Shaolin vs Puzzle.

[Shaolin]

10-16 lines.
Due in two hours.
Count this as my check.

[Mafioso.]

check

[Shaolin]

Puzzle, time to tell your Mother to get a muzzle
Because everytime she opens her mouth all she does is cum guzzle
You said it's been a while?
Where you been? I forgot, you're a paedophile, children please run a mile
Like s3oul, I'm going to swallow your soul whole
This battle is mine all ready, don't even bother to look at the poll
Shaolin, I'm the new kid on the scene
But I'll still leave three holes in your speen like I'm Wolverine
You'll get fucked up like a porno flick bitch
A Frankenstein stitch, I'm known to fill a ditch
So you best not fuck around with the Shaolin
Because I'm causing this weak MC to throw the towel in.

[Mafioso.]

Honestly we all know the truth, about RB gettin wack and your just living proof.
but you will be amongst the stars...once I throw you off a fucking roof.
Bitch your about to get trashed and swept, bruised from your back to neck.
and fuck your hometown
thee only people that care about London is ppl who watch cody and zack on deck.
I'm catching anything your wack ass throw's at me its like I got a third glove.
Shaolin??? I feel like a deaf assasin cuz i gotta murder sum1 I neva even heard of.
skill takes time to achieve..but I guess skill is sumthing you'll have to live with out.
and it isn't peer pressure just plain pressure once I choke this bitch out.
can't beilive I wasted my time on this wack fuck...what a waste of time.
but like cocaine I just easily stoned this fuck with a quick 10 lines.

meh wateva u suck anyway

[s3oul]

Puzzle, time to tell your Mother to get a muzzle
Because everytime she opens her mouth all she does is cum guzzle
no
You said it's been a while?
Where you been? I forgot, you're a paedophile, children please run a mile
nah
Like s3oul, I'm going to swallow your soul whole
This battle is mine all ready, don't even bother to look at the poll
lol .. fuck you .. nah
Shaolin, I'm the new kid on the scene
But I'll still leave three holes in your speen like I'm Wolverine
nah
You'll get fucked up like a porno flick bitch
A Frankenstein stitch, I'm known to fill a ditch
no punch
So you best not fuck around with the Shaolin
Because I'm causing this weak MC to throw the towel in.
weak ...

Honestly we all know the truth, about RB gettin wack and your just living proof.
but you will be amongst the stars...once I throw you off a fucking roof.
weak ..
Bitch your about to get trashed and swept, bruised from your back to neck.
and fuck your hometown
thee only people that care about London is ppl who watch cody and zack on deck.
lol
I'm catching anything your wack ass throw's at me its like I got a third glove.
Shaolin??? I feel like a deaf assasin cuz i gotta murder sum1 I neva even heard of.
ok but sorta too stretched
skill takes time to achieve..but I guess skill is sumthing you'll have to live with out.
and it isn't peer pressure just plain pressure once I choke this bitch out.
eh ok
can't beilive I wasted my time on this wack fuck...what a waste of time.
but like cocaine I just easily stoned this fuck with a quick 10 lines.
weak

vote goes to Puzzle. i think he came harder, pretty obvious, shaolin had pretty much nothing and has a lot of work to do. no hate .. puzzle's 4th bar won it for him. return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...097/index.html

[SoopSa]

Like s3oul, I'm going to swallow your soul whole
This battle is mine all ready, don't even bother to look at the poll
vs

Bitch your about to get trashed and swept, bruised from your back to neck.
and fuck your hometown
thee only people that care about London is ppl who watch cody and zack on deck.
stretched but got it across lol

puzzle was better overall in this battle..better everything than his opponent..

[JustDevious]

can't beilive I wasted my time on this wack fuck...what a waste of time.
but like cocaine I just easily stoned this fuck with a quick 10 lines.

V

Nothin


V/ Puzzle easily.

[Cape$h]

Bitch your about to get trashed and swept, bruised from your back to neck.
and fuck your hometown
thee only people that care about London is ppl who watch cody and zack on deck.


vs
nothing worth qouting really Shaolin jus well to be honest i dont know what he just did


then Cape$h sigh's

[~feed-back~]

puzzle takes this thought both verses had played concepts. i think that Sha had more concepts that were old and played out and pretty much posted a bunch of fillers.

puzzle you win this but not but a long stretch beacue ya wording fucked up most of ya punches, work on the set ups n wordings n u'll be fine.

V/Puzzle

[Ra Ill]

Puzzle, time to tell your Mother to get a muzzle
Because everytime she opens her mouth all she does is cum guzzle
nah
You said it's been a while?
Where you been? I forgot, you're a paedophile, children please run a mile
nah
Like s3oul, I'm going to swallow your soul whole
This battle is mine all ready, don't even bother to look at the poll
ok
Shaolin, I'm the new kid on the scene
But I'll still leave three holes in your speen like I'm Wolverine
nah
You'll get fucked up like a porno flick bitch
A Frankenstein stitch, I'm known to fill a ditch
nah
So you best not fuck around with the Shaolin
Because I'm causing this weak MC to throw the towel in.
nah

vs

Honestly we all know the truth, about RB gettin wack and your just living proof.
but you will be amongst the stars...once I throw you off a fucking roof.
lol
Bitch your about to get trashed and swept, bruised from your back to neck.
and fuck your hometown
thee only people that care about London is ppl who watch cody and zack on deck.
ok
I'm catching anything your wack ass throw's at me its like I got a third glove.
Shaolin??? I feel like a deaf assasin cuz i gotta murder sum1 I neva even heard of.
ok
skill takes time to achieve..but I guess skill is sumthing you'll have to live with out.
and it isn't peer pressure just plain pressure once I choke this bitch out.
nah
can't beilive I wasted my time on this wack fuck...what a waste of time.
but like cocaine I just easily stoned this fuck with a quick 10 lines.
nah

vote - puzzle