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HypoKrit
Killah NC
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I had the perfect plan to make this bitch roll over without even droppin sweet
But now i gotta drop a dope verse cuz im all out of doggy treats
You want to battle me cuz you aint got a lot to lose
The only way you handle beef is like meat packers or male prostitutes
Watch me mess this guy up cuz i like pussy, You choose dick
You hang around gay men with shit in they teeth cuz you hung like a toothpick
You got no rhythim its obvious you cant take the kritisism
Everyone came to see you face a 'killer n see' you become my next victim
Try to put me down but man you aint stoppin me
Your only decent attempt to embarass me was when you didnt type my name properly
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HypoKrit you think your whack as rhymes are so tough...
the only thing your spitin is that mouthful of that sticky stuff...
i bet rite now your just tryin to think of what to say...
we all know you cant suck and rhyme at the same time so its OK...
your parents knew you were gay ever since you were a kid...
now you got more guys in you than Pamela A ever did...
your sayin ima be your next victim... Victim of what?
i aint that type of guy you like to put in the but..
im done with this shit its complete..
now go fool some guy into touching his feet
uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...989/index.html
I had the perfect plan to make this bitch roll over without even droppin sweet
But now i gotta drop a dope verse cuz im all out of doggy treats
its aite
You want to battle me cuz you aint got a lot to lose
The only way you handle beef is like meat packers or male prostitutes
no sir
Watch me mess this guy up cuz i like pussy, You choose dick
You hang around gay men with shit in they teeth cuz you hung like a toothpick
no sir
You got no rhythim its obvious you cant take the kritisism
Everyone came to see you face a 'killer n see' you become my next victim
no sir
Try to put me down but man you aint stoppin me
Your only decent attempt to embarass me was when you didnt type my name properly
ehhh
HypoKrit you think your whack as rhymes are so tough...
the only thing your spitin is that mouthful of that sticky stuff...
no sir
i bet rite now your just tryin to think of what to say...
we all know you cant suck and rhyme at the same time so its OK...
no sir
your parents knew you were gay ever since you were a kid...
now you got more guys in you than Pamela A ever did...
no sir
your sayin ima be your next victim... Victim of what?
i aint that type of guy you like to put in the but..
no sir
im done with this shit its complete..
now go fool some guy into touching his feet
5 straight gay bars wtf dude????
v/hyp his verse wasnt as bad as killahs, killah ur rhymes were off and u gotta change the subject u cant just spit a whole homo verse
I had the perfect plan to make this bitch roll over without even droppin sweet
But now i gotta drop a dope verse cuz im all out of doggy treats
You want to battle me cuz you aint got a lot to lose
The only way you handle beef is like meat packers or male prostitutes
Watch me mess this guy up cuz i like pussy, You choose dick
You hang around gay men with shit in they teeth cuz you hung like a toothpick
You got no rhythim its obvious you cant take the kritisism
Everyone came to see you face a 'killer n see' you become my next victim
Try to put me down but man you aint stoppin me
Your only decent attempt to embarass me was when you didnt type my name properly
this was a ok i feel the closer was the
best point in your verse.
vs
HypoKrit you think your whack as rhymes are so tough...
the only thing your spitin is that mouthful of that sticky stuff...
i bet rite now your just tryin to think of what to say...
we all know you cant suck and rhyme at the same time so its OK...
your parents knew you were gay ever since you were a kid...
now you got more guys in you than Pamela A ever did...
your sayin ima be your next victim... Victim of what?
i aint that type of guy you like to put in the but..
im done with this shit its complete..
now go fool some guy into touching his feet
this would have been better but
you kept on going with the gay lines
vote - hyp .. his closer won it for him
vote hyp
better punches, concepts, fl0w....everything
cam somewhat consistant....some of the concepts where
lacking though...the intro for example
killah, get some better concepts
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Hypokrit
I had the perfect plan to make this bitch roll over without even droppin sweet
But now i gotta drop a dope verse cuz im all out of doggy treats
-lol i liked that
You want to battle me cuz you aint got a lot to lose
The only way you handle beef is like meat packers or male prostitutes
- okish
Watch me mess this guy up cuz i like pussy, You choose dick
You hang around gay men with shit in they teeth cuz you hung like a toothpick
-Not feelin'
You got no rhythim its obvious you cant take the kritisism
Everyone came to see you face a 'killer n see' you become my next victim
-not really a punch
Try to put me down but man you aint stoppin me
Your only decent attempt to embarass me was when you didnt type my name properly
-Ok could of been better
Killah
HypoKrit you think your whack as rhymes are so tough...
the only thing your spitin is that mouthful of that sticky stuff...
-childish and played
i bet rite now your just tryin to think of what to say...
we all know you cant suck and rhyme at the same time so its OK...
-noooo
your parents knew you were gay ever since you were a kid...
now you got more guys in you than Pamela A ever did...
Naw
your sayin ima be your next victim... Victim of what?
i aint that type of guy you like to put in the but..
You fed from his verse so u should be DQ'd
im done with this shit its complete..
now go fool some guy into touching his feet
- no
Hypokrit... most of ur verse was whack... but it made me laugh, and i like that. Your opener was whack... but im still smiling. So keep it up, just try to keep that humor you have whilst adding more of a punch. Then you could end up being the next Archetype.
Killah... Gay-jokes are played. and you had 5 bars of them. Whats worse, is they wern't even particularly good. You need to work on creativity and wit.
Vote Hypokrit
Hypo takes this but this was a VERY weak battle. the only decent thing about hyp's verse was the closure, it made me smirk. Killah's verse was so unoriginal, very homo-ish
Both guys need to work on thinking outside the box though... this battle ended up being stale and very bland.
V/Hypo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...541/index.html
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