10 lines
House rules
No dickriding
No bullshit
Due in 30 mins
Check it muthafucka.
10 lines
House rules
No dickriding
No bullshit
Due in 30 mins
Check it muthafucka.
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hello..
you'll be pulverized you're not a bigga threat on the internet
i'll leave camo crushed if i'm in the mood for smokin menthol cigarettes
i know he a virgin, so if we hear otherwise its lies told by a dumb coward
the only time we heard camo hump, jackin chan was eatin it durin rush hour
you'd be bad in the military branch, you'd stand out while ur suited
he'd be fast to give up his position...changin to anyone his Husband chooses
plus i heard ya fist game was wack you need to revaluate that
s'why we don't wanna hear camoflage versus...anyone and be disappointed at that!
ya momma says you're so cute despite bein fat and everyone knew it
but she wishes nonstop there was adorable...........to allow you to fit through it!
u like to smoke? u can quit rappin and I'll hand u the bud
..or this jay's getting scuffed up like I ran through the mud
damn u a scrub, my punches'll break ur chin for steppin
..hes wack n I'll expose this alcoholic like an intervention
u never put in work, when recession hit u probably felt scared
..and ur experienced with frees....cause ur family's on welfare
ya lines not connecting, ur verse was the worst of the week
..all ya punches goin over-heads like shirts at the beach
Im bout to retire this vet, called him a scrub he didnt answer
..so this'll be alcoholics last battle like pancreatic cancer
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the closers were pretty dope lines for real nice work yall especially with 15 minute drops.
i feel the camo hump was forced on jays part.
and the welfare thing was pretty weak for camo.
jays opener was decent but the rest of your verse shows you should've taken more time.
camo on the other hand wasn't as dope as usual, the opener waqs ok and the rest was decent so i give it to him for more consistency.
you've both dropped better though.
v/CaMo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...902/index.html
Jay-
you'll be pulverized you're not a bigga threat on the internet
i'll leave camo crushed if i'm in the mood for smokin menthol cigarettes
ok opener
i know he a virgin, so if we hear otherwise its lies told by a dumb coward
the only time we heard camo hump, jackin chan was eatin it durin rush hour
lol alright alright
you'd be bad in the military branch, you'd stand out while ur suited
he'd be fast to give up his position...changin to anyone his Husband chooses
pretty good
plus i heard ya fist game was wack you need to revaluate that
s'why we don't wanna hear camoflage versus...anyone and be disappointed at that!
haha nice misdirection
ya momma says you're so cute despite bein fat and everyone knew it
but she wishes nonstop there was adorable...........to allow you to fit through it!
decent wordplay and closer
vs
Camo-
u like to smoke? u can quit rappin and I'll hand u the bud
..or this jay's getting scuffed up like I ran through the mud
ok ok not a bad opener here
damn u a scrub, my punches'll break ur chin for steppin
..hes wack n I'll expose this alcoholic like an intervention
lol alright
u never put in work, when recession hit u probably felt scared
..and ur experienced with frees....cause ur family's on welfare
lol good
ya lines not connecting, ur verse was the worst of the week
..all ya punches goin over-heads like shirts at the beach
not bad not bad
Im bout to retire this vet, called him a scrub he didnt answer
..so this'll be alcoholics last battle like pancreatic cancer
mmm ok
alright this was close overall. real close, damn i'm not even sure who to give it to. gotta read them again...well shit this real close, read em twice and i think i gotta go with jay on this one. jay was throwing some nice misdirection that had me thinking one thing but the punch came out another. he was floating like a butterfly, but stinging like a bee. camo this wasn't the best verse i've seen from you, but you guys did drop pretty quickly. of course no hate bro...and dont get me wrong this was still decent but i think jay edged this with slightly harder punches and misdirection. your verse here was a little too statement like. it's all good though man.
v/Jay the Alcy
i think that JayIgh The Alkaholik was better.
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; July 20th, 2009 at 10:50 PM
Wow... GTFO here with that dickriding bullshit.Originally Posted by snugglemuffin
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LOL . i (L) dick!
jay your first bar was aiight, second and third bars were definite no, and fourth and fifth were pretty dope... camo your first bar was wack, and the rest were solid.. cancer and intervention i liked the best... now jays last two verses were better for me, but camo had the consistency... both verses coulda used a more hip hop feeling flow, imo
V/camo
you rap like ibeastout votes
Jay Wasnt Bad But I have to hand down to camo FOr having better punchlines The one about the intervention stood out so Id have to give it to camo
Jay Nothing really caught my atttention alot or stood out as a dope punchlines
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; July 20th, 2009 at 10:50 PM
ROFL didnt even break down the vote
Vote DQ'ed. Dont bull bs like that
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; July 20th, 2009 at 10:51 PM
the home of CHI
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Fresh out da hood, I'm-PAID, Define Made man, I'm-MADE
Kids watchin how-I-BEHAVE, dey idolizin me so much, its like Pac hopped out-da-GRAVE!
that's a straight dr vote
opener: camo
nameplay/wordplay: camo
flow/structure: camo
personals: jay
punches: camo
metaphors: camo
multies: camo
closer: camo
overall: camo, nice verse
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; July 20th, 2009 at 10:52 PM
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"Hair is almost out my scalp, having nightmares of terrorists outside my house
with a bomb strapped ta my therapist why im found high on my couch"
lol you guys are gayyyy .
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