DEADPROOF vS stylin

[.deadproof.]

due in 6 hours
check before you drop
no gay shit, no feeding
no gay votes..
g/L

[.deadproof.]

check

[stylin]

Checkk

[.deadproof.]

everyone round here treat me like a living saint
But why does your sig look like u made it with microsoft paint?
I bet that's not even you in it, talkin bout the ugly dude
yall both have something in common,I don't care that Im rude
this kid can't see my rhymes so I'll give him some opticals
shit, with verse like his, I'll call winning impossible
stylin? Yeah right dude you need to keep tryin
and you rap sloppy, like your in a hospital bed dyin
I stylin* this kids face like I'm some kinda poperazzi
you stay losin your rap battles like you some kinda rap Nazi

*stylin= style in

[.deadproof.]

Woww u changed your sig.. His old one had a guy squating.. Just so mine males sense, that's what was in his and since I can't freepost, consider this as like an "up"

[stylin]

dead proof thinks he is immortal i will prove you cannot avoid death,
will you just stop spittin rhymes am gettin choked by your breath,
my drop is ruthless, no time to recover, you want to retreat,
i have to admit your rapping is incomplete, dont make me repeat,
you copying artists your a cheat, to this site your a disgrace,
so go grab you suit case and fuck off with your white face,
before i smash you into a fire place, blood dripping from chest,
ive proved to every one your a worthless fuck up possessed ,
this shit that am spilling is like a ghost really very chilling,
messy but extremely cold but av just made a real killing

[stylin]

upppppppppppppppppppp

[stylin]

can we up some votes

[.deadproof.]

up #2

[sikmaster]

everyone round here treat me like a living saint
But why does your sig look like u made it with microsoft paint?
ehhh
I bet that's not even you in it, talkin bout the ugly dude
yall both have something in common,I don't care that Im rude
nah..and it was nas in his sig
this kid can't see my rhymes so I'll give him some opticals
shit, with verse like his, I'll call winning impossible
ehhhh
stylin? Yeah right dude you need to keep tryin
and you rap sloppy, like your in a hospital bed dyin
nah
I stylin* this kids face like I'm some kinda poperazzi
you stay losin your rap battles like you some kinda rap Nazi
nah


dead proof thinks he is immortal i will prove you cannot avoid death,
will you just stop spittin rhymes am gettin choked by your breath,
ehhh kinda
my drop is ruthless, no time to recover, you want to retreat,
i have to admit your rapping is incomplete, dont make me repeat,
no
you copying artists your a cheat, to this site your a disgrace,
so go grab you suit case and fuck off with your white face,
hell nah
before i smash you into a fire place, blood dripping from chest,
ive proved to every one your a worthless fuck up possessed ,
y u just slapped possessed at the end of the line it dont make sense???
this shit that am spilling is like a ghost really very chilling,
messy but extremely cold but av just made a real killing
nah


ok stylin its messed up u changed ur sig and dp its messed up u dont know nas lol but dp as far a ur verse u need help with ur punches when usin a simile to make a comparison for ur punch what you are comparing has 2 make sense

you stay losin your rap battles like you some kinda rap Nazi those dont match each other doesnt make sense
and you rap sloppy, like your in a hospital bed dyin doesnt make sense they dont have anything to do with each other
stylin verse was also pretty bad punches didnt hit at all really this was a toss up both verses need work
ima vote dp for the 2 personal bars they werent good but nothin from stylin was good either

[.deadproof.]

up#3

[Vallus]

vote deadproof


the only decent line of the entire battle was dead's opener about
microsoft paint which was a decent personal but could have
been worded better with a better fl0w to it to make it
hit a bit harder....stick with good stuff like that concepts
wise but make the wording a bit wittier and set up the
actual punchline with the line before it next time for
a better effect...stylin...your verse had decent fl0w and
structure but you definately need some better concepts
if you hope to win in here....your stuff is way to simplistic

[.deadproof.]

up#4

[Shaolin]

This was weak from both battlers.

The concepts and punchlines didn't real flow or make sense.

The only bar worth quoting was the opener from DEADPROOF.

''everyone round here treat me like a living saint
But why does your sig look like u made it with microsoft paint?''

styling, your flow is ok but some of your bars are simplistic and don't really make sense, structure wise you're fine.

v/DEADPROOF

[.deadproof.]

up 5 and stylin.. u need to start uppin, I'm out