Nick (1 - 1) vs. Tony B (1 - 1)

[phlymo]

LLL Season 11: Week 3

Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)

Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)

16 Lines Minimum

Vote on 5 Battles
Leave links in your check in or lose 2 votes per missing link

Good Luck

[Nick.]

check..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...841/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...834/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...838/index.html

[Tony B]

yup.

[Nick.]

you aint even deep in balitmore, and this loss is comin so you can bag it..
ur not a city boy if u love the outskirts. that makes u a cross-dressing faggot
tony thinks he gets chicks wet. lol, well ill make sure their leavin wetter
cuz i might be a pick-up artist.. but the drop on ur heard will be even better
n' ur girls an elephant. when u party it stays replayed in ya head
i actually haven't seen a spring break like that since ur girl laid on a bed
bitches say im a ten cuz im fly. i only write when im high..
and im barely tryin to win while you just barely win when u try
you wouldnt beat our wackest cat. i mean, its obvious you aint hurtin me
cuz tony's got a good future, considering he imitates his punches perfectly
u killin the audio game? na, u might think ur tight on a track but ur wrong
u wont beat me now or never.. when ur droppin verses as wack as ur song
niggas in prison would rape you.. its all action and no hate talk
but my fist will inflict a slammer that'll make jail look like a cake walk
ur famous for bein wack, and with those trash lines u definitly wont defeat me
but ur verses are admired by pitchers.. cuz u tend to throw a no hitter weekly
u'll be mediocre forever tony, and you REALLY dont want nick to try
cuz we all know u only go advanced when u dont want to post a quick reply

[Tony B]

stayed at my girls house so didnt have my verse
i can drop tonight if thats coo

[Nick.]

sure bro. of course.

ill edit my verse in..

[Tony B]

iight droppin soon

[Tony B]

Get off my jock, u aint winnin this - that ain't hard to tell
You wanna beat the odds? It's simple...try punchin yaself
By the end of this you'll be bruised n battered wit hot welts
And you's a cotton ass rapper, becuz ya shit is not felt
Yea i was slackin at first, these heads already know how i do
But now im comin hard fa'real, so i ain't doin SHIT for you
I'll let my verse speak for itself n just cut the chatter loose
N if ya style is deadly, it must be cuz you're named after Bruce
Ya verse last week was crazy tho, my vote woulda been stale
I woulda quoted every punch...and in reply post 'fail'
Im reppin bmore, the city of hoes, low-riders, n rap movements
But on the n-side...its full'a dudes, hoopties, n country music
Ya user title is so lame, Tony's always seen bossin
So bitch u can come up.. n meet an elbow that'll drop u 3 notches
Tryna avoid this clown at all costs, stayin fresh on my duggy
Cuz one day i got nicked in the cheek, n bitches said i was ugly
Duke ya verse brought me WAY back. Honestly i thought u was jokin
Cuz Nick's an old school cat, n had me thinkin that was Avalon postin

[Tony B]

ugh didn know u were goin 18 lol lemme edit in one more bar real quik

Edit: mmk done lol

[Nick.]

word.. my bad, i should've just left my verse up.

[Tony B]

nah u good lol n g' luck

[Manic.]

you aint even deep in balitmore, and this loss is comin so you can bag it..
ur not a city boy if u love the outskirts. that makes u a cross-dressing faggot
decent..worded bad though.
tony thinks he gets chicks wet. lol, well ill make sure their leavin wetter
cuz i might be a pick-up artist.. but the drop on ur heard will be even better
alright...
n' ur girls an elephant. when u party it stays replayed in ya head
i actually haven't seen a spring break like that since ur girl laid on a bed
lmao..dope.
bitches say im a ten cuz im fly. i only write when im high..
and im barely tryin to win while you just barely win when u try
cool..
you wouldnt beat our wackest cat. i mean, its obvious you aint hurtin me
cuz tony's got a good future, considering he imitates his punches perfectly
meh..
u killin the audio game? na, u might think ur tight on a track but ur wrong
u wont beat me now or never.. when ur droppin verses as wack as ur song
ok..
niggas in prison would rape you.. its all action and no hate talk
but my fist will inflict a slammer that'll make jail look like a cake walk
ok..
ur famous for bein wack, and with those trash lines u definitly wont defeat me
but ur verses are admired by pitchers.. cuz u tend to throw a no hitter weekly
played concept..but you did it a lil different..so alright.
u'll be mediocre forever tony, and you REALLY dont want nick to try
cuz we all know u only go advanced when u dont want to post a quick reply
haven't seen this so im gonna say this is good.



Get off my jock, u aint winnin this - that ain't hard to tell
You wanna beat the odds? It's simple...try punchin yaself
decent.
By the end of this you'll be bruised n battered wit hot welts
And you's a cotton ass rapper, becuz ya shit is not felt
ehh..alright.
Yea i was slackin at first, these heads already know how i do
But now im comin hard fa'real, so i ain't doin SHIT for you
nah.
I'll let my verse speak for itself n just cut the chatter loose
N if ya style is deadly, it must be cuz you're named after Bruce
nope.
Ya verse last week was crazy tho, my vote woulda been stale
I woulda quoted every punch...and in reply post 'fail'
decent.
Im reppin bmore, the city of hoes, low-riders, n rap movements
But on the n-side...its full'a dudes, hoopties, n country music
nah..
Ya user title is so lame, Tony's always seen bossin
So bitch u can come up.. n meet an elbow that'll drop u 3 notches
nice.
Tryna avoid this clown at all costs, stayin fresh on my duggy
Cuz one day i got nicked in the cheek, n bitches said i was ugly
ok...
Duke ya verse brought me WAY back. Honestly i thought u was jokin
Cuz Nick's an old school cat, n had me thinkin that was Avalon postin
nope.


Nick was more consistent, and just had some nicer bars than tony here..tony's verse wasn't bad, but it certainly wasn't enough here.

Best Bar in the Battle -

n' ur girls an elephant. when u party it stays replayed in ya head
i actually haven't seen a spring break like that since ur girl laid on a bed


Vote//Nick

[Barcotic]

tony thinks he gets chicks wet. lol, well ill make sure their leavin wetter
cuz i might be a pick-up artist.. but the drop on ur head will be even better
n' ur girls an elephant. when u party it stays replayed in ya head
i actually haven't seen a spring break like that since ur girl laid on a bed
u'll be mediocre forever tony, and you REALLY dont want nick to try
cuz we all know u only go advanced when u dont want to post a quick reply

Vs

By the end of this you'll be bruised n battered wit hot welts
And you's a cotton ass rapper, becuz ya shit is not felt
Ya user title is so lame, Tony's always seen bossin
So bitch u can come up.. n meet an elbow that'll drop u 3 notches

Kinda close, but I got Nick winning this by having better and more quotables (by a bar).. everything else was just too gay, corny and/or forced to quote.... \\//ote: Nick.

[$in City]

Nick:

you aint even deep in balitmore, and this loss is comin so you can bag it..
ur not a city boy if u love the outskirts. that makes u a cross-dressing faggot

good start...good wp

tony thinks he gets chicks wet. lol, well ill make sure their leavin wetter
cuz i might be a pick-up artist.. but the drop on ur heard will be even better

im guessin you meant "head"...either way decent wp

n' ur girls an elephant. when u party it stays replayed in ya head
i actually haven't seen a spring break like that since ur girl laid on a bed

lmao...funny diss

bitches say im a ten cuz im fly. i only write when im high..
and im barely tryin to win while you just barely win when u try

decent flip

you wouldnt beat our wackest cat. i mean, its obvious you aint hurtin me
cuz tony's got a good future, considering he imitates his punches perfectly

dont get this...

u killin the audio game? na, u might think ur tight on a track but ur wrong
u wont beat me now or never.. when ur droppin verses as wack as ur song

lol...nothin special...basic diss here...cool though

niggas in prison would rape you.. its all action and no hate talk
but my fist will inflict a slammer that'll make jail look like a cake walk

that was a tight flip there

ur famous for bein wack, and with those trash lines u definitly wont defeat me
but ur verses are admired by pitchers.. cuz u tend to throw a no hitter weekly

[b]decent[\b]

u'll be mediocre forever tony, and you REALLY dont want nick to try
cuz we all know u only go advanced when u dont want to post a quick reply

weak



Tony:

Get off my jock, u aint winnin this - that ain't hard to tell
You wanna beat the odds? It's simple...try punchin yaself

lol decent opener

By the end of this you'll be bruised n battered wit hot welts
And you's a cotton ass rapper, becuz ya shit is not felt

feel like i heard this before...decent shit either way

Yea i was slackin at first, these heads already know how i do
But now im comin hard fa'real, so i ain't doin SHIT for you

naw

I'll let my verse speak for itself n just cut the chatter loose
N if ya style is deadly, it must be cuz you're named after Bruce

i dont get it, is nicks last name lee or somethin

Ya verse last week was crazy tho, my vote woulda been stale
I woulda quoted every punch...and in reply post 'fail'

your fallin fast

Im reppin bmore, the city of hoes, low-riders, n rap movements
But on the n-side...its full'a dudes, hoopties, n country music

lol...cool shit here i guess

Ya user title is so lame, Tony's always seen bossin
So bitch u can come up.. n meet an elbow that'll drop u 3 notches

this is ok

Tryna avoid this clown at all costs, stayin fresh on my duggy
Cuz one day i got nicked in the cheek, n bitches said i was ugly

uh uh kinda weak

Duke ya verse brought me WAY back. Honestly i thought u was jokin
Cuz Nick's an old school cat, n had me thinkin that was Avalon postin

dont get this


Overall: this started out as a great battle but Tony fell of mid point of his verse...vote Nick--he was much more consistent throughout his verse


decent battle

[Tony B]

bruce lee/dead, lee dammit....oh god lol
and as for the closer....oh god again

plz dont vote if u dont get shit