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Osiris
KID L
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checc in and a drop....
these immature rappers must i even have to burp u//
he had to battle this morning cuz he got a strict curfew/
im sorry i cant nurse u... this baby's a premie screamin goo goo's and gah gahs he's probably teething//
listen i'll stop ya breathin like a pause u facin veteran jaws im raw prolly the reason why your L stands for KID LOST/
no need to flip a coin to know he likes his anal tossed//
he's mad cuz im his dad this kid never ever had.. its sad 5 to nothin SIRIS is your first lesson in math/
his jabs are like mosquitos.. kid stay in your sandbox cuz this ring is only built for can's and WINNING u CAN-NOT//
stick to T-ball in your sandlot.. bars? i slam bloccs so hard you'll have to move back to Atlanta/
heard u was born in GEORGIA so wit this one you'll laugh/
u beatin me is just LUDACRIS so BLOW IT OUT YOUR ASS//
Ayyo
Wikipedia says ya alias is the name of the egyptian god of the afterlife
History will repeat itself in the future causin ya death to happen twice
Ya flow is like water from a broken sink,all tapped out and in need of plumbin
My punches is like a wrench to ya dome causin you to screw up and start mumblin
And its nice you chose a name that represent the grave and its dead
Cause i read ya OM's, dead as the rest of the noweight's threads
So Bitch get ya weight up, looks like you've been underfed
Its like a crimescene of the 5-0(Osiris) tryin to take over the Feds(Me)
We have breaking news coming live from RapBattles Battling ring
The lord of the dead was killed again as was predicted,said it was "The Unexplained"
Ahaha the Unexplained of the Deck....King of Aces has done it again
uppin'
Up Up and away bitches....vote
Uppin fo the blind xD
these immature rappers must i even have to burp u//
he had to battle this morning cuz he got a strict curfew/
iight
im sorry i cant nurse u... this baby's a premie screamin goo goo's and gah gahs he's probably teething//
weak
listen i'll stop ya breathin like a pause u facin veteran jaws im raw prolly the reason why your L stands for KID LOST/
no need to flip a coin to know he likes his anal tossed//
nice wordplay,ok
he's mad cuz im his dad this kid never ever had.. its sad 5 to nothin SIRIS is your first lesson in math/
ok
his jabs are like mosquitos.. kid stay in your sandbox cuz this ring is only built for can's and WINNING u CAN-NOT//
weak
stick to T-ball in your sandlot.. bars? i slam bloccs so hard you'll have to move back to Atlanta/
nah
heard u was born in GEORGIA so wit this one you'll laugh/
u beatin me is just LUDACRIS so BLOW IT OUT YOUR ASS//
nah
vs
Wikipedia says ya alias is the name of the egyptian god of the afterlife
History will repeat itself in the future causin ya death to happen twice
weak
Ya flow is like water from a broken sink,all tapped out and in need of plumbin
My punches is like a wrench to ya dome causin you to screw up and start mumblin
iight
And its nice you chose a name that represent the grave and its dead
Cause i read ya OM's, dead as the rest of the noweight's threads
nah
So Bitch get ya weight up, looks like you've been underfed
Its like a crimescene of the 5-0(Osiris) tryin to take over the Feds(Me)
nah
We have breaking news coming live from RapBattles Battling ring
The lord of the dead was killed again as was predicted,said it was "The Unexplained"
nah
l^l Osiris l^l won this battle for having stronger punches and better personals...this was a preety weak battle but im looking foward to seeing more from you guys in the upcomming weeks to see if ya'll elevated..because both of you needed to shorten up your verses and be more creative with your punches....
v./l^l Osiris l^l
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and you spelled Osiris's name wrong in the poll
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vote - Osiris
The opener from O about the kerfew could have been worded differently
to have come across wittier, but the closer was good
Not really any other quotables
Kid L...you should put Kid L in your thread titles...not Da Kid....
I liked your opener...it was pretty good...
After the decent opener it went downhill
The 5-0 feds stuff wasn't a punch and
the closer was really weak...
Too much non creative play on the name
If the rest of the verse would have taken
the same route as the name you may have won this....
well im not really a battler...kinda like in training but oh well..thats what practice is for
osiris opener
vs whackness
weak battle full of whack lines
vote o for not bieng as whack
peep some lll and read up it helps
bitch you're whack .....i'm new to this whole battling thing
3-0 me... uppin.. lets end this...
Osiris-
these immature rappers must i even have to burp u//
he had to battle this morning cuz he got a strict curfew/
haha alright not bad
im sorry i cant nurse u... this baby's a premie screamin goo goo's and gah gahs he's probably teething//
listen i'll stop ya breathin like a pause u facin veteran jaws im raw prolly the reason why your L stands for KID LOST/
not bad, i love your flow with these verses i'm readin, flowin real nice
no need to flip a coin to know he likes his anal tossed//
he's mad cuz im his dad this kid never ever had.. its sad 5 to nothin SIRIS is your first lesson in math/
not feeling this one sorry
his jabs are like mosquitos.. kid stay in your sandbox cuz this ring is only built for can's and WINNING u CAN-NOT//
stick to T-ball in your sandlot.. bars? i slam bloccs so hard you'll have to move back to Atlanta/
ok
heard u was born in GEORGIA so wit this one you'll laugh/
u beatin me is just LUDACRIS so BLOW IT OUT YOUR ASS//
made me laugh, you got some funny lines
vs
Kid-
Wikipedia says ya alias is the name of the egyptian god of the afterlife
History will repeat itself in the future causin ya death to happen twice
it was good until the end...ruined it
Ya flow is like water from a broken sink,all tapped out and in need of plumbin
My punches is like a wrench to ya dome causin you to screw up and start mumblin
no, again good setup and wordplay, weak punch
And its nice you chose a name that represent the grave and its dead
Cause i read ya OM's, dead as the rest of the noweight's threads
tired of the 'weight' punches, they're all dried up
So Bitch get ya weight up, looks like you've been underfed
Its like a crimescene of the 5-0(Osiris) tryin to take over the Feds(Me)
wording was off, not feeling it
We have breaking news coming live from RapBattles Battling ring
The lord of the dead was killed again as was predicted,said it was "The Unexplained"
wtf with the lord of the dead, no
alright kid your battles that you set it up to be unpolled had much better shit than this. wtf were you thinking here? haha no hate but your lines were just plain and simply played here. you started off with some setups and shit but the punches were not hitting. keep battling. osiris you had a decent verse here. again keep working on the wordplay and try to come more directly with the punches. i'll tell you what you really got going for you is your flow, that shit is smooth. and your lines are funny too so if you can elevate some, you'll be coming a lot harder. keep it up
v/Osiris
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