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Mickey Spotz
James W.
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check I PMed the dude and told him so if he don't check or post its on him
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You battling with only six posts are you kiddin’ manne?
You’ll lose cause I’m leavin you bitchslapped like the forum name
Why would I go easy? For this lame? He don’t gotta a shot
Cause my right and left hook will leave Mickey seein’ spotz
if you think your hard bitch you and your fam can die next
cause my rhymes’ll leave you wide eyed like I’m spittin in High Def
you just a noob, Mickey , you ain’t used to the violence
Cause I put lead to this pussy like I’m sketchin’ vaginas
This dude a pussy…on his period…I’ll make his blood drop…
….One time a month is the only time that Mickey Spotz
10 min key..EASY
ive got more distinct advantage than your crew's got...plus the only thing on my heels are tube socks/
so ima rape you mentally when the lube drops...and then float the fuck away on my noob yacht/
sever the head and the body will soon drop...i'll harpoon this cartoon from the boondocks/
no part 2, just victory for who?...spotz...sick as me? no!!! go stage dive off rooftops/
the few drops ive made make god salute me...fuck this 'D.A.' cat for tryna 'prosecute' me/
all his keys are wack and his bars are dookie...'D 12'-gauge will leave his carcass 'proof-y'/
im no 'new jack*', like a 'fresh sparked lucy'...but i 'dwarf' your skills so im far from 'droopy'/
i torch the ill and i scar the goofy...born to kill and im raw like sushi/
you cant cook me....the insane rookie...i guess this win skipped your record and played hookie/
*jack - slang for cigarette
votes please?
vote james
hands down better verse...
mickey...your verse was too statementish...don't talk about
yourself so much and put more effort into actually dissing your opponent
sailing on "noob" yachts doesnt qualify as a punchline
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since when do crew votes count.
you don't have to count it but just to let you know all of the most active battlers in FL are my crew mates so its whatever if you never want to get this closed don't coount my crew mates votes
its not my choice which way to play it. its the rules
Right... a crew vote, but im clearly not d/r voting as this is a clear win for James W
James you threw some ok punches but they were rather simple. You need to add more complexity wit and humour to them to make them more hard hitting.
Other dude, your verse was 98% statement-filler. You need to punch the opponent more
Quite a weak battle
V/James
yes yes yes and they keep adding up. up up and away
lets get more votes
vsOriginally Posted by James W.
Vote James
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if you think your hard bitch you and your fam can die next
cause my rhymes’ll leave you wide eyed like I’m spittin in High Def
This dude a pussy…on his period…I’ll make his blood drop…
….One time a month is the only time that Mickey Spotz
vs
sever the head and the body will soon drop...i'll harpoon this cartoon from the boondocks/
no part 2, just victory for who?...spotz...sick as me? no!!! go stage dive off rooftops/
the few drops ive made make god salute me...fuck this 'D.A.' cat for tryna 'prosecute' me/
ya D-12 joint just didnt connect at the end...nice jab though!
you had some ill lines in ya verse but ya boi came consisent with
the blows
v/ James
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