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    Arrow BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    BOOM BOOM TRAP (BOOM BOOM POW KING REMIX)

    i got that boom boom trap n that what tha fuk rap
    dude my enterance be so deep its hell just like tha GAP
    tha trap be wild like a zoo n tha gorillaz bout to bust a cap
    so i be hangin with tha stupid long bananaz all out my strap
    walk on these stepz that crumble but dude dont lose ya map
    cuz then ur gonna go in tha wrong room in be like "holy crap!"
    "this dudez fukin crazy why tha hell wud he have that?"
    cuz i got roomz just fulla shyt like tha kind from a giant bat
    i dont need no fukin front door i gotta mile long stoop
    n sentry gunz sittin over by tha pool n my basketball hoop
    u dont wanna even get close to my trap i got an arrow loop
    n some dam good archerz u gonna have a bad arrow poop
    my wallz fukin move n switch places so dont lose ya group
    cuz if i catch ya off in my shyt imma use you for tha soup
    my trap be so hood but shyt still looks like tha country side
    tha tallest tower by tha darkest cloud yep thats where i reside
    i got some fingerprint scannerz so that u lames cant get inside
    n a fukin rele super fun way to die call that tha death slide
    lawz cant touch me cuz they cant ever prove what i provide
    i just tell em its soap in then i make that shyt go n divide
    oh yeah my math is so perfect my numberz be so worldwide
    n tha shyt im doing for my pplz just fukin wont be denied

    (CHEF BOY VERSE)

    I got that boom boom trap
    Thats the cannons out back
    Light the fuse and then blast
    Meanwhile I just relax
    Royal guards so don't question it
    I got security like the president
    Watchin close around my residence
    I'm comin worse than any felon is
    My trap is my castle so wait for the drawbridge
    And cross with caution, the end is where my dogs live
    They'll tear you up, and leave you with the garbage
    With the paper that I bring the judge will just pardon
    Money talks, so I give a grand salutation
    Watch a dirty jury give me a clean evaluation
    Purchased freedom so its back to trapnation
    Where my guns don't clap they give standing ovations


    yeah tha trap is hella tight but i run it more like a skewl
    cuz i keep teachin em tha dark artz of hustin any old fool
    i got all my soliderz on tha range learnin how to hold a tool
    n some hood fincin classes for when one of em go to duel
    oh forgot to tell yall that im tha fukkin Princiable n i alone rule
    n i keep my brand new spaceship up underneath my pool
    i see tha fedz tryin to get in but they always die on tha rokz
    n they dont ever seem to notice there no boat at tha dockz
    i gotta secret opening for tha submarinez holdin all my blockz
    n i still keep all em keyz in bundlez even tho my trap aint got no lockz
    yo mayn i swear to yall my trap be tha fukin best
    i got so many fanz this shyt be jammin like OZ fest
    dude this trap so fukkin royal just check tha trap crest
    dragonz be on all my shyt watch how i swagg my vest
    im tha fukkin KING of my court so theres no need to jest
    im up all night with tha coke cookin like im obsessed
    dude my potz be tellin jokes like they was all possesed
    cuz my trap is a beauty n imma fukkin beast in my nest
    dont ever touch my byrdz u might get ya life took
    n dont even try to pull no pagez out of my cook book
    yeah im fishin for cash tell me fiendz to jump on my hook
    or mayn i can let u fuk some of my hoez off in my other rook

    so u know i got tha dockz by tha sea but never no boat
    n all these missin body warrantz cuz body dont float
    after these lames climb n fall in when i press tha remote
    n then they get devoured by all tha crocodilez in tha moat
    Snipers man the fort, go ahead and test your luck
    Man eattin deer below, so dont be gettin all buck
    Trap doors from the ceilin, like What the fuck?!
    n Lazer beam fences line the water for any sittin duck
    tha haterz stare at my trap n then they say u fukkin suck
    i be like get tha fuk out tha way of my dam money truck
    pplz is callin this shyt tha Bink-182 come back tour
    cuz we still got it for tha cheap for any crack whore
    hell yeah we got shyt tonz of fanz but we still want more
    tha kind that wud fuk our fanz n eat cum off tha floor
    yeah we rele livin this wrong who tha fuk wants to be right
    dude imma pop some X pillz then jump on tha next flight
    go to some random azz country n step up my shop for a night
    then bring bak all tha fine hoez who love to cook up that white



    YALL NEED TO STOP SLEEPING ON US!!! GO JOIN MY FAN BASE!!!

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...434/index.html

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    Quick overview, this is my 2nd drop at all in OM, and I'm not usually into the hole 'trap' or 'gangster' theme so this was new for me, and advice you can give me is much appreciated.

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    nice piece man... had good vocab and imagery was on point... i felt like the flow fell off in one or two places but not enough to spoil the piece so other than that your structure was pretty good too... Some lines i felt were a bit too long too which might be the reason you flow fell off a bit too. Overall though nice read.

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    lol it goes to BOOM BOOM POW...n yeah its for AUDIO...tell us ur favorite lines!!!
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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    btw, when people feed, can you point out if its something in his verse or mine.. I'd like to know if theres anything I can improve/did good on

    mine is JUST the second

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    ok is this from the new bep's song thing cause i was sorta reading it with that beat in mind

    overall basic vocab from both of yall for me cheif boy out shone djkingdavid he had alot more flow and it was a real light read, good work both yall stay up and hit my lifestory piece back

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    LMFAO @ out shone me...GOT DAMMIT post ur fav lines!!!
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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    yo good shit bruh, personal opinion it would go better wit audio cuz if u dont kno the beat it seems off. all depends on the reading, but overall a good peice

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    yeah next up is AUDIO for me...might just leave OM alone forever...
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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    this is sick dudes got some good flow, i can;t stand the original lyrics to the song so its good to see a remix lol

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    lol thanx bruh... YALL TELL US UR FAV LINES...ALSO COME JOIN OUR CREW...OR MY FAN CLUB!!!!
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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    Ok...You both deff came out strong here

    David:

    Came out good, your beginning was the best from you and if you know the beat then it flows nice

    Chef:

    You came hard, your beginning was the best part of the piece for me

    I got that boom boom trap
    Thats the cannons out back
    Light the fuse and then blast
    Meanwhile I just relax
    Royal guards so don't question it
    I got security like the president
    Watchin close around my residence
    I'm comin worse than any felon is
    My trap is my castle so wait for the drawbridge
    And cross with caution, the end is where my dogs live
    They'll tear you up, and leave you with the garbage
    With the paper that I bring the judge will just pardon
    Money talks, so I give a grand salutation
    Watch a dirty jury give me a clean evaluation
    Purchased freedom so its back to trapnation
    Where my guns don't clap they give standing ovations

    Dope IMO

    Both of you flowed well to the beat, again if you don't know the beat then I can see how this could seem weird to you

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    lol thanx for that DOPE rating...lol CHEF BOY out did me a bit...all good...
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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    @Dolomite
    The part you pasted is my only part :P I only did 16 lines, the rest was David.

    Thanks for the feed!

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    Re: BOOM BOOM TRAP Feat. CHEF BOY (KING REMIX)

    lol its ok bruh...most pplz dont even understand my lines...but DOLO was talkin bout ur flow was cleaner...
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