10 lines
due tomorrow
house rules strictly followed
10 lines
due tomorrow
house rules strictly followed
It's NOT your Fault
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It's NOT your Fault
i aint gotta touch p, fuck entombing this candyass b in wooden box
if yer packed n "shrink"raped....its in bits n pieces with load of an ox
now yer brokeass got as much luck as a hobo hittin gold in fort knox
"perfect fit"? only when gettin handjobs from "Ages 3 year and tops"
im leavin yer ass owned n whipped, more like a Kunta Kinte in a ship
i aint racist, jus dat yer a one big booby---trapped in a shell of plastic
verse-4 n ya blown to smithereens in 500 pieces, n there wont be a fix...
EVEN if keano hit ya with speed in an 'alleged' case of hit n a miss
if i shove iron up yer ass...n size 12 shoe, ya still wont have any Clue
what really hit'yu, foo, n i aint T but still crossin yer dumbass with double U
It's NOT your Fault
lol forfeit?
It's NOT your Fault
Words to describe your verse...weak,shitty,and I have to admit very boring.
and I know one man's garbage is another man's tresure...
but that doesn't give you the right to look threw my trash every morning.
watch as I drown this lame with shame he'll end up nothing but a sinking rod.
I mean you dropped a verse so bad even your usertitle is thinking GOD!!!
your verse sucks plus your an ugly fuck just like your avatar.
I mean your so weird looking
I bet you would become a big star..............................trak character.
O I'm winning this battle easily and there's nothing you can say or do.
might ass well take the 1 out of omega since that'll b the MOST ppl that vote for u.
ya girl I will just Filler...........sorda like the rest of your verse.
N how can u be the best of the best when your not even better than the best of my worse.
blah key'ed
vote omega
better punches
omega didnt have very many good concepts and you both
had really wordy stretched bars...work on better wording
and less stretched bars with harder hitting concepts
puzzle...that bar you broke into 3 was wayyyyy too long
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thnx lv links uppin....
It's NOT your Fault
puzz took this one , easily. Omega, ya verse was all over the place, man and ya wordings were what really hendered ya verse.you would start out on one topic, try being witty, then end up in a completely different location without the hard hitting punch to follow. structure played a hand too but not as much because Puzz had bad structure as well.
Puzz, you had ok concepts going for you, just work on wording so you dont have to stretch ya bars as much. the "thinkin god" line was nice n so was the "star trek" line
V/Puzz... keep it up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...541/index.html
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uppin
Opener - Puzzle
Closer -Puzzle (Kinda streched but hit good)
Wordplay- Eh no1 really
Punches - Easily Puzzle
O/A = Puzzle
Omega your shit is hard to follow, but it was a decent battle both could improve
return the favor please... R/A VS. KNOW-P
uppin
some people put alot of bearing on structure...really helps with the punches...I'm not one of those people....
Puzzle took this battle with alot better punches, even though the first line was stretched, he still had some real good concepts...I like the star trek line closer the most I think, really solid drop...
Vote = Puzzle
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
uppin