no bitching, whining, or complaining. better not no show. 5 bars due by 4PM Eastern ... sort of tired right now cuz I just woke up. check ..
...Art
s3oul
no bitching, whining, or complaining. better not no show. 5 bars due by 4PM Eastern ... sort of tired right now cuz I just woke up. check ..
time limit's no good for me...see I gotta life, I'm bout to go swimming with madd hot bitches...make it 4 PM Eastern tomorrow and I'm down...
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
^lmfao k, whatever.
Easy...
Fuck just my foot, I gotta leg for you..I'm giving you the whole thing...
s'cause when I derail his verse.........He'll be a one man S3oul Train...
You and your little dickriders..sitting around jerking each other off...
You all tried to band together and beat me, and succeeded.......in pissing the moderator off...
giving this bitch a tramatic experience...ya heart rate lost...
s'cause my toe jam got his flow jammed like a carbuerator clogged...
You aren't rated dogg, you'll never be a celebrated figure...
well, I take that back...we'll all celebrate when...well, you get the picture...
I would drop a closer like I did against Sik, but all the noobs would get mad...
grab this bitch around the throat...and literally have a boob in my hand...
blah
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Fuck those who's siding with Art .. no doubt his rapping fake
The day he finally finds his brain is the only time he's getting head
Best run from me BITCH, s3oul is a beast, hungry so I eat like a feast
Please, you couldn't have bark, if your whole forest was made up of trees
Kid is sad, he had to suck the mod's dick to get the W against Sik
You're well equipped cuz your hands are ripped from controller workouts and handjobs to get fit!!
Go 'home' cuz this lil thing is about to go out of the ballpark ..
He talks 'shit' but 'ventually loses like Pussy-Dogs who just bark ..
Don't fuck with me or I'll send you through more strife
I never believed in FAIRY tales until I read the story of your life
vote art
s3oul didnt have really any strong punches here...the ballparks ish
didnt work well, not a good concept, the handjobs line was stretched
out too far, and the 2 opening lines didnt even rhyme
art was decent but s3oul...those things really fucked your verse up
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Vote: ...Art
He had more punches that flowed
Though the first line was kinda week
Art had the better concepts, some of the lines were pretty stretched and some punchlines didn't connect. Both could fix up wording.
I can't vote but if I could I'd vote for Art.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ult-vs-403793/
bump 1
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Art
1. Meh, setup was lacking and I didn't find the punch all that great.
2. It's a little stretched but pretty creative I guess, cool bar.
3. Pretty weak.
4. I lol'd, aight.
5. Another weak bar, concept was meh.
Vs.
1. Bar didn't even rhyme, punch was wack.
2. Hell nah, played out.
3. Concept had an ounce of potential........ you basically punched it in the teeth and stomped it. Wack bar.
4. Nah, not feeling it. Not very creative...
5. Why did you bold 'fairy' tales? It could have been alot better, no real wit to it.
Comments: Art you came pretty weak overall but at least you had two pretty decent bars. I think you got lucky here, you posted first and still got the job done with a sub-par verse. S3oul, you need to focus on how you word things, try to be more creative and wittier, use some wordplay or fresh metaphors in your drops. One of your best lines in the battle is a concept that's been dead, most bark lines have been used to death.
Vote: Art got this one easy
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..Distinct Advantage..
v/s3 cause art said my name
nah im bs'n pretty obvious blah yadda won pretty solid drop where as the last bar was the only decent bar is s3's whole drop 1st bar didnt rhyme and the rest was mehh v/blah yadda
^ lol, atleast you're not bitternow I got a little more respect for you
bump 2
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
This battle is a fairly obvious win for Art. He had much better concepts and originality and his set ups led to better punches.
/Art
RTF my battle vs Kris Killem (Btw this is lyricalbrutality, Changed name)
The soul train was the only real hitter in this battle
s3oul, your stuff just jabbed, never punched
v/ art
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