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Jay O
Vallus
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You’re in the army, which means you were the lowest 5 percentile in your class
Why the fuck would you enter the army? You can’t drink or get any ass.
Jim Crow was smarter than you, throw you up in a minstrel show you wouldn’t know what to do. If you don’t know what I’m talkin about it proves my point. The ghetto is where you belong doin nothing smoking your joint.
When you were a kid, you got raped by your dad. Now you get raped by bagpipes from Bagdad
You’ll probably commit suicide later in life like most of you army men do. So just do it now so I don’t have to read your bullshit lines and look at your pic of fat ass Jadakiss too.
Fuck you, your mama, and obama. I’ll me fucking Sarah Palin while I’m smoking the ganja.
Doesn’t matter if your asian, white, or black you still wack. Literally, you’re in the army all you can do is wack.
I know they make you shave your head entering the army, but do they make you shave your vagina too?
You know where I’m going with this, fuck you.
Back to my white ways
Why do I write against guys like this? their so ready to fight n get to sessions
But their verses are so bad that if I feed on them I'd probly die from indigestion
Life is full of questions, who cares if he holds the answer to a single one
Lucky for me were on the internet while he's rapping about squeezin guns
Dunno how he expects to wreck me when were in a bout out for a kill
Cuz this dude couldn't deck me if I changed my name to house on a hill
Your useless claims of fame are really just pretty dumb...
....so I'm just gonna start shootin Jay's like playing a game of 21
Dude, your so fucking stupid that I know you gotta be out for yourself
Rules say how many lines to post n well it seems u can't even count to twelve.......
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This sucked.
Vallus your lines were simple and played in fact a lot of it barley made sense but there was obviously no competition here. Jay O work on your structure and punch's.
V/Vallus
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Jay O-
You’re in the army, which means you were the lowest 5 percentile in your class
Why the fuck would you enter the army? You can’t drink or get any ass.
weak, played
Jim Crow was smarter than you, throw you up in a minstrel show you wouldn’t know what to do. If you don’t know what I’m talkin about it proves my point. The ghetto is where you belong doin nothing smoking your joint.
nah
When you were a kid, you got raped by your dad. Now you get raped by bagpipes from Bagdad
You’ll probably commit suicide later in life like most of you army men do. So just do it now so I don’t have to read your bullshit lines and look at your pic of fat ass Jadakiss too.
no sorry man
Fuck you, your mama, and obama. I’ll me fucking Sarah Palin while I’m smoking the ganja.
Doesn’t matter if your asian, white, or black you still wack. Literally, you’re in the army all you can do is wack.
wtf
I know they make you shave your head entering the army, but do they make you shave your vagina too?
You know where I’m going with this, fuck you.
Back to my white ways
sorry not feeling this either
vs.
vallus-
Why do I write against guys like this? their so ready to fight n get to sessions
But their verses are so bad that if I feed on them I'd probly die from indigestion
lol funny but a little played
Life is full of questions, who cares if he holds the answer to a single one
Lucky for me were on the internet while he's rapping about squeezin guns
ok
Dunno how he expects to wreck me when were in a bout out for a kill
Cuz this dude couldn't deck me if I changed my name to house on a hill
haha funny again, but not much of a punch
Your useless claims of fame are really just pretty dumb...
....so I'm just gonna start shootin Jay's like playing a game of 21
comparing shit doesnt work.....saying blah blah "like" playing a game of 21 or whatever, those kind of lines are always played.
Dude, your so fucking stupid that I know you gotta be out for yourself
Rules say how many lines to post n well it seems u can't even count to twelve.......
meh closer
alright this wasnt the best battle here. vallus i've seen better from you, and take that as a compliment. Jay, no hate but that wasn't a very good verse. You gotta get more creative and use personals and wordplay. Vallus you at least had some funny lines with that were somewhat creative here. Vallus gets this..
v/Vallus
v/val barely cuz i wasnt really feelin anything he said outside of the first bar and that was mehhh but jays verse wasnt good at all attacked the army every bar...wouldnt b a prblem if the punches were decent
JayO
1. Nah dude, that was wack.
2. Sound like you writing a story, try again.
3. .....
4. Wow, no.
5. Kill yourself.
Vs.
Val Venus
1. Decent flip.
2. Filler.
3. Meh, pretty wack.
4. .......
5. .......
Comments: Wack battle, Jay I think your verse would be better suited for the Short Stories section. Vallus won this with his first bar.
Vote: Vallus
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Jay -
You’re in the army, which means you were the lowest 5 percentile in your class
Why the fuck would you enter the army? You can’t drink or get any ass.
-whackish
Jim Crow was smarter than you, throw you up in a minstrel show you wouldn’t know what to do. If you don’t know what I’m talkin about it proves my point. The ghetto is where you belong doin nothing smoking your joint.
-stretched to misery... and whack
When you were a kid, you got raped by your dad. Now you get raped by bagpipes from Bagdad
You’ll probably commit suicide later in life like most of you army men do. So just do it now so I don’t have to read your bullshit lines and look at your pic of fat ass Jadakiss too.
Fuck you, your mama, and obama. I’ll me fucking Sarah Palin while I’m smoking the ganja.
Doesn’t matter if your asian, white, or black you still wack. Literally, you’re in the army all you can do is wack.
I know they make you shave your head entering the army, but do they make you shave your vagina too?
You know where I’m going with this, fuck you.
Back to my white ways
^^^^^
WHACK
Vallus -
Why do I write against guys like this? their so ready to fight n get to sessions
But their verses are so bad that if I feed on them I'd probly die from indigestion
-Played lol
Life is full of questions, who cares if he holds the answer to a single one
Lucky for me were on the internet while he's rapping about squeezin guns
-meh
Dunno how he expects to wreck me when were in a bout out for a kill
Cuz this dude couldn't deck me if I changed my name to house on a hill
-made me lol -.-
Your useless claims of fame are really just pretty dumb...
....so I'm just gonna start shootin Jay's like playing a game of 21
- nah
Dude, your so fucking stupid that I know you gotta be out for yourself
Rules say how many lines to post n well it seems u can't even count to twelve.......
-lol expected
Val i this is a prime example of our conversation Re: dropping whack and still winning cuz of noobs.
Both verses shit. Vallus' better.
V/ Vallus
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