I FEEL LIKE DYING (KING VERSE beat by Lil Wayne)

[Well Versed]

I FEEL LIKE DYING (KING VERSE)


I feel like dying (2x)

help me lord cuz i cant stop cryin, i feel like dying, i feel like dying...

i feel like...i feel like..., i feel like..., i feel like dying...

(chorus)

(KING)

i feel like dyin n nah that aint no dam joke
its like my worst nightmare walkin thru tha gun smoke
we were all just chillin i was popin pillz why they all toak
n we were rokin black pants n black hoodies cuz we all lok
trappin on tha corner everyday sellin that pure coke
n hustlin everyone we know cuz we never wanna go broke
next thang u know this car is speedin with a guys head poke
holdin on to some toolz we hit tha ground like we all had a dam stroke
we was all tryin regroup but some of my homies never even spoke
hidin behind some carz with both my gunz drawn tryin to cover fire for my folk
my partna got hit in tha chest n now it looks just like he took a soak
n hes layin half dead on tha ground blood gushin so much that he choke
my other homie was bustin shotz behind tha wall n then he went broke
so i shot out tha dam windowz tryin to kill this dam bloke
tha car sped off burnin tires n all i cud see in tha sky was gun smoke
n i saw death commin for my friendz flyin round in an all black cloak
rushin to my homies we all messed up n lookin just like some egg yoak
n i was prayin to tha lord for his help but my homie never fukin woke
im just layin here cryin in tha street just tryin to help my dam folk
blood all over tha street n soulz leavin as i watched my homies dam croak
funeral arrangements being made no open casketz cuz of how they shot my folk
n now im cryin over stone pillarz as all my best friendz are layin down in oak

(chorus)

this is a real story...no joke i cried alot writing this...get at me family!!!

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yo leave me REAL feed or fuk off...

[Death's Last Breath]

One thing, never do a Wayne track. Anyways, I might have fucked up the reading but the flow was off to me a little bit in parts. The imagination wasn't really in this a lot but I might have read it wrong like I said. I need to re-read it over before I can give a full analysis but I think it'd be good if I re-read it. Just did and it was pretty okish. I just never feel anything to that Wanye shit so IDK.

[Well Versed]

lol thats kewl mayn...this is just some short bullshyt i wrote...no biggie homie...u know tha beat?!...same shyt...i re-wrote tha chours a lil tho...