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Thread: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

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    Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    10 lines

    due 5:30 pm his time which im guessing is est

    normal rules

    im guessing he'll check l8tr since he's tipsy
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    check
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    damn i was fucked up... i don't even remember this... lol... you got a punch or 2... check sir... good luck...

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    this is my lil brother account yo ima need an extension

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    lol... ok...

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
    He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
    But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
    I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
    Ink's left such a weak impression...
    He'd even be impossible to track in mud
    Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
    Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
    Is your name location in your sig
    Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
    Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
    Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
    When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
    nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
    when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
    you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
    you dont mind suckin ABL dick
    cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
    when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
    now your like daniel in the lions den.....
    .........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
    andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
    ....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    arch... verses 1,3,5 i liked, 4 was wack, and 2 was ok
    MI 1,2,3 i liked 4 had a bad rhyme 5 was just ok
    so this is pretty even for me, but looking at the three connects i see
    arch came out the clever one, and MI punches had more snap
    and this being a battle ill go with the harder punches

    V/MI
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Arch-
    Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
    He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
    But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
    ...haha loved this, nice wordplay, damn son......
    I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
    Ink's left such a weak impression...
    He'd even be impossible to track in mud
    ...nice flip again...and a nice personal and punch...
    Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
    Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
    Is your name location in your sig
    ...meh ok, seen this concept a lot but i liked the way you flipped it....
    Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
    Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
    ...good wordplay, pretty good punch....
    Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
    When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
    ...ok closer....

    Monster's Ink-
    niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
    nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
    when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
    ...pretty good opener, a little stretched though....
    you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
    you dont mind suckin ABL dick
    cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
    ...this was just ok for me, but i understand what you're saying here....
    when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
    now your like daniel in the lions den.....
    .........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
    ...good wordplay, ok punch....
    andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
    ....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
    ...ok closer...

    alright Arch i really liked this verse, you had great concepts, flips and personals. your punches were hitting hard. the only weak link was your last bar, it was just ok. but a very solid verse here bro. Monster i liked what you had to offer as well but i think some of your wording was a little off and it took away from the sting of your punches. you had good flips and concepts but they just werent hitting as hard as archs were in this battle. keep it up though man. good battle here guys.
    v/Arch

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
    He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
    But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
    okish, wording wasn't good and it was kinda predictable but not bad
    I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
    Ink's left such a weak impression...
    He'd even be impossible to track in mud
    Wording again, cool/kinda old concept.
    Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
    Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
    Is your name location in your sig
    This felt a bit simple and lacked actual wit.
    Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
    Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
    nah, weaksauce.
    Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
    When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
    nah

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    niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
    nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
    when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
    is all this one bar?? If so, wheres the punch?
    you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
    you dont mind suckin ABL dick
    cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
    nah
    when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
    now your like daniel in the lions den.....
    .........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
    nope
    andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
    ....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
    nope

    This was a dissapointing battle, I expected more from the guy who calls himself monsters ink and copy's and paste other peoples sigs. Your lines were super stretched and none of your punches connected, your wording was terrible and you lacked real wit.. I didn't see a concept that I liked atleast which is really bad. Arch, you haven't done this in a while and the rust showed bad man, the concepts where there and some where nice but your wording got worst.. I doubt you would go for the "i didn't try" excuse here man. Your wording made some of your lines seem forced and predictable, not a completely bad verse, but get back into the mode of things for when me and you battle fam.

    v/Arch.
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    I'll post my vote ones I reach 100 posts if this is still open by then.
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
    He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
    But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
    lol, nice
    I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
    Ink's left such a weak impression...
    He'd even be impossible to track in mud
    decent
    Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
    Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
    Is your name location in your sig
    cool
    Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
    Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
    didn't like the wording
    Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
    When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
    User title flips are old


    niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
    nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
    when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
    stretched and the punch was lacking
    you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
    you dont mind suckin ABL dick
    cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
    cool personal, but it could have been more effective with a better set up
    when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
    now your like daniel in the lions den.....
    .........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
    cool

    andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
    ....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
    lol wow, this was corny as fuck


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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    lol uppin ive learned that i've gotta be more original

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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Quote Originally Posted by luckily77777 View Post
    arch... verses 1,3,5 i liked, 4 was wack, and 2 was ok
    MI 1,2,3 i liked 4 had a bad rhyme 5 was just ok
    so this is pretty even for me, but looking at the three connects i see
    arch came out the clever one, and MI punches had more snap
    and this being a battle ill go with the harder punches

    V/MI
    This isn't a valid vote Luckily, stop being lazy.
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    Re: Monster's ink vs The Archetype

    Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
    He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
    But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
    ok
    I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
    Ink's left such a weak impression...
    He'd even be impossible to track in mud
    good
    Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
    Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
    Is your name location in your sig
    nah
    Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
    Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
    nah
    Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
    When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
    lol ok

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    niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
    nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
    when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
    naht stretched
    you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
    you dont mind suckin ABL dick
    cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
    lol ok
    when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
    now your like daniel in the lions den.....
    .........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
    ok
    andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
    ....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
    nah

    v./Monster Ink for kinda matching up wit arch when it came to punches but stealing the win with that daniel in the lions den line

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