Speedin Flow(idea from young dro!!!)

[Well Versed]

Speedin freestyle

yeah homie im insane i got my super mayn ridi
n a dam bad bitch with a super gurl bodi
when u chillin with a G its like a first class flighti
n jumpin outta my ride is like commitin suicidi
yall know me as tha KING n that i move alot of whiti
n all ya haterz wanna hate cuz my wrist is all whiti
yall lames see thru somethin like a dam nighti
n fuk u lames go left bitch cuz imma go righti
i watch em lames try n trap n they get all deniedi
n i only ride spaceships so i always get glidi
these lames keep lookin think we gon to collidi
n we can do it anywhere they can die outsidi
well if u wanna start somethin then i got me a lighti
that'll have u seen starz quick somethin like tha nighti
those two pieces of metal with tha dam gold all whiti
n they go round my waste just like a dam tighti whiti
n when i pull em on out u better just say good nighti
cuz this ur last day if u even try n fighti
ill make em bullets fit ur legs just like a tighti
n ur loosin lots of blood i dont think ull last tha nighti
once ur dead then its time to play go hide tha bodi
leave u in a dark place then go n take a flighti
yeah im goin outta tha country mayb over to tha whiti
where coke fallz from tha sky n tha hoes like lidi lodi
call em all tool time cuz they lookin like hiedi
n they want tha jack hammer n we go all nighti
mayn those lil blue pillz got us feelin so righti
n these gurlz so freaky n they get all biti
i open all tha hoes up n do it all widi
cuz i gotta big dick n they want it all insidi
they all love a KING n they all want a ridi
n they wanna marry me but i dont want no bridi
but enough bout hoes my green is all dam lighti
n i got kryptonite rokz n that shyt is so brighti
n u know im from texas i keep purple in my spriti
n i dont know how to act so im not that politi
im from tha D town yeah thats where i residi
that gutta west side yeah thats my sidi
i always stayed true to tha hood no i never ever liedi
n i always did my best i have always had my pridi
i cook drugs in tha kitchen n they get all fridi
dam my trap bommin like its going worldwidi
mayn i got what yall need so yeah i can providi
n i got a PHD in drugs so just let me be ya guidi
this aint gotham city but they callin me dark knighti
n they all think crazy bitch then dont be igniti
im sendin out a message if yall want tha inviti
just get in tha way n ill get ya with a dam sighti
hit em 4 or 5 times big holes in their bodi
go n pray if u want but hes not gon be alrighti
i got stupid pirate swagg n i fly high like a kiti
with super duper flow n now i got em all reciti
yeah this shyt turnin on just like a dam lighti
n they try n swagger jack me but its all copy righti
but i aint suein shyt i rather end ur dam nighti
with tha big weapons on me ur soul goin on a flighti
i cant help it im scary n i got em all frighti
n ill make em all bow to me n its just so righti
cuz they know im royal n tha lames all deidi
n im not trick daddy but i like to slip n slidi
with bombs in tha trunk gonna light up tha nighti
just remember i got hella flow n im still just a whiti

yeah im whyte n i got more flow then a mother fukin hurricane!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAA! yo drop em commentz...n get at ya family!!!

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[Cody Nash]

this was terrible. straight off. no hate dude. you want my honest feedback though, then you've got it. this was like a failed attempt at gangster audio rap.. and it REALLY didn't flow that well. you used FAKE fuckin words to write the piece, suicidi? whiti? what the fuck dude.. it's weak as hell and the only thing those words tell us is that you can't seem to write a piece creative enough to contain SMART and meaningful content. if you're getting your ideas from "Young Dro" "Mistah FAB" "Lil Boosie" "Souljah Boy" and shit like that, then that explains why you're writing in such a shitty manner.. lyrically, the people I just listed and everyone like them, are NOTHING.. they can't write dope lyrics, the only thing they can do is hold a beat.. what makes them is their beats.. and since you're NOT spitting over a beat and you're only writing, it makes this piece wack/terrible.. end of story.. no hate dude, none at all.. I'm just being real with you, and it you take this as hate you're a fucking idiot.. if you take it as critique.. you'll grow from it.


- Cry

[Black Hornet]

i disagree with cry, i think this had some potential and i like your creativity when it came to makingup words. The topic was plaed out and your flow was so-so, but overall i think you ma be able to drop something worthwhile if you practise a lil more. plaed out rhme scheme though, change it up cus this was like reading the back of a cereal box 10 times over.
"mayn i got what yall need so yeah i can providi
n i got a PHD in drugs so just let me be ya guidi"

prolly your best bar. anyhow keep trying.

[Cody Nash]

that's not a good bar. so saying it's his best really says nothing.


noobs riding noobs dicks.

[Cody Nash]

double post, fuck duh haters.

[+h3_B|@ck_+enchu]

lmao....i hate this....ONE...cuz im from ATLANTA and Young Dro would never inspire anyone to do this....

the words he use also make sense.....not like yours......it flowed but it sucked....

[Well Versed]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...thanx for tha feed guyz...yeah this rele isnt even close to my best...but i know alot of pplz who liked it...of course i grow more evryday...u will see that my postingz are random...becuz most of this is old...since i joined this site i have NOT dropped anything new i have written to date...i am still posting my drops from like 6 months ago...THANK U ALL once again for your feed...by tha way...i drop these evryday...DO NOT JUST JUDGE ME ON THIS ONE ALONE...make no mistake i drop hitz...keep it pimpin'