is played out.

    Vs.

    Divine Misconception

    My 15th and now my 18th win be honoured you got a rematch you lil gay
    Your mom don't learn from mistakes either... How many brothers you got anyway?

    Easily your best bar, nice setup and decent punch.


    Comments: Overall a pretty weak, one sided battle.. Stylin you need to come up with more creative concepts and use more metaphors for your punches. Divine, pretty weak drop... had a few good concepts but poorly worded lines took away the impact, example the 'gay boyfriend' line, could have been much better.. decent concept though... Liked the mistake line, that won this battle.

    Vote: DI

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