10 lines
Due whenever
khris killem
Divine Intervention
10 lines
Due whenever
Khris got no skill, This faggot simply fuckin lame
What he does to text verses, Is stated in his name (Killem)
this keystyle will take less than 10 but still show kris whos boss
Every minute i spend on this adds pain to the bitches loss
I've had some battles with whack members, but your by far the shittest
If i didn't want to disgrace my own name, I'd put you on my hitlist
This kid is like a retard, fuckin useless, frowned upon with no hope left,
His mom wanted the best for her baby... which in ur case was to suffer cotdeath
Closer? what the fucks that needed for when this fags rap skills are snoozing
A devine intervention would be needed to prevent this cunt from losing
*Divine intervention is another word for mirical (usually caused by god)
>out<
I'm better than you at everything you do queer/
you to scared this niggas on my nuts..like a pube hair/
me versus you aint too fair/
wanna be gangsta trynna be ice cube but he's too square/
I squeeze the tool like a tube of nair you lose hair... /
...battle wit me i'll end the loop there.../
...no comin back when I'm drummin the gat I body niggas for fun
push ya tounge to back/
you from london? I'mma run in ya flat/ you uk niggas fuckin wit pounds I'll
put a ton on ya hat/ I slip a razor up under ya neck where cartilage at /
hitchu so hard that cha lungs'll eject / muthafucka i'm the one to respect/
intervention he want attention cuz he the on his mama neglect/ nigglet run when you
see me bitch i hunt wit a tech / shoot cha patio leave ya bleedin under the deck/
put chu pussy niggas under arest I'm the officer offer ya death act sweet I sweep
ya off of the set/
erm... a few too many lines? lol.
Nvm... Votes!!
uppin
lol ok clearly khris is new n hasnt learned the line structure here, . he had it for a while n then he started to ramble on....
"me versus you aint too fair/
wanna be gangsta trynna be ice cube but he's too square/"
actually made me laugh but it wasnt enough to pry deaths cold hands form his verse, it was horrible.
D.I. ya verse couldve been better as well...nothing too hard hitting that makes me wanna say "DAMN, KHRIS AINT NEVER LOGGIN ON AFTER THIS" lol imma take htis battle as a practice battle cuz i've seen you do better...just keep at it n try being a bit more creative, man
V/ D.I.
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D.I. could've won just by droppin the closer
KK gotta get more creative and organized. Ya stuff would
hit if it wasnt too simple
v/ D.I.
KK you definately need to work on your structure, you also need to work on your set up's and executions of your punches, you were just rambling and mixing shit in all over the place...made it hard to read, you had some ok concepts but you need to word your shit better and organize so it's actually coherent.
Vote = LB
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
upping
upp
Upping!
Khris got no skill, This faggot simply fuckin lame
What he does to text verses, Is stated in his name (Killem)
This kid is like a retard, fuckin useless, frowned upon with no hope left,
His mom wanted the best for her baby... which in ur case was to suffer cotdeath
Vs
NOTHING REALLY
Vote- Divine Intervention uhh wow I voted lol, but yeah um KK you got basic writing skills bro', you got to work on wording-ish out better. As well come creative. DI looks like you knew you had this, and your attempts where more on point for the easy win here.
vote di
kris came wayy to simple to take this and was saying
gay shit like he's on your nuts...fag!
DI came decent but his intro seemed to give killem
props rather than diss him...
work on your concepts and wording killem
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