Brutality Vs xEvilDx

[Vallus]

vote LB

evil had too many statementish lines with self glorification
the main focus...no real punches....take my advice from the
other thread and go read LLL battles and practice in the
cypher to get the idea of how to properly execute a punchline
before your next battle...

[Camoflawge.]

Optimus Prime

I inject my lethal ryhmes in your mind
ta have you trippin so hard you think im transforming like optimis prime//

Vs.

Lyrical Brutality

You ever heard the saying "Don't bite off more than you can chew"?
I'm praying that you no-show... So i'm not inclined to read your debut,
Maybe i'm too confident considering i probably won't ever get a vote
all the voters will kill themselves after reading that shit you wrote ^

Evil: You didn't really have much worth quoting, the first bar had a decent concept but the punch wasn't even hard at all. After the first two bars you really fell off. Work on setting up punches and come up with better metaphors.

LB: Pretty weak verse overall, didn't look like you were trying much.. work on setting up your punches with more relevant lines. Opener was okish, pretty much the best bar of the battle.

Vote: LyricalBrutality

[Ctrl Alt Elite]

Last vote. Needs closing will RTF

[Mafioso.]

nothing

...vsd

You ever heard the saying "Don't bite off more than you can chew"?
I'm praying that you no-show... So i'm not inclined to read your debut,
n' Art been underestimating noobs, his mistake almost got him capped
but I already know i've won this...Cuz i read your verse in bitchslapped

um evil your new to the site so u have a lot of elavating to do jus read sum lll battles and see the sence of style this site is.....fix your structure make your verse looks like his that way its easier to read also try to get more creative
ly u obviously didn't try your best but your verse still was more than enough to beat him overall you had better everything

plz hit this up honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...850/index.html