Max 10 lines
Due within 24 hours of check in
Need 100 posts to vote
Goodluck...
Max 10 lines
Due within 24 hours of check in
Need 100 posts to vote
Goodluck...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Check...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
check
I really wanted to do more than ten I never agreed to just ten but its wateva
Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...642/index.html
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
don't get don't vote key'd
Don't get the wordplay dont vote
What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Puzzle -
Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
- Lol played but its still funny
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket
- Ok. Harsh
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
- Nah
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
-meh
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
- okish/meh
Vallus -
What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
- made me lol. Funny
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
-okay
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
-Made me lol again
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
-lol again
I'm not actually too sure which one to vote for... its close IMO.
I think that puzzle's first bar was his best one.. but Vals first bar was better.
Daaayyym... i don't know.
I think Val had the edge to be honest. I'ma give it to val. No hate.
/Val
okay uppin
uppin over what?....one battle?..maybe two?
wow...
heres my 5...
up #1, up #2, up #3, up #4, up #5
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
Okay opener. This could have hit harder imo. The wording takes away from it a bit.
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket.
I got a lil laugh out of this. Could of been better but still, I liked it.
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
I wasn't feeling the set up but the follow up was decent.
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
Meh, this could have been a lot better man. The follow up just wasn't a solid line man.
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
I liked this. Nice closer.
v.s.
What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
Decent opener. The set up & the follow up weren't really like wow. The set up is mehish, & the follow up is a statement. It doesn't even have a thing to do with the set up.
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
I'm not really feelin this. The wording could've been better. I see what you're tryin to say. But it just wasn't workin for me.
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
.....WTF? Puzzle had a gay punch & basically a casket(which would be in relation to a funeral) punch. Weird. But this was Okay. I liked it but...just seems odd, with his punch
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
Meh closer. Nothing to wow about. It could have been a lot better.
v. Puzzle-For better punches & personals.
LB you can't vote if you're in DA or trying to join. That just seems suspect imo.
stfu you pieace of shit...and I like how you got crew members voting soldierOriginally Posted by Vallus
Val not even your mom loves you so on campus I wonder who you write to.
N" its funny how your fighting for your country and ur country STILL doesn't like u.
ok
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket.
lol
overseas? thats just an exscuse you use for having no sex.
I mean what dumbass tries to sport a fossil and calls it a rolex.
ok
still ballin??? do you mean still gay? and i know I'm not that wrong.
cuz how are u still ballin? when your wearing a hoodie thats phat farm.
nah
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
ok
vs
What a faggot tryin to rap n, his best sets r still trash
So I'll knock his fucking socks off.......with his legs still attached
ok
When the Horizon, I'll let 'em tryin write his wrongins
But when will it dawn on you, Sundown like nights befallin
nah
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
nah
Crushin his skull anywhere I put these hands
Can't beat you?..plz..see for yourself, the proof is in the pudding man
nah
vote - puzzle
best bars from both verses
I'm not gonna lie since joining the army I know you've been threw sum tragic.
thats why we all want u to come home safe and sound..............in a casket
vs
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
both verse word damn near stapped down with wordplay but i think both of you guys over tried n forced alot of it.it was hard to decide a winner cuz it came VERY close. Puzz was smashin with the personals and instead of val doing the same, he decided to use his wits which gave him the edge. Puzz, ya verse def had me chuckle a bit but i think that if you had alot to work wit in terms of personals n dissin him n it came out a bit light in the end.
V/Val
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
uppin
Bitch I give u no respect, fuck your watch fuck your gun and fuck u as a soldier..
..its like we're confirming orders threw walkie talkie's cuz your career is "over".
vs
I tear through his heart, when moving to engage him
want to act gay? then
suit yourself....<---saves time on the funeral arrangements
vote Vallus. Puzzle had some really stretched bars and that took away from his personal attacks. his closer was nice, but Vallus's wordplay just madde his verse superior.
VVVVVVVcheck sigVVVVVV
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
uppin
Posting Rules
