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    Palestine


    A Land Torn Into A Warzone Where The Weak Are Prone
    To Bullets And Bombs Being Blown, Children Left with Broken Bones
    Deaths Aint Shown And Families Dont Got time to Mourn
    But We Ain't Asking To Be Left Alone, Will Fight Back First With Throwing Stones

    AK-47 Leading The Way Up To Heaven, Rockets Raining Down In Sessions
    Aggression Aimed At The Oppression No Discretion In My Expression
    Leaving Israeli Dead By The Dozens, Bullet To The Head Have Em Splatterd Red
    The Whole World Ignored The Tears We've Shed And The Blood We Bled
    Turned A Blind Eye, Gave Us the Deaf Ear,Believing their Lies, Not Hearing our Cries

    We Now Know Who to trust After Left for Soo long if we were metal We've Turned into rust
    But We Have Risen From The Dust And The Gunz We Will Bust
    Violence Will Combust Like Propane Tanks At the Unjust

    Palestine is Our Calling And It's time to get crawling
    No More Time TO be stalling And Ignoring the Brawling






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    Re: Palestine

    Upping Some Feeds Plzz

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    Re: Palestine

    nice shit.........good multis flow fell off a little in some places

    I see you wrote from the heart and you told a decent story that kept to the topic

    like I said the flow could've used a little touch up....

    but other than that this piece was pretty good........

    almost makes me wanna fight for a free Palestine...and i'm American......
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    deep as shit yo nice multi's really paints a picture of the violence that the Holy Land endures ,10/10

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    Calvin Kold And Vudu Da Magician Thanks alot for the feed. Im just happy the piece was good and conveyed the topic and both your statments Give me hope and give Palestine hope that the world is still on topic even though they have been away for a while

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    it was a good read...enjoyed ur multiz n ur conceptz...ya flow was on point n ur wording was wonderfull...so KEEP ON WRITING HOMIE!!!
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    Thanks Man Big Upz And respect
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    none...RESPECT...
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    Appreciate it
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    Uppin
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    word...
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    Uppin

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    Uppin

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    Uppin Come on Guys I wrote from da heart show some respect lol

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    I liked it but like ya boy said it could've been fixed up a bit it was nice though dogg
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