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    Elevation

    Creation And determination Leads to Mastering Raps And ELevation
    The Mind Is a Tank Fill it uP with Info Like Pumping fuel At gas Stations
    Participation And Demonstration Is key for Increasing My value iN the Hip Hop Nation
    Lyrics leave you vibed With Vibration And Paused In your Location
    Temptation and Admiration Mixed Up In a beautiful Combination
    Old School Foundation Hardcore Shit Feels Like A Constipation
    Education Gained Feeds My Destination And Dedication
    No Intimidation Can Repel My Graduation
    Always Leveling Up with Inspiration Like A magical Levitation
    Verses Cure your Ear Like Medication and Infect your Brain Like Information
    There is no Imitation in my presentation Just A transformation of my situation
    Converting it Into A Musical Revelation Leave in a state of isolation Like a surgeon Preforming an operation
    So accept my invitation of this Lyrical Incarceration and Innovation into the calm Feeling of relaxation
    Hip-Hop Ain't dead it just on a Vacation Needs A little Dedication So It can Be brought To live like an Animation And Pound through the speakers and erupt in sensation so hear my Conversation and the way to salvation
    Steer the Population Like GPS Navigation Into The Light of Rap preservation

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    it was nice lots of "Tion" Words but you used em nice with a smooth flow,
    ____Lifes bou chicks and diamonds, dun be stupid'
    Like handin a brick to Chick whos whylin', But dudes im stylin' And so much paper like a nail salon im Filin'___

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    Thanks alot man I was inspired by a song by immortal technique

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    Re: Elevation

    actually i have to admit first glance i thought to basic but rereading i see i was being haste you used the words right and got your message conveyed right
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Thnx man appreciate both feeds on my pieces Ill be sure to feed on some of your shit thnks again

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    Re: Elevation

    Uppin ppl leave some reviews or critisim Thanks

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    Good flow niggah. Try using some alliteration
    Maybe try comin up wit some witty punchlines and shit. Naw mean niggah?
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    Uppin I want some detailed feeds plz

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    uppin

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    definitely a good flow on this...rele diggin tha conceptz n ur metaphorz as well...multiz were fuckin packed all in this...tha message came across very clear...n u got to show a lil bit of ur talent...not bad wordin either...i mean shyt this was a GOOD READ...SOLID...KEEP ON WRITING THAT SHYT BRUH!!!

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    Uppin

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    Yo Come on ppl Dont sleep on this I want a breakdown

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    Good drop.
    Can't really say you had sick multis because the "ations" rhymes are the easiest ones to use. However you did use them nicely.
    Could have used some more metaphors or similes.
    You were talking about stepping up your game I was expecting something about reaching a higher level somehow.

    Dopest part:"Hip hop aint dead its just on vacation......"

    I was feeling that

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