Vallus Vs. Puzzle.

[Camoflawge.]

Puzzle

1. Setup was weak, Punch could have been worded better and I didn't feel it hit as hard as it could have.
2. Cool setup, nice punch... I liked it, pretty creative.
3. Nah, bar was weak overall..
4. Setup was kinda mehh but the punch was LOL,... If that hoodie is really phat farm then damn cool personal.
5. Decent setup, decent punch and closer.

Vs.

Vallus

1. Setup was mehh but Punch was decent.. cool misdirection.
2. Honestly I wasn't feelin this bar, wordplay was aight but I would have saved this line for a battle with someone named Sun/Son, you know.
3. Nice bar overall, I liked it...
4. I didn't get where you were trying to go with this? Pretty weak closer Val, you're slackin off.
5. No fifth bar...

Comments: I thought this was gonna be a close one coming in and It didn't really end up that way... Val you came pretty weak and I think we both know you can do better than this shit, Puzzle had a decent verse overall. Puzzle had the best lines of the battle and some pretty creative concepts. Vallus you had some yourself, some good wordplay but it was poorly worded and for that reason...

Vote: Puzzle

[Mafioso.]

thankz uppin

[Mafioso.]

wtf uppin

[Cinizter]

Puzzle-

Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
funny shyt.
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket.
Harshness.
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
No.
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
Lol...
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
dope closer.


Val Venis-

What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
o.k.
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
weak wordplay homie.
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
dopeness.
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
No.

V/ Puzzles verse was alot better IMO.

[stylin]

good battle pretty even but one bar stood out for me and thats what won it.

I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket

V/puzzle

[Mafioso.]

aight comeone more votes ppl

[The Archetype]

Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
eh...
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket.
decent...
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
weak...
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
ok...
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
eh...

vs

What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
eh...
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
eh...
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
ok...
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
eh...

vote Puzzle for better hits... and Val did you realize you dropped 8? lol