Fuck Love

[Engivale]

Fuck Love





I'm livin' alone at the other end of the phone,
And I guess I just suppress the next agenda you've shown,
Half of me's contractually obligated to hate you,
.....Indoctrinated..... Open heart artery operated to phase two,
But I stay true with every page view and each thought that you give me,
My costume has picked me, I'm tipsy and the cost is my kidney,
Pain softened I lift free of the shackles she gave me,
What's new? --- That's what sluts do, My passion's my slavery...
The kitchen cabinet's made to be full but it's empty,
Reminds me of my soul locked in a cold penitentiary...



How many years now in the blur?
Got sick and devoured the cure,
But how am I sure that my power is pure?
It's like God writes this
While I light spliffs with a tight fist
And take shots so I stay sauced workin' night shifts...
Fuck rappin', Fuck actin', Fuck spittin',
Fuck livin', Fuck dyin', Fuck quittin', Fuck tryin',
Fuck sighin', Fuck laughin', Fuck bein' sad and FUCK CRYIN'!!!
..............My luck I'm in danger of losing it,
Everything that I've worked for reclaimed cuz of Cupid's shit........
..............Fuck love and the burden it gives us,
I'll just sip bourbon, calm my nerves and learn to be religious........



If the feeling is mutual she's appealing and beautiful,
When Juliet met Romeo it was really unusual,
Remember Mercutio? --- He was my favorite,
He was the common sense to love;
....They were the slaves to it....
I'm not even after shit like a Capulet,
I'm broke and I'm not Christian or Catholic,
I'm not driven, I'm selfish and I tell fibs,
Truth? --- I'm not a catch, throw me back, bitch...



I'm an adult and I'm voiceless as a result of my choices,
It's like I called heads and got tails in both of my coin flips...
Shit, I'm used to bad hands so I bluff,
I handle this stuff like a kid cuz man, this is tough...
The world doesn't give breaks, it just takes
Your mistakes, and judges you every time you switch face,
Our fixed fates intertwine like dinner with wine,
If God's omnipotent then every sin is designed...

....So Fuck Love.




Links up soon... gonna go thru for some ppl that checked my last piece... just gimme a minute to sober up here and re-read this I did this quick and it was kinda close to home.

[Erun.]

Damn dude, with recent events in my life, I can somewhat relate to this. Scratch that, I can really relate to this. For the concept that you dropped to, the structure fit nicely, I thought the catch line was dope cause i still remember it after reading it. Your flow was pretty cool, but this was more focused towards emotion and I don't need to say much about that cause it was pretty apparent throughout the entire piece. I like the Romeo & Juliet part, and how Marcutio was the common sense, brought back high school days.

On the personal tip.... the shitty thing is dude, that we say fuck love, and throw it off and try to be those loners that live in the woods writing stories and shit, but sooner or later we realize that every straight man on this earth is a victim of pussy's that punish us for nothing. We can either become like them and kill chivalry or tough it out and hope there's a decent cunt amongst them somewhere. Stay up, this was inspiring.

[sikmaster]

impressive as usual

[AlphaMetric]

this was some sick stuff... i really like it cauz I caught the flow right away, flowed nice.... remind me of old eminem.... you had some real strong emotion in this I find... and the rhyme scheme perfect... good job on that... peace

[Engivale]

Thanks for feed, guys... upping and links...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...965/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...483/index.html

[Cody Nash]

this is dope, not a bad little piece. more of a rant than anything though, seems like maybe you're just trying to get some emotions out of your system.. the romeo/juliet stanza was sick, definitely some good material there.. the "fuck this fuck this fuck that fuck that" shit was alright, sort've plain compared to most of what you wrote though, seemed more like that part was all emotion and no real creativity more than anything haha.. but word, this piece was still above many and not a bad read at all. not your best, but good still.


- Cry

[Liddle Jaey]

Very impressed, I like the flow a lot. Best read I've seen on here so far to be honest. That 'choices'-'coin flips' line and Romeo Juliet line were my favorite. You're on point my dude, good work. Keep droppin', I'll stay posted.

[vampz]

this is a dope peace , im currently feeling this in my life and it was really really good

Half of me's contractually obligated to hate you,
.....Indoctrinated..... Open heart artery operated to phase two,

when you open up with lines like this with awesome vocab, flow and depth into a concept it really is good to read... and im a horrorcore rapper so for an emotional piece like this to stand out to me really means something dude. im new to the site and this is hands down the BEST iv read so far, whenever you drop anything pm the link and i will be sure to drop some feed back.

really really really good shit dude

[Johnny 6-feet]

Dope, heartfelt. You seem like you're mentally about where i was when i was writing 'i quit'. Your rhyme scheme was silky smooth even during the 'fuck everything' breakdown in the middle. This seems like the right kind of topic for a vet to tackle and you carried it well by getting into the stream of thoughts of your narrator. You could've probably spun this out for another 16 if you wanted. Good vocab, imagery and all that. Good work.

Cheers for the rep.

[Engivale]

lol on this topic I coulda wrote a fuckin novel the way i was writing... serious... anyways I appreciate the looks as always, thx every1...

[Soule]

This was pretty sick man, nice little rant piece you have here. The flow and rhymescheme, as usual, was a great touch. I kind of figured you were drunk or something with how your structure was lol. I'm not used to seeing that many periods at one time from you. The rant was pretty damn meaningful though, and I got to say... you had some really sick concepts in here. Nice wording, great read. Keep it up dude, we gotta collab sometime soon.

[Nahlidge]

Woot. This is the type of shit I like. I think people often go on the route of tryin` to develop concepts and crazy twists too often. Instead of just writin` what`s on their mind that the time. You put this across perfect in my opinion. I liked the anger in it. The feelin` of "fuck you if I`m not good enough". Definitely some realness. Good shit.