Osiris vs. Vallus

[l^l Osiris l^l]

8barz... or 16lines
u know wat to do..

i'll post shortly

[l^l Osiris l^l]

checc in...

listen..

i admire your valor but in hours u just encountered a juggernaut/
wit lines of boulders to shatter vallus's molars//
tatted your brain wit massive acid rain/
i'll give him a blade... there i helped u slash your veins//
cuz this was suicidal.. dear lyricist i've been lied to/
if u changed your name to metaphor still no one would like u//
despite your futile efforts of elevation and rhyming/
your battlin kobe bryant jumpin over cars and lions//
my punches exerted swift, i just call it a gift//
he's like a bum on a park bench u dont make no sense(cents)??/
foul odors of piss, im foul pourin my piss in the face of val that'll make em really pissed//
smackin him wit these words dont it hurt like a bitch/
faint pussy, he blackens out like the solar eclipse//
now paint pussy, his face turns red thats the menstrual process//
jab straight to his abs he gon wanna PMS/
but dont Private Message Siris tryna get on my Dick//

[l^l Osiris l^l]

uppin waiten for vallus...

[Vallus]

Droppin that sniper flow, killed from afar
...specially when
the best lines you wrote where at the end of ur bars//
Like lack of concepts, my flow is killin this artist
plus, this O couldn't find a scale in the middle of Harlem
Pullin out the axe, choppin up Osiris head to toe &
Guess you could just change my name to SETH for the moment
Good choice of name, you can join him, banned from the land of the livin
and write that dead flow that blows harder than AMON with a vengeance
Those are egyptian gods incase you didn't know your own favorite ish
an they way your flows blown apart, don't see how u wrote ur own alias
Droppin you so hard you'll hit the ground n just burst
Your avatar knows it why right now it frowns @ my verse
Punch into you organs & just crush 'em all, black
No you see why in his pic he's got that blood on his hat...

[l^l Osiris l^l]

uppin.. some votes'll be nice..

[l^l Osiris l^l]

can somebody vote so we can get rid of this thread...??

[Wine-O]

Osiris-
i admire your valor but in hours u just encountered a juggernaut/
wit lines of boulders to shatter vallus's molars//
...liked the flow of this one...
tatted your brain wit massive acid rain/
i'll give him a blade... there i helped u slash your veins//
..made me laugh, ok punch...
cuz this was suicidal.. dear lyricist i've been lied to/
if u changed your name to metaphor still no one would like u//
...weak...
despite your futile efforts of elevation and rhyming/
your battlin kobe bryant jumpin over cars and lions//
...not feeling this one...
my punches exerted swift, i just call it a gift//
he's like a bum on a park bench u dont make no sense(cents)??/
...nice...but instead just type cents, dont even put sense...we'll understand it...
foul odors of piss, im foul pourin my piss in the face of val that'll make em really pissed//
smackin him wit these words dont it hurt like a bitch/
...ok...
faint pussy, he blackens out like the solar eclipse//
now paint pussy, his face turns red thats the menstrual process//
...meh...
jab straight to his abs he gon wanna PMS/
but dont Private Message Siris tryna get on my Dick//
...lol nice closer...

vs.

Vallus-
Droppin that sniper flow, killed from afar
...specially when
the best lines you wrote where at the end of ur bars//
...decent opener, seen this concept before a lot...
Like lack of concepts, my flow is killin this artist
plus, this O couldn't find a scale in the middle of Harlem
...weak...
Pullin out the axe, choppin up Osiris head to toe &
Guess you could just change my name to SETH for the moment
...nah, played...
Good choice of name, you can join him, banned from the land of the livin
and write that dead flow that blows harder than AMON with a vengeance
...meh ok i guess...
Those are egyptian gods incase you didn't know your own favorite ish
an they way your flows blown apart, don't see how u wrote ur own alias
...nah...
Droppin you so hard you'll hit the ground n just burst
Your avatar knows it why right now it frowns @ my verse
...you just dissed yourself you fool...
Punch into you organs & just crush 'em all, black
No you see why in his pic he's got that blood on his hat...
...weak...

alright not the best i've seen from you vallus but you did have a couple good bars except osiris came harder. val you're bars just seemed played and forced here and no hate but i know you'll rebound. osiris you had some decent bars here and i noticed you were trying to go for a little wordplay but try to get more creative with it, it adds to the wit and sting of the punch. throw in some misdirection and it'll come off less statement-ish. same to you val come less with the statements and your shit will hit harder. keep it up though guys. osiris takes this one...

v/Osiris

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

osiris wins