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    Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    Lazy mdfbiuerhfire

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    Luckily77777777777 is not allowed to vote....

    G'Luck....

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    lol word, I'll drop within 45.

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    Cool....when this episode of trailer park boys ends I got you

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    Make it 13 or 14 max.....up to you


    Pedophiles Dungeon huh?

    I like your chick, way I liquor she bleeds in the liver
    u ain't 'gon do shit tho...whats a Pedo to a serial killer?
    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent
    Dues were sworn so I could take human form, slice him line after line
    Nice sig.......too bad this 9-0
    gettin knocked out by ten bo' like his name was 9:59
    I kick these incests like I abuse ur sister, this fuckin dude got bitter
    Cuz he came wit nuthin n got hit by more punches then his crew got members
    Yea he's been on a clean sweep, so this dudes ample........
    .......2 bad I'mma knock him off his stool onto that broom's handle
    My scriptures rip ur face apart, hurtin ur pose, yo
    & you can't pop V like your allergic to codon.......

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    damnit....that meant to say

    "gettin clocked by ten bo like his name was 9:59"

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    Alright Vallus, I got this win and thats a guarantee
    Your not an Emcee, Your verse is debris
    You in the army? Better off swiming with fish under the sea.
    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable. ^^
    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.
    Vallus is clueless like an unaired episode of scooby-doo
    Like somebody sayin' this dudes good
    I'll prove that untrue, Oh and a free win? I forgot to thank you
    Vallus, Don't stop believing Like the song by Journey
    Hope ya' got a defense attorney
    Cause next I'ma knock ya out the FL mini Tourney.

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    Lets get some votes in here.

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    I like your chick, way I liquor she bleeds in the liver
    u ain't 'gon do shit tho...whats a Pedo to a serial killer?
    Eh
    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent
    Seen it
    Dues were sworn so I could take human form, slice him line after line
    Nice sig.......too bad this 9-0
    gettin knocked out by ten bo' like his name was 9:59
    Sorry what?
    I kick these incests like I abuse ur sister, this fuckin dude got bitter
    Cuz he came wit nuthin n got hit by more punches then his crew got members
    Ok
    Yea he's been on a clean sweep, so this dudes ample........
    .......2 bad I'mma knock him off his stool onto that broom's handle
    Lol ok
    My scriptures rip ur face apart, hurtin ur pose, yo
    & you can't pop V like your allergic to codon.......
    Ok finisher


    Vs


    Alright Vallus, I got this win and thats a guarantee
    Your not an Emcee, Your verse is debris
    You in the army? Better off swiming with fish under the sea.
    Bad opener
    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable. ^^
    Bit weak
    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.
    Seen it b4 but still lol'd
    Vallus is clueless like an unaired episode of scooby-doo
    Like somebody sayin' this dudes good
    I'll prove that untrue, Oh and a free win? I forgot to thank you
    ok
    Vallus, Don't stop believing Like the song by Journey
    Hope ya' got a defense attorney
    Cause next I'ma knock ya out the FL mini Tourney.
    Ok bit weak for a closer


    Close battle in my eyes both verse were pretty average. Id have to say CS came a bit harder with more consistant punchs and better rhymes so i gotta give it to him. But like i said pretty close.

    Vote Critical Strike




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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    I like your chick, way I liquor she bleeds in the liver
    u ain't 'gon do shit tho...whats a Pedo to a serial killer?
    weakish
    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent
    ok attempt
    Dues were sworn so I could take human form, slice him line after line
    Nice sig.......too bad this 9-0
    gettin knocked out by ten bo' like his name was 9:59
    na
    I kick these incests like I abuse ur sister, this fuckin dude got bitter
    Cuz he came wit nuthin n got hit by more punches then his crew got members
    ehh
    Yea he's been on a clean sweep, so this dudes ample........
    .......2 bad I'mma knock him off his stool onto that broom's handle
    wasn't feeling it man
    My scriptures rip ur face apart, hurtin ur pose, yo
    & you can't pop V like your allergic to codon.......
    weak


    Vs


    Alright Vallus, I got this win and thats a guarantee
    Your not an Emcee, Your verse is debris
    You in the army? Better off swiming with fish under the sea.
    weak
    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable. ^^
    wording was off
    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.
    lol
    Vallus is clueless like an unaired episode of scooby-doo
    Like somebody sayin' this dudes good
    I'll prove that untrue, Oh and a free win? I forgot to thank you
    ok but waaaaaaaaay too stretched
    Vallus, Don't stop believing Like the song by Journey
    Hope ya' got a defense attorney
    Cause next I'ma knock ya out the FL mini Tourney.
    weakish

    V/CS


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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    I like your chick, way I liquor she bleeds in the liver
    u ain't 'gon do shit tho...whats a Pedo to a serial killer?

    - .....
    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent

    - ....
    Dues were sworn so I could take human form, slice him line after line
    Nice sig.......too bad this 9-0

    - uhhhh no....bad lines again
    gettin knocked out by ten bo' like his name was 9:59
    I kick these incests like I abuse ur sister, this fuckin dude got bitter
    Cuz he came wit nuthin n got hit by more punches then his crew got members

    - the only decent bar in the verse
    Yea he's been on a clean sweep, so this dudes ample........
    .......2 bad I'mma knock him off his stool onto that broom's handle

    - ha, decent
    My scriptures rip ur face apart, hurtin ur pose, yo
    & you can't pop V like your allergic to codon.......

    - again....no


    vs.



    Alright Vallus, I got this win and thats a guarantee
    Your not an Emcee, Your verse is debris

    - ...weak
    You in the army? Better off swiming with fish under the sea.
    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable. ^^

    - i see what u tried to do, but no, didn't work
    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.

    - amusing yes, but not a hard punchline, nor origninal
    Vallus is clueless like an unaired episode of scooby-doo
    Like somebody sayin' this dudes good

    - ....?
    I'll prove that untrue, Oh and a free win? I forgot to thank you
    Vallus, Don't stop believing Like the song by Journey
    Hope ya' got a defense attorney
    Cause next I'ma knock ya out the FL mini Tourney.

    - bad ending


    this battle sucked....hope RB do better battles than this

    vote = critical strike only cuz he had more decent punches that vallus.....

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    lol broke down a punch wrong, but okay.

    Up.

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    I like your chick, way I liquor she bleeds in the liver
    u ain't 'gon do shit tho...whats a Pedo to a serial killer?
    -first line was dope
    second *dead*

    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent
    -ok at best

    Dues were sworn so I could take human form, slice him line after line
    Nice sig.......too bad this 9-0
    gettin knocked out by ten bo' like his name was 9:59
    -nah

    I kick these incests like I abuse ur sister, this fuckin dude got bitter
    Cuz he came wit nuthin n got hit by more punches then his crew got members
    -lol harsh

    Yea he's been on a clean sweep, so this dudes ample........
    .......2 bad I'mma knock him off his stool onto that broom's handle
    -eh

    My scriptures rip ur face apart, hurtin ur pose, yo
    & you can't pop V like your allergic to codon.......
    -eh

    vs

    Alright Vallus, I got this win and thats a guarantee
    Your not an Emcee, Your verse is debris
    You in the army? Better off swiming with fish under the sea.
    -nah

    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable. ^^
    -cool concept poor execution

    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.
    -loool made me literally lol for a good min

    Vallus is clueless like an unaired episode of scooby-doo
    Like somebody sayin' this dudes good
    I'll prove that untrue, Oh and a free win? I forgot to thank you
    -ok

    Vallus, Don't stop believing Like the song by Journey
    Hope ya' got a defense attorney
    Cause next I'ma knock ya out the FL mini Tourney.
    -ok

    vote crit he came stronger
    hit my battle back against nasty boiii

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    Re: Critical-Strike Vs. Vallus

    Best lines:

    I know today I could spare 'em, put away my lasers n bearings
    But I get enjoyment beatin this Pedo's ass like an angry parent

    Vs.


    You beating me? Vallus brings nothing but fail to the table
    my punches land hard
    ...............Leaving his legs, all four of them unstable.
    I'm here to win, If I miss the right I'll land the hook
    Look, Rapping is difficult
    Like down syndrom kids staying in the lines in a colouring book.

    Punches: CS
    Personals: Vallus
    Wordplay: CS
    Originality: Tie
    Structure: Vallus.. Critical lose that gay 3 line bar shit

    Vote: weak battle but Critical gets my vote here

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    Upping to close this.

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    Upp again!

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