Eyes of A Psychopath

[LoSt SaNitY]

Now I've tried living straight, like a good citizen
But I can't settle down, keep living in sin
The far away places, keep calling you see
Calling the outlaw, that resides in me

So like the blind fool, that we all sometimes are
I loaded my pistol and stole me a car
Sat out on that long road, with these thoughts in my mind
Good whiskey, good drugs, wild women so fine

3 in the morning, found me a young slummy
Made my move, she tried to run from me
Stalked my prey, the 45 I hold is drawn
Mental state dismayed, my soul is gone

Chased her down, was a nun, to a church step
Raised her gown, then she squirt gun to neck
Wasn't rape, surprise sex, got done who's next
Eyes she scraped, knocked off my specs

Now it's life in the fast lane, with no turning back
Too late I realize, the deck has been stacked
With the law close behind me, I'll soon have to pay
I may die tomorrow, but I'll do it my way

Should you visit my grave, on some cold stormy day
You'll remember I lived, I loved and I paid
You may read on my tomb-stone, some win and some lose
and some just get them lowdown outlaw blues

[+h3_B|@ck_+enchu]

3 in the morning, found me a young slummy
Made my move, she tried to run from me
Stalked my prey, the 45 I hold is drawn
Mental state dismayed, my soul is gone


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[LoSt SaNitY]

thanks bro upping^

[Kazper™]

I'll edit this with decent feed back once you actually drop your links in the two peices u put in one day wich is also against the rules.. On that note. Read the fucking rules.

And heres one link for you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nk-399845.html
leave feed on that

[Issue]

I'll edit this with decent feed back once you actually drop your links in the two peices u put in one day wich is also against the rules.. On that note. Read the fucking rules.

And heres one link for you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nk-399845.html
leave feed on that

Yeah, offend him & pretend to be something here because you have more posts & then get him to feed on yours.... Great logic!



- This piece was actually poetic believe it or not. Maybe it was the stanza's set out or how each line progressed little. It was actually like a Johnny Cash song if you replaced rape with Murder & called it "Some Win Some Lose" instead of what you called it haha.

"I'll edit this with decent feed when you get your links..." bla,

Drop some feed on a few other OMs man, you probably know the FUCKING RULES, and thus know you have 24 hours to post them. Good luck.

[+h3_B|@ck_+enchu]

i also meant to tell you that the killin itself could've had more detail....but my cheif kicked me off b4 i could say.....but yea....next time just a lil more details on the murder.....i gotta work on my details too.

[Cody Nash]

no links. read the rules. CLOSED.