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    Junkie Tales

    For me there's no turning back // No telling what my life is valued at
    Too many mushroom caps // Perhaps Ill collapse before I relapse
    Soaking L's in the wiggle fluid // Though my mind swells I still do it
    Floating high in the clouds I'm cupid // Fucking in crowds like a druid
    Mixing wet with meth is what I make // Reek of death in every breath I take The brains shaking like the Quake // That hit California State in '88
    Floating The Star Gate // Fuck love drugs is my heart ache
    Bottle after bottle // Till I'm nothing like a super model
    Speeding full throttle // Fuck being on my lean I waddle
    Through the alley ways // A junkie staying blazed for days
    Momma said its just a phase // Sorry its a craze that I praise
    Kill for the tabs of acid // Got more bodies then the croc from placid
    Inside is a beast that's rabid // Gotta keep the peace support the habit
    Travel down this road its lonely and cold // Happy when I unravel dope sold
    When the bell tolls evil controls // The fiber of my soul is dirtier then the Dead Sea Scrolls // This is the world through the eyes of an addict
    Realize I take dipped trips in my attic // Call BBC this shit is dramatic
    Playing roulette with an automatic // Brainwaves only pick up static
    Like out dated televisions with shitty transmissions // Reproductive cell divisions needing revisions // Electron collisions cause extreme living conditions


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    Re: Junkie Tales

    dam mayn that was kewl...i enjoyed this read...hooked me fast...like ur wordin n ur imagery alot...ya metaphorz were weak at places but w/e...flow was good too like how u set this one up...anyway...good flow...good conceptz...good vocab n shyt...good imagery n shyt...ok metaphorz n shyt...all n all GOOD READ HOMIE!!! KEEP ON WRITING THAT HOOD SHYT!!!

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