5 bars due in 24 hours after his check
no bullshit votes
gluck
5 bars due in 24 hours after his check
no bullshit votes
gluck
bump for the idiot who didn't see the thread bein set up
and i'ma drop tomorrow i got a party to hit up later today
Checkety Mc check checks
at this rate of punchin you're ending up dead or in the ER with this disgrace's fateOriginally Posted by Lyricalbrutality
he can't wait for me to drop...i'll make impatient after the doctor replaces his face
now rap you have no chance,so basically this choice is useless
maybe u can dj for g-unit..since we mention ur name and they're like whoo kid?
look @ his pics,ain't no real G pussy for faking shit i'll leave this whore dead
^ckuz we all know the closest he got to bangin..... are the danglin hairs on his forehead
this lazy fuck has courtside seats,so the athletes he can be seein the face of em
i'll give him a nosebleed without relocatin him up high in the stadium!
son,we kno now he advances on dicks of wannabe vets so you're not a threat
i'd say you're one of the proceeds...but luckily hasn't reached that status yet!
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E-thuggin
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Originally Posted by .Bullet.
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#1.
No Noob votes please..if you don't understand or comprehend it don't bother voting
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E-thuggin
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Jayy the alkoholic shit you aint even old enough to drink
Alcohol would have the same effect that men have on you
...You'd be Bent over the kitchen sink
Yo i been killin' dope heads so you aint up to my standard
I'd rip you a new one...
...but PD already left you pandered*,
And Jay you got no chance, shit you aint beatin me at any-rate
I'd say you get dickride votes..
...but at 14 i'm guessing you'd fail to ejaculate
Jay will do anything to be noticed, for fame this bitch is hoping
All your fonts may be red, but i can promise your verses wont be
yeh you have more L's that W's, you have great observational skill,
You didn't get that from ur mom
...Or she would have noticed the "Use By" on the contraceptive pill
explanations... (though nooby, i think needed)
*Pandered verb - Used by others for sexual pleasure, To give satisfaction to. (old british word)
PD = Pedophiles Dungeon ( using the idea he is 14)
the thing really striking about this battle is the personals...
jay you had some good verse with great flow... on that id give you the score, you got tighter flow than most the people on this site, but look at all the personals brutality is throwin your way...lol.. damn its like bang bang bang with hits... now jay came on with nice punches too, but alls he hit was LBs hair....lol...cmon man....for harder hitting personals VOTE/LB
you rap like ibeastout votes
i'm gonna be brutally honest in this so jay can stop complaining
at this rate of punchin you're ending up dead or in the ER with this disgrace's fate
he can't wait for me to drop...i'll make impatient after the doctor replaces his face
played as fuck i wrote shit like that before, and you know it's played if i use it 0/5
now rap you have no chance,so basically this choice is useless
maybe u can dj for g-unit..since we mention ur name and they're like whoo kid?
stretched but ok 3/5
look @ his pics,ain't no real G pussy for faking shit i'll leave this whore dead
^ckuz we all know the closest he got to bangin..... are the danglin hairs on his forehead
lol 4/5
this lazy fuck has courtside seats,so the athletes he can be seein the face of em
i'll give him a nosebleed without relocatin him up high in the stadium!
miss 0/5
son,we kno now he advances on dicks of wannabe vets so you're not a threat
i'd say you're one of the proceeds...but luckily hasn't reached that status yet!
alot of people use worhless wordplay in their verses just for the sake of wordplay. after reading this over it actually fits the concept but the finish was weak so 3/5
10/25
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Jayy the alkoholic shit you aint even old enough to drink
Alcohol would have the same effect that men have on you
...You'd be Bent over the kitchen sink
stretched as fuck 05
Yo i been killin' dope heads so you aint up to my standard
I'd rip you a new one...
...but PD already left you pandered*,
meh 0/5
And Jay you got no chance, shit you aint beatin me at any-rate
I'd say you get dickride votes..
...but at 14 i'm guessing you'd fail to ejaculate
ok 3/5
Jay will do anything to be noticed, for fame this bitch is hoping
All your fonts may be red, but i can promise your verses wont be
i've yet to see this concept so it's not played 4/5
yeh you have more L's that W's, you have great observational skill,
You didn't get that from ur mom
...Or she would have noticed the "Use By" on the contraceptive pill
good close 4/5
11/25
v/ LB
at this rate of punchin you're ending up dead or in the ER with this disgrace's fate
he can't wait for me to drop...i'll make impatient after the doctor replaces his face
Good wordplay, a bet stretched of a bar imo...but ok wordplay and punch
now rap you have no chance,so basically this choice is useless
maybe u can dj for g-unit..since we mention ur name and they're like whoo kid?
naaa
look @ his pics,ain't no real G pussy for faking shit i'll leave this whore dead
^ckuz we all know the closest he got to bangin..... are the danglin hairs on his forehead
no, if this was a pic battle then that would be a good punch, but talking about his pic in a non pic battle is actually an automatic DQ...sorry
this lazy fuck has courtside seats,so the athletes he can be seein the face of em
i'll give him a nosebleed without relocatin him up high in the stadium!
I see where you were going with this, but in the end it was no...
son,we kno now he advances on dicks of wannabe vets so you're not a threat
i'd say you're one of the proceeds...but luckily hasn't reached that status yet!
nice...good punch
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
IDK why it did that...anyway
Vs.
Jayy the alkoholic shit you aint even old enough to drink
Alcohol would have the same effect that men have on you
...You'd be Bent over the kitchen sink
nice bar, I like how you worded it with drink then enter down and start alcohol, nice wording...but goddamn you stretched the fuck out of this bar, you could've took 5 words out of that shit and made it hit alot better
Yo i been killin' dope heads so you aint up to my standard
I'd rip you a new one...
...but PD already left you pandered*,
NO! you tried at a personal but you killed it with the nonused word and an explanation...so no...we're not in old england so don't use old english words dude...
And Jay you got no chance, shit you aint beatin me at any-rate
I'd say you get dickride votes..
...but at 14 i'm guessing you'd fail to ejaculate
PLAYED!!!!
Jay will do anything to be noticed, for fame this bitch is hoping
All your fonts may be red, but i can promise your verses wont be
PLAYED!!! I know he types in red but c'mon, that concepts been thrown around way too much...like this: "Even if you drop in a diff color text your verses wouldn't be RED
yeh you have more L's that W's, you have great observational skill,
You didn't get that from ur mom
...Or she would have noticed the "Use By" on the contraceptive pill
PLAYED!!!! get some fresh material
VOTE = JI, for having fresher concepts, close battle though.
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Everyone else pretty much covered it...Lyrical or whatever his name is took this easy...
Decent battle I guess. Both of you need to work on incorporating more multi's.
at this rate of punchin you're ending up dead or in the ER with this disgrace's fate
he can't wait for me to drop...i'll make impatient after the doctor replaces his face
ok
now rap you have no chance,so basically this choice is useless
maybe u can dj for g-unit..since we mention ur name and they're like whoo kid?
haha ok
look @ his pics,ain't no real G pussy for faking shit i'll leave this whore dead
^ckuz we all know the closest he got to bangin..... are the danglin hairs on his forehead
it'd be much funnier if there was an actual pic of him with the danglin hairs but still funny. decent humor. overall, ok
this lazy fuck has courtside seats,so the athletes he can be seein the face of em
i'll give him a nosebleed without relocatin him up high in the stadium!
ehh .. nah not feelin it
son,we kno now he advances on dicks of wannabe vets so you're not a threat
i'd say you're one of the proceeds...but luckily hasn't reached that status yet!
alright closer, could've been stronger
VS
Jayy the alkoholic shit you aint even old enough to drink
Alcohol would have the same effect that men have on you
...You'd be Bent over the kitchen sink
stretched ... could've been better ..
Yo i been killin' dope heads so you aint up to my standard
I'd rip you a new one...
...but PD already left you pandered*,
umm nah
And Jay you got no chance, shit you aint beatin me at any-rate
I'd say you get dickride votes..
...but at 14 i'm guessing you'd fail to ejaculate
not bad ... could've been better
Jay will do anything to be noticed, for fame this bitch is hoping
All your fonts may be red, but i can promise your verses wont be
ehh .. played
yeh you have more L's that W's, you have great observational skill,
You didn't get that from ur mom
...Or she would have noticed the "Use By" on the contraceptive pill
decent
my vote goes to Jay. This was a pretty close battle, I have to say. But I vote for Jay because his shit was complex and had the better concepts, IMO. good battle both of you.
upping
upped
Upping votes please
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