alright so I havn't written anything in a quite a while, let alone visited the site in a couple months. I'm hoping to get back into it and start writing more. I'll probably be droppin by the cypher section to keep my mind going. This is a little piece I started on a while ago and finally finished. It's pretty short but I felt it was finished and worth posting up. lemme know what you think
Creepin through the forest with swiftness like a lions claw
seekin out the fortress where this clique is hidin out
we're not reppin guns, we use our bodies as a weapon son
with mutated genes, best believe we'll be gettin some
the setting sun is a sign that attack is eminent
leavin scenes with holes in the backs of residents
reddish tints adorn the surrounding oak trees
hesitant, but sworn to hunt down my enemies
evidence torched with a match igniting these,
peasants, scorched in a blaze of light and heat
At night these streets are the devil's playground
Been fightin these freaks for several days now.
with savage actions we'll ravage your faction
average men can't even imagine our passion
or fathom disasterous events in the blackness
havin your back split will leave you in traction
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