however many lines
norm rules...
& blah blah blah
lol
good luck boo
drop whenevea
Fcukme
khris killem
however many lines
norm rules...
& blah blah blah
lol
good luck boo
drop whenevea
this guy callin me boo as if he'd have a chance in hell
he come near me hes gonna have a hell of a story to tell
he try to hit on me, i spit on him, my saliva somethin he;ll treasure forever
you know it bitch, bodily fluids, he try to see me again for the pleasure
wont wash his face for years now, still savourin the contact
this guy is nasty, no doubt, just look at all the facts
who is he killen? other than my nose with his rank breath
he thinks hes illen in here but he just dont impress
Khris got an identity problem, cant even spell chris yo
..pretty sure he’s emo , he may never know
Oh! ^.^ lol
iight look....
Sup...sorry it took me so long/
but I got lost in this bitchs pussy when I looked in her thong/
all I had was some kush & a bong/
yo shit is so loose you need a bra..for yo pussy lips on/(heh)
you ugly whore get the fuck off your high horse/
fuck seconds this chubby slut askin for five 4ths/
can't get a guy wut the fuck do you lie for?/
sayin you fine is like sayin pussys somethin to die for/
PPPTTT/
like this bitch just queefed/
yea right hoe read a book & fix em bent ass teeth/
you want it wit me? den bitch lets beef/
beat yo ass in front of yo fuckin man cuz his bitch ass weak/
(stop khris thats mean) thats me rhymin hoe/
I'll roll yo fuckin hair in the window & keep drivin (GO!)/
dealin w/ eatin this bitch is like sea divin/
no man alone till he fall in yo pussy then he's an island yo//
[QUOTE=fcukme;7099567]
he try to hit on me, i spit on him, my saliva somethin he;ll treasure forever
you know it bitch, bodily fluids, he try to see me again for the pleasure
wont wash his face for years now, still savourin the contact
this guy is nasty, no doubt, just look at all the facts
/QUOTE]
hellz yea u kno wut I likelmmfao
UPPIN!
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this guy callin me boo as if he'd have a chance in hell
he come near me hes gonna have a hell of a story to tell
There's no real diss or punch here. Good though.
he try to hit on me, i spit on him, my saliva somethin he;ll treasure forever
you know it bitch, bodily fluids, he try to see me again for the pleasure
Lol, I chuckled. For the standards of this battle is was alright..
wont wash his face for years now, still savourin the contact
this guy is nasty, no doubt, just look at all the facts
Nah, no diss really, fake personal.
who is he killen? other than my nose with his rank breath
he thinks hes illen in here but he just dont impress
Got to try to think outside the box.
Khris got an identity problem, cant even spell chris yo
..pretty sure he’s emo , he may never know
Play off his DP? This could've been good, but it fell flat.
vs.
Sup...sorry it took me so long/
but I got lost in this bitchs pussy when I looked in her thong/
Meh, pretty obvious.
all I had was some kush & a bong/
yo shit is so loose you need a bra..for yo pussy lips on/(heh)
Lol, kk, another meh.
you ugly whore get the fuck off your high horse/
fuck seconds this chubby slut askin for five 4ths/
She isn't chubby if i remember correctly.
can't get a guy wut the fuck do you lie for?/
sayin you fine is like sayin pussys somethin to die for/
ehh nahh
PPPTTT/
like this bitch just queefed/
lmao wtf???
yea right hoe read a book & fix em bent ass teeth/
you want it wit me? den bitch lets beef/
beat yo ass in front of yo fuckin man cuz his bitch ass weak/
Old
(stop khris thats mean) thats me rhymin hoe/
I'll roll yo fuckin hair in the window & keep drivin (GO!)/
dealin w/ eatin this bitch is like sea divin/
no man alone till he fall in yo pussy then he's an island yo//
Cool, more of an audio thing but i picutred it in my head.
V/ Second person... his was a little more polished, more multi syllablic and intricate schemes. No-one really had a punch, wordplay or nameplay and both attempted some personals so it really came down to the consistency, multis and for me which the second spitter snagged.
Thanks.
No I'm not chubby i'm hawt. lol
Punches: N/A
BitchSlaps: Khris Killem
Personals: fcukme
Originality: Khris Killem
Structure: fcukme
Multies: Khris Killed em
Comments: Wack battle, both of you need to learn the basics of a setup and punch... Kris Kill em wins this because he came a little harder, but this was a hella weak battle. Khris nice man but you need to fix your structure, that shit is really bad... Keep elevating both of you
Vote: Khris Killem
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..Distinct Advantage..
nice fl0w
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Wack
vs.
WACK
blah at u both anyways since it is a battle and does need a fuckin vote of course im gonna go with killem on this. was more towards dissing even though most of his and YOURS FC was fuckin wack. prop dont accrue to such a degree of weakness in rap but some giggles here and there for fucks sake though/ get battling more and realize that misdirected punches dont bounce round here. both need more personals not false claims of what they would do or be like and what not.
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
there were no real quotables in this battle but i'll list some lines that atleast had a chance to stand out..
who is he killen? other than my nose with his rank breath
he thinks hes illen in here but he just dont impress
vs
you ugly whore get the fuck off your high horse/
fuck seconds this chubby slut askin for five 4ths/
can't get a guy wut the fuck do you lie for?/
sayin you fine is like sayin pussys somethin to die for/
well more consistant lines came from
Vote Khris
we, i'll give it to k only cuz his verse had a harsher tone. you guys should really focus on setting up your punches better.
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This battle sucked, points for trying but you both fell off.
NOTHING
VS
I'll roll yo fuckin hair in the window & keep drivin (GO!)
And thats only cuz it made me smile to imagine that after reading her verse. Lose the / its retarded. And girly try to diss people in a more creative way, the "he wants me" lines are so old the only people laughin are fucking dinosours.
Keep elevating
Vote - Khris killem
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