CHIZZY CHECK 1-2
iight, good evening yall welcome to tha murder scene
You Kno Tha rulez:
16 lines
NO BITING
DICK-RIDIN
OR ANY OTHER KIND OF FUCKIN AROUND OR BULLSHITREY
DROP B4 THE DAYS OVER
good luck fam
Rdot
khris killem
CHIZZY CHECK 1-2
iight, good evening yall welcome to tha murder scene
You Kno Tha rulez:
16 lines
NO BITING
DICK-RIDIN
OR ANY OTHER KIND OF FUCKIN AROUND OR BULLSHITREY
DROP B4 THE DAYS OVER
good luck fam
U textcee errythang that you spittin I'm not hearin it/
u dont mean shit bitch you just...are...Dot...period/
you fake queer your not serious /
dis niggas a delirious lyricist /
furious cuz i speared his bitch /
I'm peerless Bitch /
wutchu kno about experience? /
u hear a click I spit a hollow tip @ where yo beard is bitch/
no fear...you aint scarin khris /
u betta recognize the muthafuckin flo... /
like you hearin piss /
catch him slippin & I'll steal his shit /
bitch i want yo rings,chains,money,wuteva kinda gear dis is /
battle? Bitch you can have it/
u target practice /
Imma black cadilac drunk driver huntin for deer 2 hit//
of course u aint gonna be hearin it, when im writin it ¬_¬
dumb nigga...i can see you gettin excited kid
n i can be a fake queer, but hell i aint da real shit
but u i heard wos sittin on da numba one dick list
- holdin boths nipples pinched
so how u gonna come at me wit the gay jokes
cos i heard ur last hype got a dick up ur throat
n i'ma move off this subject before u move on
cos i aint interested about what floats ur boat son
n drunk, i kinda guessed dat wit the air dat u wrote
i can be bin laden, but styl ur bombs wudnt come close
dis aint khris vs rdot, its us versus britian
n wen its ova, all dem stars will be missin
jheez, i bet dis kids started shittin
but fam i'm bein nice, you cant even accuse me of dissin
drunk driver...huntin a deer you'll be missin
felon?? shit this was murder, really i should go prison
fam...some words mite not rhyme to u but bear in mind a difference of accents
bless
we gta give a greater time window fam...we in two different time zones! lol
tru shit my fault bout dat homie.
UPPIN LIKE A MUHFUCKA DAWG!
v/ khris killem
Multies: khris killem
Punches: khris - even though there weren't many, you're the only one with at least one real buildup and a punch.
Personals: khris killem
"no fear...you aint scarin khris /
u betta recognize the muthafuckin flo... /
like you hearin piss / "
Decent, but you separated the bars mad weird.
vs.
"drunk driver...huntin a deer you'll be missin
felon?? shit this was murder, really i should go prison"
Cheesy as fuck, tbh.
khris killem's verse ed much better and he actually had a buildup to a punch and a punchline in his. RDot, your bars don't always have a close enough amount of syllables to each other for it to correctly.
tru shit good feed back famo.
UPPIN STILL! lets get this shit closed muhfuckaz.
cadaver...safe for the feedback fam
but styl
my is grime g, so its gna sound a bit different in structure n dat
im jus gettin started on ere lol
but 2k, well done star
Kris killem wins. RDot fed off his verse in the first line
kris wins
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